FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: aandhanika
Hey dear,

wow your recent part was too good.... but a bit weird too.... how hasn't veer seen nivitri never befor....

Okay i'll be waiting for your next part..

Till then

Ur question will be answered later,just wait and watch.

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: CutieA
awsome update subha...so many questions! ur keepin us on our toes lool...keepin us guessin...cnt wait for nxt updte...cheers xxx

thanx dear,glad u all r liking this suspense.

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 7
Dharam and AV are returning to the mahal.They had gone to attend a relative's wedding.They were going thru a jungle.Suddenly they heard a gal screaming "bachao,bachao"
AV:"Yeh awaaz kaha se aa rahi hai?"
D:"Waha se,chaliye."
Some dakoos hv kidnapped sia and are taking her somewhere.Sia is asking for help.
AV:"Dhram,humein chalna chahiye,bahut der ho gayi hai,"
D:"Par pitaji,woh ladki..."
AV:"Jaane do usse,chalo yaha se."
D:"Par pitaji..."
AV:"Tum chalo yaha se"
AV left.Dharam also wanted to leave but his heart stopped him.He felt as if he is going to lose a dear one.He went there,fought with the dakoos and rescued sia.
Sia(crying):Shukriya maharaj..."
Dharam stopped her frm speakng further.
D:"Bas,humne tumpar koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai,humne yeh sab insaaniyat ke khatir kiya hai,tumhari jagah koi aur bh hoti to hum yehi karte"
Sia felt dharam is lying.There were tears in his eyes.Sia liked it that dharam saved her.
D:"Tum yaha itni raat gaye iss jungle mein kya kar rahi ho?"
S:"Ghar mein khana nahi tha,maa baba ko bhook lag rahi thi isliye yaha aayi kuch phal lene."
Dharam felt a little guilty.B'coz of him,sia had to come to the jungle to pluck fruits.
D:"Tumhara bhai kaha hai?"
S:"Bhaiya to aap hi se milne mahal gaye hain."
D:"Theek hai,chalo hum tumhe tumhare ghar chhod dete hain."
Sia sat on dharam's horse.Dharam used to glance at sia stealthily,sia too used to glance at dharam.
Dharam and sia reached the shramik's basti.Veer was waiting outside for sia.He was shocked seeing sia with dharam.
Before veer reacted,sia told him everything.
Veer looked at dharam with gratitude.First time in his life he saw dharam like that.
V:"Maharaj,shukriya."
D:"Ismein shukriya kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai,humne sirf maharaj hone ka farz nibhaya hai."
Now veer didn't say anything to dharam.
When dharam sat on his horse,veer came there.
V:"Maharaj,ek sawaal poocho aapse?"
D:"Aaj aapke saath jo ghamandi rajkumari thi..."
Dharam looked at him angrily.
V:"Mera matlab hai ki woh rajkumari kya naam hai uska?"
D:"Ananya"
V:"Haan ananya,woh kaun hai aur yaha kyumn aayi hai."
D(funnily):"Woh ghamandi rajkumari ananya yaha hamara sar khane ke liye aayi hai aur humein pagalkhane bhijwane aayi hai aur kuch jaana hai tumhe?"
Veer started laughing.Dharam too joined him.All the other shramiks were shocked seeing both of them like this.
Dharam left the place.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago

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Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#64

hmmm friendly talk between Dharam & veer interesting ...Very nice update pls. continue👏👏

Edited by meghaparti - 17 years ago

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Ams

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Posted: 17 years ago

#65

wooow...dt was veri unexpectd Subs...reali...u suprised me once again 😆😆😆...nice suprise dou 🤗🤗🤗...i can see wer dis story is goin...n i simply cannot wait for u to write it up! update snn sweetie 🤗🤗🤗

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: meghaparti
hmmm friendly talk between Dharam & veer interesting ...Very nice update pls. continue👏👏

thanx dear. 😊

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: CutieA
wooow...dt was veri unexpectd Subs...reali...u suprised me once again 😆😆😆...nice suprise dou 🤗🤗🤗...i can see wer dis story is goin...n i simply cannot wait for u to write it up! update snn sweetie 🤗🤗🤗

thanx a lot amms. 😊

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#68

Part 8
Dharam was on his way to the mahal.He was thinking abt sia.A beautiful smile came on his face.H reached the mahal.AV was waiting for him.He scolded him for saving sia.
Dharam went into his room.Nivriti entered there.She sat on dharam's bed.Dharam lied down on her godh.
N:"Kaisi thi shaadi?"
D:"Achhi thi."
N:"Bahut thak gaye ho na."
D:"Nahi to."
N:"Dharam,maine suna hai tumne shramiko ke yaha anaaj bhejne se mana kar diya.Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha beta."
D:"Bua,un logo ne hamare anaaj ka nuksaan kiya isliye humne..."
N:"Phir bhi tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha."
Dharam got up angrily.
D:"Bua yeh aap keh rahi hain.Aap bhool gayi 15 saal pehle kya hua tha.Pitaji ne soma naam ke shramik ke haath katva diye the kyunki woh tijori se gehne chura raha tha.Ussi raat saare shramik mahal mein jabardasti ghoos gaye.Unhone maa ko maar daala.Paanchvi manzil se neeche phenk diya unhone.Aaj bhi sapne mein humein maa ka woh khoon se latpat chehra nazar aata hai.Hum baar baar yeh sochte hain kaash hum pitaji ke saath bahar nahi gaye hote to un logo ki jaan le lete.Aur sirf itna hi nahi,un logo ne aapke bachhe ko bhi maar daala.Kya bigada tha maa aur aapke bachhe ne?Aapka beta to ussi din paida hua tha,kya bigada tha usne in logo ka?Aapke pati ki maut ke zimmedar bhi yehi log hain.Itna sab kuch hone ke bawajood bhi aap in shramiko ka saath de rahi hain.Hamara dil aapke jitna bada nahi hai bua.Hum in shramiko ko kabhi maaf nahi karenge bua,kabhi nahi."
Dharam left his room.Nivriti started crying remembering all those things but her heart is very pure.She believes whosoever has done this to them,God will definitely punish them.
Next day,dharam announed that the shramiks will get double the amount of food grains.He did this only b'coz nivriti told him to do so.
All the shramiks were happy after getting the food.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#69

wah...wah a speech frm Dharam...well dne Subhz...im hookd.! n im gald to see wah i fought has happend reali did happen! lool...da raaz is out! half out lool...cnt wait for da nxt part xxx

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#70

me commenting on both part 7 and 8
wow super again.....👏
in part7 , dharam is so sweet 😳..i really liked his attitude towards sia😳 and the way he talked with veer
the next part is just fab👏👏
so the raaz is out.....and u planned it really good⭐️
again dharam is very kind and sweet😳

plz update it soon me waiting 4 it.....

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