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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetest girl

it was a great part i lovedd it

update soon



thanxxxxxxxx next update tommorrow
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: pretty_angel5

very nice twinkle 👏

story is really good
keep up the good work
what about this name
dharam veer, arianagar ki shan



thanxxxxxxxx yaar for the name i will think abt it

n thanxxxxxx for ur comment

next update tommorrow
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
hey guys i m back with my update

part-10

dharam:kya hua rajkumari antara

antara:dharam dekho na veer ke sir se khoon nikle raha hai

dharam:par ye hua kaise

antara:tumhare bhai ne kasam khai hai ki ye humari baat kabhi nahi manega

dharam:aap hume puri baat bataeye

antara:dharam humne is se kaha rha ki bed se na uthe phir bhi ye humare jaate hi bed se uth gaya aur gir gaya jis se khun aane lag gaye

dharam:veer tum samjhte kyon nahi ho tumhe bahut gahari chotein aayi hai aur tumhe complete bed rest chahiye

veer:par dharam............

dharam:par var kuch nahi humein kuch dino ke liye bahar jana hai aur tab tak antara tumhara khayal rakhegi aur tumhe uski har baat manani padegi samjhe

veer:dharam......................... humari baat to sun ..........................aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

dharam:kya hua veer

veer:dharam mera sir fata ja raha hai

dharam:antara tum iska dhyan rakho hum abhi vaid ji ko lekar aate hai

dharam jaldi se jakar vaid ji ko lekar aata hai par tab tak veer behosh ho jata hai

dharam:vaid ji veer theek to hai na

vaidji:haan rajkumar bas inki sir ki chote par phir se chot lag jaane ki vajah se behosh ho gaye hai thodi der mein hosh aa jaega

dharam:rajkumari antara humein ab niklna hoga aap veer ka dhyan rakhna aur haan sia ka bhi

kuch der baad veer ko hosh aata hai

veer:dharam......................dharam.
..................dharam.........

antara:haan veer bolo

veer:dharam ...............kahaan ....hai?

antara:dharam to chala gaya use der ho rahi thi aur ye dawai pi lo aur vaid ji ne tumhe jyada bolne se mana kiya hai

veer bethta hai aur antara use dawai pilati hai aur veer antara ko dekhne lagta hai aur uski nashili aankho mein kho jata hai

antara:veer veer aise kya dekh rahe ho

veer:tumhe.........mera matalab hai ye dekh raha hoon ki kya tum vahi antara ho jisne mere ghode ko........

antara:tum jante the

veer:mein sirf ye janta tha ki tumne mere ghode ko kuch khilaya hai par ye nahi jaanta tha ki tum mujhe marna chahti ho

antara rone lagti hai

antara:veer hum tumhe nuksan nahi pahuchana chahte the aur humne to kabhi soch bhi nahi tha ki aisa ho jaega veer hume maaf kar do.........hume maaf kar do.....

veer:antara rona band karo meine tumhe maaf kar diya

antara:hum vaada karte hai ki aaj ke baad hum kabhi aisa mazak nahi karenge

veer:vaise tum rote hue bilkul achhi nahi lagti

antara:aur tum chup hi achhe lagte ho

veer:aeeeeeeeeee.............chipkali kahin ki

antara:tumne hume chipkali kaha to tum............kankhajoore

veer:dekho......mujhe kankhajoora mat bulao tumhare liye achha nahi aaaaaaaaaaa.....

antara:kya hua??????????

veer:dara diya na

antara:ab tum chup chap so jao

veer:theek hai aur tum bhi jaakar kuch der aaram kar lo

Precap:dharam plans to propose sia n veer n antara helps him

next update will not be this week guys but i will update asap


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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
hey twinkle lovely update yaar😛⭐️⭐️
⭐️antra is soo sweet😳 aur veer to kisi ki nahi sunta😕
veer calling antra chipkali 🤣and antra calling him kankhagor🤣its very funy🤣
precap seems to be very intresting....hmm.... plz update asap😍...


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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
it was great part very nice seen bet veer and antara keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
woow...so shweetie of antra...Veer is veri clever dou...he knew Antra did sumfint o his horse...jkes...n he forgave her so easily...so cute! im xcitd abt ur precap! hehe...update wen u can mwah cheers huni
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
wat a sweet update, waiting for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: starpisces123

hey twinkle lovely update yaar😛⭐️⭐️thanxxxxxx
⭐️antra is soo sweet😳 aur veer to kisi ki nahi sunta😕yep dear they are made like dat only
veer calling antra chipkali 🤣and antra calling him kankhagor🤣its very funy🤣
precap seems to be very intresting....hmm.... plz update asap😍...lol will try n give update asap




me in bold
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: kiran99

it was great part very nice seen bet veer and antara keep it up



thanxxxxxxxx a ton will update asap
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

woow...so shweetie of antra...Veer is veri clever dou...he knew Antra did sumfint o his horse...jkes...n he forgave her so easily...so cute! im xcitd abt ur precap! hehe...update wen u can mwah cheers huni



thanxxxxxx for ur comment dear will update soon i think next week on monday most probably

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