FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: starpisces123

hi subhašŸ˜›very nice update yaar ......šŸ‘dharam looked to sia and thought aaj to jaise chand zamen par aagaya...wow!!šŸ˜nivi is out of mehal after 15 yr and also met pari....😊kamal is manerless😔....i really dint like his comment on ananyaananya and veer nokjhok is continuing....im loving it...i guess veer teaches her a good leason soon....the story is really becoming more intresting😳...plz update it sooooon...


Thanx a lot
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess

cnt w8 till the dai Veer breaks anaya's ghamand....ghamandi kahi ki.lolliked the update todai


Thanx once again
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

wooow!

it was great! loved it.


Thank u for loving it.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ashah03

heyy!!! wonderful update!!

when will u be updating next???


Thanx dear.
I will be updating very soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
so beautifull subha.
really liked the update.
waiting for next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 11

Ananya reached the mahal.She is very angry.She threw her chappals on one side of the room and her jewellery on the other side.
"Uss veer ke bachhe ko main chhodungi nahi,samajhta kya hai apne aap ki.Isse main aisa sabak sikhaungi ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhega."
Kamal was passing thru the room and saw ananya.
Kamal:"Namaste ananyaji."
Ananya:"Kaun ho tu aur tum bina pooche andar kaise aa gaye?"
Kamal:"Main dharam ka dost hoon,kamal."
Ananya:"Tum bina khatkhataye andar kaise aa gaye?"
K:"Main aapse yeh kehne aaya tha ki aap bahut khoobsurat hain aur aapka ghussa!Ghusse mein to aap aur bhi bahut khoobsurat lagti hain.Kaash aap dharam ke bajai meri mangetar hoti.Sach kehta hoon,palko pe sajakar rakhta main aapko.'
A:"Achha!"
K:"Koi shaq.Mujhe to lagta hai ki mujh jaise rajkumar ke liye aap jaisi rajkumari hi sahi hain."
A:"Sahi kaha aapne,aap jaise rajkumar ke liye meri jaii rajkumari hi sahi hogi."
K:"Ab aapko bhi yehi lagta hai to chaliye,abhi jakar mandir mein shaadi kar lete hain."
A:"Pehle main tumhe tumhara tohfa to de doon."
K:"Tohfa,kaisa tohfa?"
Ananya gave a tight slap to kamal.
A:"Mil gaya tohfa,dubara mere kamre mein aakar mere saath badtameezi ki to tumhara anjam isse bhi bura hoga.Ab nikal jao yaha se."
Kamal left the room but decided to teach a good lesson to ananya.
Next day,Ananya went for hunting.
In the jungle,ananya found a small deer and decided to kill it.
She was abt to hit an arrow on the deer when veer stopped her.
Veer:"Rajkumari ananya,aap iss hiran ka shikaar nahi kar sakti."
A:"Tum hote kaun ho mujhe rokne wale?"
V:"Main aapko inn masoom jaanwaro ka khoon karne nahi doonga.Chali jaiye yaha se."
Ananya thought somehing for a moment.She got doen frm her horse.
A:"Veer,kal mandir mein jo hua iske liye ananya kaafi sharminda hai.Mujhe laga ki mujhe uss bachhe ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye.Mujhe maaf kar do."
Veer was taken aback.This was the least he expected frm ananya.He couldn't believe what he heard.
"Ananya aur maafi?"He was wondering.
Then he thought ananya mite be joking.
V:"Yeh kaisa mazaak hai,main aapki baaton mein aane wala nahi hoon."
A:"Yeh mazaak nahi hai,main jaanti hoon tum meri baaton par yakin nahi karoge.Par main tumhare aage haath jodti hoon,tumhare pair padti hoon."
Ananya was abt to touch veer's feet when veer moved behind.
V:"Theek hai,theek hai,maaf kar diya."
Ananya became happy and left there after thanking him.
Veer was thinking,"yeh ghamandi rajkumari ek din mein kaise badal gayi,kahi main sapna to nahi dekh raha hoon."
Veer too left the place.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow..
wat must ananya be planning??
wat will tat kamal do??
and veer... will he beleive himself??
many questions, many suspense, love it.
well, if i can will comment in this part later.
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Posted: 17 years ago
i guess ananya has a big plan in her mind for veeršŸ˜•....
and kamal is so mannerless😔 he got the rite gift from ananyašŸ‘...
and am sure he will now make an evil plan for ananya
super update subhašŸ‘ ......and now i cant wait for the nxtšŸ¤”...plzzzzzzzz update it soon.......šŸ¤—
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh subha such a fantastic update i just loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow its to good where is next update

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