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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

LOL guys ....see my stuff on the other hard drive of the broken laptop and i get the new one next week and the memory stick not transfering the ff to the other ones properly .... hence no updates to the other one!!😭...plus im bored! and need to write hehe

LOL JIA fault i posted this was not going to lol but she like u have to post this..... It's good to have a friends like Kuku and Jia... to help with editing😳... KUKU busy with family wedding and i think Jia done a fab job with helpin me with the concept! Since it her first time🤗...but warning guys she not read this all ...so even she does not know what going to happen...

Again thank u all

I post the first part in 20 mins

Love Kat

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

hey Kat sos im a tad late with a comment for the intro but im so glad you have started another

mindblowing intro, Armaan in a new avatar!! can not wait to find out what Ridz will turn out to be!!

judging by your title - the ff i think is going to be crazy!!

cant wait to read the first part

Sania

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: spln
reserved.....finally um not too late for once!!!

*edit*

awww m an now u got us a ruthless mr malik....to be honest i like this new avtaar....cant wait to see the ridzi herte....wonder if shes a sweetheart darling girl or not????guess she might be if shes the apple of her dads eye....but wont it be fun if she turned ruthless to give it back to him???lolzzzzzzz oki no....i let u handle the plot ur best at it...n jia do the editing!!!

thanx for the new one kat....we owe u alot for keeping us glued!!!!👏👏👏

too tell u the truth i have missed u NJ this past couple of days!!

Update in the next few mins

Love Kat😳

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva
hey Kat sos im a tad late with a comment for the intro but im so glad you have started another

mindblowing intro, Armaan in a new avatar!! can not wait to find out what Ridz will turn out to be!!

judging by your title - the ff i think is going to be crazy!!

cant wait to read the first part

Sania

LOL late nahi yaar give me few mins i add part one rid intro

Love Kat😳

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@R1U2K3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

OMG...thats a fantastic start...
i would definitely love to read further..please continue soon*
Rukz

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Kat ...

I absolutely love the way you write...and you love writing as well...and hence you provide us readers with beautiful FF's and interesting concepts...Never decide on not posting an FF--you write wonderfully and we all love it...so always post..lol..

Thanks Jia, for getting Kat to post this other wise we would have missed out! 😊

Looking forwrd to the first part!😃

Love, Anita

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hearme21

@hearme21

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Wow, great start. I love Armaan's bad boy image. Its kinda like Richard Gere in Pretty Woman except this ones more sadistic as he preys on young women as well. Well I guess Ridzi is gonna be the one to shake him up. Poor Shashank, cant imagine an old man having to sit there hearing this about his daughter.
Looking forward to the next update!