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dat was a tremendous prt.. poor ridz...

reserved!!! love the concept!!! great part!

hey yar i have read almost all of ur ffs they amazing marvelous lovely but this one is just BREATH TAKING LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV IT .i can't wait for u to continue awsome idea and i just lov ur writing skill this is tooooooooooooooooo GOOD .well i don't have much words to explane my impatience and likness to u .i am feeling pity for poor ridz even thinking of it making me scared what would happened to her plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon

amzing... catches ur breath!! loved it... plz do continue

Originally posted by: komal1

hey yar i have read almost all of ur ffs they amazing marvelous lovely but this one is just BREATH TAKING LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV IT .i can't wait for u to continue awsome idea and i just lov ur writing skill this is tooooooooooooooooo GOOD .well i don't have much words to explane my impatience and likness to u .i am feeling pity for poor ridz even thinking of it making me scared what would happened to her plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon

lov u , and take care

komal

Part 2 is up!

reserved....yay me first!!!

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oki here i go....i read it right the same moment but was too sleepy to post a reply, but later than never.....

great part kat....so u gona make love her weapon....well the only thing she probabaly still has n he doesnt....lolzzzzz......o man i wonder if she really can stand up to this giuy.....absolutely a crass personality as of now....but guess its in the name armaan that u still seem to like him lolzzzz.....well not like him i guess but its like u know he will be good in no time so u take even his bad side as his threshold to being good!!!nywaz....weaving the plot great!!!love it as alwaz!!👏

Originally posted by: jia..

Hellooo....okie part 1 up.....found myself falling in love with it all over again....going great guns really....😎 Hats off to you!!