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Faiza

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awww you've got kripa like a fat person; lol well thats a problem todya as well the chldren with increasing weight or some weight obsesses people with anorexic, oh well. aww but I feel sorry for her; its not the figure or face that counts it s the heart; lovely part sukhi

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

cute part. cant wait 4 u to cont!

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

that was a very interesting part..absolutely coollll...i liked it very much.... 👏 please do continue soon..😊

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megha sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

fab start

really felt bad for kripa

cont soon

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Kaj!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

omg! how shallow can these 3 a**holes get?!!! u wrote this part really well sukhi. uve managed to make me dislike them already lol. i feel for kripa. ahh i still dont understand y being skinny is seen as sexy to some people😕
anyways...
when am i updating my ff? ahem erm...i need to scratch my brain cells a bit. i know what i wanna write next in the next few parts, its just constructing it thats bugging me. ahh i'll get there eventually n let u know😆
hey, cud u pm me whenever u update this fan fic plz, if u dont mind😉

kaju😛

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Wonderful Part Sukhi

Poor Kripa

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eternal

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: stars_shine*
gr8 part
continue soon

and cud u plzz PM me if u dont mind, thnx

thanx so much dear im glad you liked it😳 and no problem i'll pm you😛

Originally posted by: imdudehead
thankyou for the pm!!!
It was a wonderful part...buh a lil short...

Kripa's parents (especially her dad) seem to judge tehre daughter with her apearance!! I feeel bad fofr her. But I guess that is realistic...SOme parents who have overweight children, ignore tehre weight problems and the children gain more weight!! and possibly have health problems or get made fun of!!

Some parents like Kripa's Make it a bigger problem than it really is and make there childrens self-esteem lower!!

Both ways i guess are wrong!

Anyways Continue Soon, and please pm me when you do continue!!

no problem dear glad i could help...yeap my first parts are usually short but they get too long later on😆

yeap well when a couple tends to have an overweight child, they tend to pass constant rude remarks as means to give them the confidence to loose weight rather it brings down their self esteem and has a negative impact on their lives. i will and thank you so much once again dear😳

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
poor kripa got hurt

thanx so much! yes well because Kripa is not seen as a "normal" person she will constantly be brought down by those around her until she decides to take action😳

Originally posted by: prabhi

great part!!! 👏

omg i can't believe their SO RUDE!! 😡

i feel bad 4 kripa. i've seen boys say sh*t like tht to other girls.

ppl like tht think their so kool. !!

..i hope angad gets a shock of his life when kripa comes looking good.!😊

..this story is good.. plz continue with the character sketch soon.. followed by a second part!!👏😛😃

thanx so much prabhi, i agree this is just a little glance at the lives of those who deal with it every day of their life....i agree people say stuff about another to bring their self esteem up and others down....hmm you'll have to wait for that....will do and thanx again dear😳

Originally posted by: superstar15
awesome part but
that was sad what

angad did to kripa

i hope everything changes

for her soon.

Love Ya Rhea🤗

thanx so much rhea, well we'll have to wait for that one😊

Originally posted by: sweet honey
awesome part....poor kripa feel soo sorry 4 her😭...cnt belive the boys😡.....kripas father aint helping at all.....plz cont soon

thanx so much dear, i agree the boys have no shame in respecting every other person, its about time they learn to respect another...and suryaban isnt like most fathers who would support their child

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13
great part
i feel so sorry for kripa

i think that's just wrong to make fun of the person like that

cont.....soon cant wait for the next part

thanx so much for the comment dear, i agree its not right but some people will have to learn the hard way...thanx again and will post a part later today😳

Originally posted by: twinkle94
hey i luv tha FF n tha concept is rely good poor Kripa it remindes me of my self b4! lolz! do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

thanx so much twinkle, awww hopefully its not causing you any pain - i just want for others to see everyone equal😳

Originally posted by: sabzz
AMAzingGGGgggg Parttt...

love the cOnceptt and this part...!!

great job !!!

continue soon...!

thanx so much sabzz, im glad you liked the part and the concept😳 will do and thanx again😳

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan
alright....so i thought she was going to be anorexic....but she's overweight....and i can't believe angad and his 'gang' find that a topic to laugh at.....that is disgustingly wrong!
just hope they change soon ...
feel really bad for Kripa...
Continue soon
Great part!

yeap yeap it was a nice guess but there have been a few ffs on that already so i decided to portray a different concept of a character😳 it is disgustingly wrong - all people are equal but some fail to accept that; will do and thanx so much katie😳

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*
awww you've got kripa like a fat person; lol well thats a problem todya as well the chldren with increasing weight or some weight obsesses people with anorexic, oh well. aww but I feel sorry for her; its not the figure or face that counts it s the heart; lovely part sukhi

yeap yeap Kripa will be portraying an overweight person in this ff; yeap along with increases in obesity there is a strong increase in anorexia, in which both sides of the people have a low self esteem whether it be by them or those around them....i agree but some dont want to accept that...thanx so much faiza😳

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
cute part. cant wait 4 u to cont!

thanx so much dear for the comment😳

Originally posted by: deeya123
fab start
really felt bad for kripa

cont soon

thanx so much deeya for the comment, like most we do feel bad for kripa but because of certain incidents she will overcome as a strong person from the inside and out😉😳

Originally posted by: Kaj!
omg! how shallow can these 3 a**holes get?!!! u wrote this part really well sukhi. uve managed to make me dislike them already lol. i feel for kripa. ahh i still dont understand y being skinny is seen as sexy to some people😕
anyways...
when am i updating my ff? ahem erm...i need to scratch my brain cells a bit. i know what i wanna write next in the next few parts, its just constructing it thats bugging me. ahh i'll get there eventually n let u know😆
hey, cud u pm me whenever u update this fan fic plz, if u dont mind😉

kaju😛

kaju if you thought that was bad you should see the upcoming parts😭...thank you so much im glad you liked it...well youll hate them much more by the time i write five more parts oh dont worry you will realize that in the upcoming parts😳...aww yesh that is the question aww shucks okies lol im waiting so update soon...sure no problem and thanx so much dear for the comment😳

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Wonderful Part Sukhi

Poor Kripa

thanx so much di - glad you liked it😳

thank you everyone for the wonderful comments, i was not expecting such a huge reply and that all of you would enjoy reading this ff so thank you so much...i will post the character intro and a second part later today😳

as always

sukhi :)

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago