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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: spln
lolzzz he smacked her for calling him sir...n she smacked him back lolzzzz....so muski the witch here oki....trust u to try concepts unknown to us mere mortals all the time kat....great part.....

lol mortals 😆😆...im running out of concept and this is JIA fault lmao i was not goin to post this at all

Love Kat

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#192

Hawww my fault......well i am sure people will love me for this "fault" 😆😆 rite Nsm???

Great update lady......left me in awe....it was just so amazing.....and loved that entire kitchen scene....it was enchanting all over again....loving this way too much.....😳

Ok this line....She need to be a little more normal and her formality and reserve ness was getting boring he sighed. She need to stand up for herself in this world I am going to have to teach her that!…. seeing her coming out of the kitchen carrying the dishes.. he looked at her setting the table and headed towards her…

Loved that statement...him teaching her.....wow...making me way too impatient.....can hardly wait for next...

Love u
Great update...or rather outstanding one...
Jia

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nuts123

@nuts123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#193

sorry for the late reply kat, anyways a really cute part, i love the bond b/w AR, finally it's deveoping, Aw, the last scene was cute when he slapped her...lol... will be eagerly waitig 4 2mrwz update

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shriya

@shriya12

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#194

hey i m always checkin ths forum to c whetheru hv written any new ff n i was soooooooooo happy to c ur new additns...but puhleez infrm me nxt time u update or start a new ff...plssss i lurvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur ffs....

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deepali

@deepali.patel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#195

awwwwwwwwwwww so amazing can't wait to see the next part plzzzzzzzz continue soon

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#196

Wow!!! Another mindblowing part!!! OMG I looooved the way Armaan defended her in the office...It was really sweet...Hmm..the secretary is under the influence of a little green monster called jealousy...LMAO..the smacking game was hilarious!!! Lolzz...I loved this part!!! Gr8 to see them interacting more and getting to know each other...Do continue soon!!

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#197

i like tis part a lot..terz a feel of security n protection blended wit comfort n acceptance...by both!!!

tey r bth growin on me!! i feel d beats risin...cuz i koe 1 such day ter emotions r gonna be voiced n tey r bth gonna be surprised at temselvez.!!

grt update!! :D

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#198

Fab parts darling!!!

Yay, Armaan is startin to feel for Ridzi!!

Hehe, slapping buttocks eh?, at least thats the start! 😆

-Natasha

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#199

cheers guys

Give me 15 mins

Love kat

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#200

make sure that 15mins is exactly 15 times 60 seconds n nothing more....granted u that much, n gladly so.....but no extensions please!!!😆

ps: kat i loved ur signature avi from before the armaan in pink n ridhima in green one....can u get back up pretty please????or did u def decide to abandon it for now 😭

Edited by spln - 17 years ago