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woooooow boy is aramn desperate lol

another one by u kat. gr8!!!!!!!!!!!these were some good parts. i loved it. gr8 concept. continue soon!!!!!!!!!

i luvvvv all ur ffs n i jus noticed u r writing so mny more...plz infrm me whenevr u update or start a new ff....i n luving ths...

absolutely amazing, im suprised as to da different concepts u come up wid, jus shows how talented u r. excellent intro n great parts plzz do continue soon

amazign part sweety loved the whole concept sooooooooo amazing

yay that was a quick update!!! Keep it up LOL omg what a brilliant part god kat di ur gonna make me hate armaan so much he's is such a... I don't wanna say the word it'll probably get me banned but he is omg the way he was like trying to burn holes thru ridz with his eyes or something and how he was treating that servant ramu oh man... But I luvd the fact that u didnt make ridz hate him fear him yes but if she hated him then it would b so much more complicated and aww she's gonna try to give him love omg this is gonna b soo sweet n cute in some weird n twisted way if he tried to sleep with her sometime soon cuz of that but anyways very good part luvd it!! Just can't get enuf of ur stories:D

Luv Richa

loved this part👏!

i read the first 2 parts today n i must say, uve done a fantastic job. very well described. hopefully she can turn this beast into a man

i reed da 1st 2 parts!!!!
dey wer brilliant!!!
sumhow dis remimds me ov beauti n da beast!!!
lol
i luv dis new arman!!
cant wait 4 da nxt part
tc aisha
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