FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

i loved the last three parts.

dharam and sia moments, dv moments when they were talking about ananya, and lastly, dharam and nivi's part.

overall they were really brilliant updates. keep writing.


Thanx a lot kiran.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Part 9

Dharam is going to meet his frnd,kamal on his horse.Kamal is the king of Sumaina and a very good frnd of dharam.
Dharam was thinking abt all his meetings with sia,her smile,her eyes.
Suddenly he lost balance and fell frm his horse.
He said to himself,"ghoda chalate waqt apna dhyaan kahi aur lagaoge to aisa hi hoga."
He got up,sat on his horse and rode away.After some time again he started thinking of sia.
Again he fell down but this time inside a large deep ditch.He tried to get out but couldn't.He used many ways but failed.
Suddenly he found someone throwing a rope inside the ditch.
"Rassi ko pakdo aur upar aane ki koshish karo."
When dharam looked up,he was shocked to see veer standing holding the rope.It was veer who threw the rope.
Veer:"Ab aise ghurghurke kya dekh rahe hain?Khai mein zindagi bhar rehne ka iraada hai kya?"
Dharam holds the rope.Veer tries to pull the rope.With great difficulty dharam came up frm the ditch.Veer gave him his hand and dharam came outside.
Veer:"Aap jaise dikhte hain,waise hain nahi."
Dharam:"Matlab?"
Veer:"Matlab yeh ki aapko dekhke lagta nahi hai ki aap itne bhaari hain."
Dharam understood veer pulled his leg.
Dharam:"Veer ke bachhe"
Veer started running and dharam also followed him.Both are laughing and enjoying these moments.
After some time,both of them got tired and sat under a tree.
Dharam:"Shukriya"
Veer:"Mujhe shukriya kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.Jis tarah uss din aapne meri behen ko bachaya aaj maine aapko bachaya.Ab hisaab barabar ho gaya,dharam,mera matlab hai maharaj."
Dharam:"Tumhare muh se 'dharam' sunkar achcha laga.Waise tum aadmi bure nahi ho."
Veer:"Sach kahu to main to pehle se hi jaanta tha ki aap bhi dil ke bure nahi hain."
Dharam:"Kya kaha tumne,humne suna nahi,zara jor se kaho."
Veer realized this time dharam is teasing him.He went near his ears and screamed,"Dharam bahut achcha insaan hai."
Dharam(holding his ears):"Bas bas hamare kaan ke parde phad doge kya?"
Veer started laughing.
Dharam:"Zyada haso mat.Ab batao tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"
Veer:"Maharaj,kya aryavrath aur shramik kabhi dost nahi ban sakte hain kya?"
Dharam became serious after hearing this.Veer thought now dharam will shout at him.
Dharam:"Kyun nahi ban sakte hain.Aaj se hum dono dost hain par hamari dosti sabse alag aur sabse anokhi hogi."
Veer:"Haan,hum dono ka rishta ek anokha rishta kehlayega."
Both of them got up and hugged each other.
Veer:"Maharaj..."
Dharam:"Maharaj nahi,sirf dharam"
Veer:"Main aapko sirf dharam kaise keh sakta hoon?"
Dharam:"Jaise tune ab kaha."
Both of them laughed.
Veer:"Maharaj,mera matlab hai dharam paaske gao mein mela laga hua hai,aap chalenge."
Dhaam:"Hum tumhare saath mele mein zarror aate veer par iss waqt humein kahi aur jana hai."
Veer(disappointedly):"ek shramik ke saath jane mein sharam aati hai?"
Dharam:"Woh baat nahi hai,humein hamare purane dost kamal se milne jana hai,woh hamara intezaar kar raha hai."
Veer:"Theek hai,jaiye."
Both left the place.
From today,dharam and veer's life will be changed forever.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
Nice update...continue pls...I guess Veer will fall in luv with ananya now & ananya will also have a soft corner for him on the other hand Daharm will become more close to sia after his friendship with veer....wellllI hope this is the change that will come in their lives now
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

that was gr8 now dharam and veer are friends thats gr8 plz cont....

esha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
oh wow!!! i just loved this part😳😍
dv frnds now...and the way they talked to each other 😍
the way u used the title in the script is just awesome yaar👏.....ek anokha rishta...excellent dear⭐️
now veer going to a mela🤔...i think there he will meet the rude ananya....😆
plzplzplzzzzzzz update it soon.... am just loving ur FF...😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
Woow shubha..that was a great update.....yippee Dv friends😊...now i now where u script is heading towards😉....🤣dharam fell of the horse twice....becausehe was thinking fo Sia......i love ure script it is just really different to everyone elses script and the show itself...

i have a strong feeling that DharamVeer are Brothers...but they got separated at birth.....or sumthing liek that....and taht is where Pari's line cums in''pari ma mujhe maaf kar dho'' or sumthing liek that
oh well i will w8 till then...thnk u for this part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
wooow....loved it Subhs...amazin dia...comedy lol...so good...i fink DV r cusins...Pari stole Veer frm Rani-maa cos her baby was born dead so she swapped dem two...? dts y DV get along so well even dou dey r meant to b enemies... dts y Pari keeps sayin 'Rani maa dis n dnt do dt...etc..' reali love da direction dis ff is goin...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
reeaally nice parrtt updateee soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Nice update...continue pls...I guess Veer will fall in luv with ananya now & ananya will also have a soft corner for him on the other hand Daharm will become more close to sia after his friendship with veer....wellllI hope this is the change that will come in their lives now

thanx 4 liking my fic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: starpisces123

oh wow!!! i just loved this part😳😍
dv frnds now...and the way they talked to each other 😍
the way u used the title in the script is just awesome yaar👏.....ek anokha rishta...excellent dear⭐️
now veer going to a mela🤔...i think there he will meet the rude ananya....😆
plzplzplzzzzzzz update it soon.... am just loving ur FF...😍

thanx a lot nisha.

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