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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey bahut hi senti update tha yaar, 😭

Mujhe nahi pata tha ki humare cadets Raj ko itna jyada miss karte hai😲; mujhe to lagta tha ki bus Naina hi Raj ko jyada miss karti hai ya fir Alekh but it was excellent sweety.😭
sab karte the yaar bus antar itna hai ki kisi par fark dikhta hai kisi par nahi.😭😭😭
Pata nahi tum log aisa kaise likh lete ho yaar.😛😛😛
I am really very happy for this update.😃
thank u so much.😛😛😛
Naina ko kya padi thi itni jaldi sab ko ye batane ki ki vo Raj nahi hai😡, thoda baad me bata deti to kya chala jaata us ka.🤢
are yaar theek kiya us ne bata k.
Yudi ne abhi tak nahi bataya ki kaun hai vo jis se shaadi kar raha hai Yudi.😕
bata dega yaar don't worry.😛😛😛
Naina ne Vyom ko sahara diya haivow g8!😳 par is Huda ki problem kya hai?😡
pata nahi janam se problem hai us ko.😡😡😡
Humesha Naina ko dusron k saath dekh kar jalta hai aur to aur Alekh ko bhi jalan hue Neelu k liye aur Ali ko Pooja k liye.😆
sab k sab bus jal rahe hain aaj kal.😆😆😆
Karan to bus Karan hi hai ab ye kaun hai jis se vo takra gaya?😉
dekho kaun hai?😕😕😕
update asap dear.

thanks yaar.😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

😡😡ok here's my comments for the next part i missed

Thanks darling.😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aarsow

woooooooooooow simply super,

very intrestn part sweety excelent,



Aarthi

thanks Arti.😊😊😊
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
bus aa raha hai update.😃😃😃
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello frnds here is the update:-

"What the hell? Tum yahan bhi pauch gaye mere peeche peeche." She screamed on him.

"Oye hello, koi galatfehmi paalne ki jaroorat nahi hai, mere paas aur bhi jaroori kaam hain. Aur aap logon ki to aadat hi hoti hai ki jawaan aur handsome ladka dekha nahi bus mauka dhoondhne lagti hain." Karan said.

"What? Mai tum ko abhi batai hoon ki mai kya hoon aur kaise hoon." She said.

"Tum dono pehle uth lo fir kuch aur karna aur karwana." Yudi said.

"Hey, Yudi how r u bro?" the gal hugged him.

"Kya di mujhe bhi geela kar diya na, accha chalo koi baat nahi pehle change kar lo fir baat karte hain." Yudi said n brought her in.

"Aur tumahara kya irada hai, aise hi yahan khada rehne ka kya?" Neelu asked Karan who was constantly gazing at that gal.

"Tu fir shuru ho gaya na?" Naina teased.

"Ab maine kya kiya yaar? Tum ne dekha nahi kaise vo ladki mujh se chipki hue the. Chi chi chi sharam bhi nahi aate hai in ladkiyon ko." Karan said making a childish face.

"Vo meri behan hai, jara aap soch samajh kar baat karenge." Neelu give him a sharp look.

"Relax, ok I am sorry." Karan said n left towards his room. Neelu smiles at him.

Alekh sees this n calls her, "E Neelu jara yahan aa na."

"Haan bol Alekh , kya baat hai?" Neelu asked going towards him.

"Kya baat hai bada maza aa rahela hai tujhe us chikne k saath." Alekh commented.

"Oho , to mere hero ko jalan bhi hoti hai kya?" Neelu asked in teasing manner.

"Jyada shaani mat ban, samjhi ki nahi." Alekh warned her grabbing her shoulders.

"Hieeeey mai sadke jaawan tujh par Alekh, mujhe itna pyaar karne k liye." Neelu winked him.

He immediately left her hands and smiled. "Agar mai aap dono ko disturb nahi kar raha hoon, to mere pyaare jeeja ji mujhe kuch kaam hai Neelu se." Yudi teased both.

They both blushed but Alekh managed to say that, "Chal be nautanki aa rahi hai na teri behan."

Here in Karan's room:-

He took out other dress at the bed and moved towards washroom. Soon he came out in a towel wrapped at his lower half. He was about to wear that shirt suddenly he heard a loud scream and he ran in that direction without thinking about his condition.

"Kya hua, kya hua?" he reached in a room.

It was that gal's scream when she saw him; she came to him and clung to him n said, "Vo wahan''.wahan".

"Kya hai wahan?" Karan asked.

"Vo vahan par ek mouse tha." She said.

"Kya? Chuha aur aap aise chillayi jaise sher ghus aaya ho yahan." Karan said.

"Nahi vo mai to'''" she said and Karan through it outside.

"Itna darti hain aap ladkiyaan ek chote se mouse se." Karan giggled.

"Oh to accha tum ho, phir se shuru ho gaye na." she was the same gal with whom Karan met in flight.

"Nahi agar mouse ne aap ki aise haalat kar rakhi hai to lion ko dekh kar kya hoga aap ka?" Karan teased her and laughed at her.

"Oh shit", Shreya said, "aap kya logon se aise milna pasand karte hain ya jaan moojh kar yahan aise aaye hain." She said turning her face in another direction.

