FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49

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Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

Thanks for the lovely update ...Hmmm seems like ananya is upto something against veer but I m sure she will get stuck up & veer will save her or may be that friend of Dharam might try to harm her & veer saves her & wins her heart

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

omg...wah a cunnin princess....godnes me...i fink she has sumfin plannd for Veer...hope he realises this b4 she does any damage! dnt fink Dharma will b hapi wid his friend Kamal n den wid Ananya playin games wid Veer...i smell trouble alreadi...cheer for da update Subha

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esha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#123

liked whole of your part loved it how ananya gave a tight slap tp that stupid kamal de deserved it cool update now lots of suspence waitin for next part post it soon plz.....

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

oh wow subha.....

what a twist in story......

loved each and every part of ur fan fic dear......

plzzz keep updating regul;arly.🤗

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mehraan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

g8 update subha,maazaa aygaya,annaya has a plan 2 teach veer a lesson,i think i kno wat she will do happn nl8 on wat vil kamal do!its really gud,keep it up n pls update

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Its tooo good!😳

Thankz for a mind-blowing FF.😃

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Subha

@Life_Is_Dutiful

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
wow..
wat must ananya be planning??

wat will tat kamal do??

and veer... will he beleive himself??

many questions, many suspense, love it.

well, if i can will comment in this part later.

Thanx a lot dear.

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Subha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: starpisces123
i guess ananya has a big plan in her mind for veer😕....
and kamal is so mannerless😡 he got the rite gift from ananya👏...
and am sure he will now make an evil plan for ananya
super update subha👏 ......and now i cant wait for the nxt🤔...plzzzzzzzz update it soon.......🤗

Thanx dear.

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Subha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: kiran99
wow its to good where is next update

Thanx a lot dear.

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Subha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Sorry for the delay in update.

Part 12
Shramiks workplace.All the shramiks are doing hard work in building aryavrats new mahal.
One man enters the place.He is wearing an old white shirt and dhoti.His hair has turned grey and he has a long beard and moustache.He was watching everything closely.
One old shrmaik sat down under a tree b'coz he felt very tired.One soldier came and started hitting him mercilessly.All the shrmiks are watching this but no one came to rescue the old man.This man was watching all this but didn't react.He moved forward.
He saw a shramik child having his food.One soldier noticed him,snatched his food and started hitting him.All these are watched by that person.
He found that small children and old men are working there.Even pregnant women are also carrying heavy loads there.He saw each and every thing and left the place in the evening.
In the night,this man again entered the shrmaiks basti.He found some shramiks discussing abt something.Veer was also present there.He sat nearby and listened to their conversation.
veer:"bas,ab bahut ho gaya,ab aur saha nahi jata,aakhir kab tak bardaasht karte rahenge,humein kuch karna hi hoga."
shramik:"par hum kar bhi kya sakte hain?"
veer:"ek raja ka yeh kartavya hia ki woh yeh dekhe ki uski praja khush hai ya nahi,usse koi takleef hai ya nahi,shayad hamare maharaj yeh bhool gaye hain,ab waqt aa gaya hi unhe unke kartavya yaad dilaneka."
shramik:"tum kehna kya chahte ho?"
veer:"hum maharaj dharam ke paas jayenge aur unse hamri mushkile,hamari takleefo ke baare mein kahenge aur unse vinti karenge ki woh hamare saath anyay na kare aur humein hamara adhikaar de."
All the shrmaiks started laughing.
shramik:'tum pagal ho gaye ho,yeh aryavrath insaan nahi hain,inke seene mein dil nahi,pathar hai.yeh hamari mushkil kabhi nahi samjhenge."
veer:"koshish karne mein kya harz hai,maharaj dharam itne bure nahi hain,woh hamara dard zaroor samjhenge."
shrmaik:"tum khud maroge aur humein bhi marvaoge.hum iss pagalpan mein tumhara saath kabhi nahi denge."
another shrmaik:"maharaj dharam ne tumhari behen ki jaan kya bacha li,tum usse bhagvaan samajhne lage?humein in logo se kabhi chutkara nahi milega.hamare purvajo ne inn aryavrato ki gulaami ki,hum kar rahe hain aur aage jakar hamari aane wali pidi bhi karegi.tum iss sachai ko sweekar kar lo veer."
All the shramiks went back to their homes.Veer calle dout to them but no one listened to him.
Veer felt disappointed and went to his home.
The man was watching all this.He too left the place after some time.

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