FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
i just loved it ti was totally mind blowing plz cont asap..
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooow...wah wah GO Dharam....loved his dia's Di...it rockd! he changed the rules in just few minutes...so kuul...n he also crdtd Veer for his change in him....wooow...also good to see DV relationship...that dey r not holdin a grudge for somthing few Shrmaiks did 15 yrs bak..fnx for da precap!...im eagerly waitin ur nxt update!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26

lovely subha,i enjoyed it,dharam holdg the hand of the soldier was 2 gud,i was imagining it hw it wud b?the update was 2 gud,waitg 4 the nxt!

Thanx dear for liking it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starpisces123

wow lovly update subha👏
its just amazing⭐️
dharam is really a good king loved him😳
i liked all the dias 😳
and sia's heart breaks hmm .......plzzzzzzz update it soon😳

Thanx dear.
Will update it soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

Lovely update subha.......🤗

well i was right...the persson was dharam 😃
thanks a lot.plz update soon....

thanx 4 loving it dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 14 All the shrmiks are celebrating.They are all praising dharam. Sia too is very happy.She sings,dances,runs around her tiny home.
She goes in front of the mirror and starts talking to herself.
Sia:"Pagli,yeh kya ho gaya hai tujhe,kyun baar baar maharaj dharam tere khayalo mein aa jate hain,kyun baar baar tu unhi ko yaad karti rehti hai."
She then starts thinking abt dharam.
Sia:"Kahi tujhe maharaj dharam se pyaar to nahi ho gaya."
She becomes even more happy and starts dancing and singing again.
Then she opens a large box and starts searching for something.She takes out a small bag,takes a beautiful bracelet frm it.She decides to gift it to dharam.
She leaves for the mahal.She runs fast and reaches the mahal.
The guards stop her.
"Tum andar nahi ja sakti.Iss waqt kisse milne aayi ho"
Sia:" Main maharaj dharam se milne aayi hoon."
One of the guards:"Tum jaanti nahi shramiko ko mahal ke andar aana mana hai."
Sia:"Aur tum nahi jaante maharaj ne aaj hi kaha hai ki hum jab chahe maharaj se mil sakte hain.Ab rasta chhodo varna main maharaj se tum dono ki shikayat karungi."
Guard:"Par..."
Sia:"Maine kaha na rasta chhodo"
He was abt to say that dharam is not in mahal but sia didn't let him say that.
Sia enters the mahal.For the first time she has seen such a beautiful and marvellous palace.She went on looking at the doors,walls,curtains,etc.
JV was the only person who was there in the mahal.All the others had gone to the temple.
JV sees sia.He shouts at her.
JV:"Kaun ho tum aur mahal mein kaise ghoos gayi?"
Sia is taken aback.She bows down in front of jv.
Sia:"Main maharaj dharam se milne aayi hoon."
JV:"Maharaj dharam se kyun milne aayi ho?"
Sia:"Main unse shukriya kehne ke liye aayi hoon unhone hum shramiko ke liye jo kiya hai isliye"
JV:"Bevakoof ladki,tum logo par do chaar ehsaan kya kar diya tum unhe shukriya kehne le liye yaha aa gayi.Tumhe kya lagta hai dharam tum jaise chhote logo se milna chahta hai,chali jao yaha se."
Sia:"Par unhone humse kaha tha hum unse jab chahe milne aa sakte hain."
JV:"Usne keh diya aur tumne maan liya,kal ko agar woh tumse yeh kahe ki woh tumse shaadi karna chahta hai to tum maan logi?Woh tum jaise shrmaiko se nafrat karta hai.nafrat.Woh tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahta,kaha woh aur kaha tum jaise do kodi ke log,chali jao yaha se.Pata nahi tumhe sipahiyon ne andar aane kaise diya.Isse pehle ki main tumhe dhakke maarke bahar karu.chali jao yaha se."
Sia starts crying.The bag in her hand falls down.She leaves the palace crying.
Sia is sitting near a river and starts remembering jv's words.
" Woh tum jaise shrmaiko se nafrat karta hai.nafrat.Woh tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhna",
"kal ko agar woh tumse yeh kahe ki woh tumse shaadi karna chahta hai to tum maan logi?"
Sia cries even more.Then she wipes her tears.She sees her reflection in the water.
Sia:"Tum ek shramik ho aur dharam ek maharaj hain,tum dono ka milan iss janam mein to kya,kisi bhi janam mein nahi ho sakta.Dharam agar aasmaan hai to tum zameen,dharam aur nadi ke do kinare ho jo kabhi mil nahi sakte,dharam ke liye apne dil mein jo bhi jazbaat hain unhe nikalkar phenk do,dharam ko bhool jao sia,dharam ko bhool jao.Dharam tumhara kabhi nahi ho sakta,kabhi nahi,bhool jao usse."
She makes up her mind to forget dharam.
In the mahal,everybody came back frm the temple.While going to his room,dharam finds the bag which sia had threw in the corridor.He opens the bag and finds the bracelet.
Dharam:"Sipahiyon"
Sipahi:"Ji maharaj"
Dharam:"Yeh kiska hai?"
Sipahi:"Pata nahi maharaj,arre haan,ek shramik ladki aapse milne aayi thi,keh rahi thi aapko shukriya karna chahti hai."
Dharam:"Ab kaha hai woh?"
Sipahi:"Maharaj woh to chali gayi."
Dharam:"Chali gayi?Humse mile bagair?Khair tum jao."
Dharam is wondering how come the gal left without meeting him.He then went inside his room taking the bag.
Precap:JV and AV's plan
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update subha.
loved it..
first when u said that sia's heart breaks..
i was tensed as to whether dharam said someting to her or what..
but me happy it was not coz of dharam......
plzz
do update next part ..asap 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the update.....Poor Sia & that JV ....how could he be so rude to the poor little girl.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooow Di...those were sum hash words JV said to Sia...poor girl...arghh...i can onli expect the worst from ur pre-cap...AV is gona join hands with JV cos hes not hapi with what Dharam is doin...changin al the laws...or is it what Nivi said that Dharam is gona prove a better Raja than AV...hmmm u leav me with so many questions lol...fnx Di 🤗

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