"Aise kaise matlab?" he said (typical Armaan style).

Shreya ne us ko dekha aur fir us ki taraf aage aayi, very close to him now, "Apni is muscular body ko dekhate hue." She said tickling his chest with one of her fingers.

Karan embarrassed, "Nahi , vo mai to''.." and he ran away from there.

Shreya laughed at him, but in her mind she praised his body aur us ki aakhon k aage Karan ki vo muscular body baar baar aa rahi thi.

"Kya soch rahi hai Shreya?" Neelu asked.

"Hey Neelu tu kab aayi yahan?" she said smiling and hugged her.

"Bus abhi, tu kuch soch k smile kar rahi thi shayad to tune dhyaan nahi diya mujh par I think." Neelu said hugging her back.

"Nahi re aise koi baat nahi bus aise hi." Shreya said.

Here all the preparations were done for Ring ceremony.

"Tu kya pehnega aaj?" Alekh asked Yudi.

"Obviously chief mai aaj dulha hoon to mujhe sab se accha lagna chahiye na. Mai to ye pehnooga." He showed him a creamish sherwani with a maroon stole with it.

"Aur tu kya pehnega?" he asked Ali.

"Hum bhi sherwani he pehnege," Ali told.

"Haan aur mai bhi." Huda added.

"Apun k nahi samjh aa raha hai ki apun ko kya pehanana chahiye." Alekh said hopelessly.

"Tum ye pehonge Alekh." Naina gave him a suit.

"Ye kya hai Naina?" Yudi asked.

"Neelu layi thi tere liye; mai upper aa rahi thi to us ne mujhe diya ye tujhe dene k liye." Naina told him.

Alekh opened that and it was a maroon suit with a cream shirt. He impressed with his wife's choice.

"Ye to kaafi accha hai na." Huda said.

"To accha hai to kya apun k upper kharab lagega kya?" Alekh asked.

"Nahi yar aise koi baat nahi maine choice ki tareef ki bus." Huda said making a face.

"Ok guys tum log ready ho mai chalti hoon, mujhe bhi ready hona hai na." Naina said n was about to leave when Huda stopped her.

"Oye Phoolan mere ko tere se kuch jaroori baat karni hai."

"Haan Huda mujhe yaad hai, tune phone par kaha tha. Kya batana hai tujhe?" she asked.

"Naina o Naina kahan ho yahan aao jaldi." Karan called her.

"Accha tu jaa abhi baad me baat kar lenge." Huda said.

"Nahi, ab tu mujhe abhi bata kya baat thi?" she asked again.

"Vo Naina baat bahut serious hai aur baat ye hai ki'''" he couldn't continue because Karan reached there.

"Vo Naina mujhe tumhari help chahiye chal na''." Karan almost dragged her hand.

"Ok Huda mai baad me milte hoon tujh se." Naina said n left with Karan.

He brought her in room. Naina saw the whole room messed up.

"Ye kya hai Karan? Kya haal kar rakha hai tum ne kamre ka?" Naina panicked.

"Mai kya pehnoo mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha bus isiliye''.." he said.

"Vyom kahan hai?" suddenly she didn't find anywhere so she asked.

"Pata nahi yahin kahin hoga tum batao na kya pehna hai mujhe. Kya pehnoo ki mai bikul vo kya kehte hain'''" he started thinking.

"Ruko ruko mai batai hoon''.." she started searching a good dress for him and after at least fifteen minutes she found a really nice dress for him.

"Ab batao mujhe kahan hai Vyom?" she asked.

"Are mujhe kya pata kahan hai vo?" he replied.

She panicked and started searching for him. Soon she found him and..............

Kaisa tha ye update guys,

Waiting for responses

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiiiiii dear......kaisi hai....achhi hi hogi ..kya hai na mere dost hamesha achhe hi hote hain....meri duaon ka asar hai...😆

now abt the ud......fantastic.....awoesome....mindblowing.....
dekha....mera guess sahi tha...woh ladki shreya hi thi...aur tune real life k jodi ko reel life main daal diya .....maza aa gaya😛😛😛 dono ka takrana phir jhagda karna...just too gud.
are...yaar yeh shadi k baad bhi alekh neelu ko lekar insecure hai... haan...waise honi hi chahiye...wife agar khubsurat ho to hamesha insecurity feelings aa hi jati hai.........
yeh huda kya kahna chahta hai...naina se....aur vyom kahan hai???
well....waitin for ur next ud....cont. soon.
luv....PRIYA
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
update was very funny and cool
i love shreya and armaan part
update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi
Update was mainly revolving around Armaan 2day..But it was really very funny..😆
Where is Vyom ...???
Alekh is jealous of Karan!!!!!Dats only when u love your partner very much...
Shreya is Neelu's sis..n she is too naughty...😉😉😉..Wat is huda trying to tell Naina😕😕
Do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
too good and funny dear
plz update soon this time plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
updt was really cool....

karan is too much n aalekh is jealous...how cute!!!!

it seems huda really wants to tell naina somthing but i think karan doesnt want her to know (may b just gusseing)

dialouges wer awesome as well

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