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another amazing part.. cant wait till the next part.. continue soon

aha!!! we r getting a new part...Waiting...!😳

gr8 part kat,,,

@NJ awww u miss that AVi when she got the intern of the month for the first time and he like wishes her LMAO....

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yay me first....n though i had to count more than 15 times 60...the update made up for it...great action kat...fast n furious!!!!!wonder what i shud expect at the wedding...nothing too nice um certain....but i hope armaan handles it if do as per the claim of this part make him accompany her, who knows u may find a good enuf excuse for him to not go!!!!newaz....plotting to he queen as alwaz....me gona hit the bed now...great job!!!!!!!!!

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Hi Kat,

This part was a roller coaster ride, her thinking about he changes in him & him, despite not believing in God, has a shrine & doesn't tell her not to worship it.

The sari, I can imagine, black would make Ridz looks lovely, as Rahul said it, gorgeous.....I felt bad for Ridz cos people started talking ill about her, but Arman came to her rescue, so sweet....& the dance was amazing, slowly Arman has started falling for Ridz & she on the other hand, believes that he is the only 1 for her.

That slimy Rahul pulled such a fast one on Ridz & knowing her, he knew she will fall for that, but good Arman came & saved her again, he truly felt bad for her & cursed himself for putting her into this situation, such a nice fellow, & then the last line 'cross your heart' was the BEST, it just shows how much Arman has changed.

Do continue & take care

WOW that was an awesome part.........i just loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much

that was a double...oopz!!!!!!!

OMG that Rahul!!😡😡😡

really a nice one so sweet