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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys
still need more comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Great Update!!!!
It was really good and I hope you update and make it longer ASAP!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5
recap: Ranbir and kanya are at the golboles house.
Ranbir and kanya are at the golboes house.... they stay for an hour and they both leave and go straight to the shopping centre.
kan: ranbir i need to get a few personal stuff i 'll meet u in the armani shop ok
ran: kanya y can't i come with u... we are husband and wife ... what is it that u can't tell me.
kan: goshhhhhhh ranbir i sed it personal and i will meet u there ok.... i'm going now.
ran: but kanya
with that kanya left ranbir and sed she will meet him in 15 minutes..... kanya goes into anna summers shop to by a few sexy dirty clothes for their honeymoon and she has a surprise for ranbir. wat he doesn't no wat going to happen over their...... with that kanya leaves the shop and goes to meet ranbir in the armani shop.
kan: hey ranbir did u see anything u like
ran: no not really.... did u get ur personal things which u couldn't tell me
kan: so ranbir ur not talking to me properly..... anyway i don't care
kanya and ranbir have a little argument in the armani shops...... but kanya see clothes wat she like for and she make him try them on..... she gets some 3/4 pants/ jeans and sexy t-shirts and shirts..... she take his credit card and pay for them..... they go in many designer shops and she buys herself a sexy dress
ranbir going to be in for a surprise.
kanya nd ranbir both go home.... ranbir still not talking to her ...... but they don't show it to the family...... it late at night and 2moro they leave for 10 in the morning to get the flight.... ranbir goes to his room and kanya so follow him
kan: ranbir u still won't talk to me look i have a surprise for u.
ran: kanya i'm not angre with u but i wish u could tell wat personal things u need... then i could help
kan: kanya the only thing ranbir will be is taking them off. look ranbir i reli sorry not telling u wat the reason is but it not that much important.
ran: its ok kanya.... anyway wat the surprise
kan:well ranbir u have to closee ur eyes first ok and no cheating
kanya go close to him nd kiss him on the eyes, forhead, cheeks, chin and she kiss him on the lips... she deepened th kiss and rabir resopened very quickly she starts tu un button his shirts and unzip his pants .... ranbir pushes her down on the bed and take her top off and they are making hot sexy passion both have so much energy both under a blue slik sheet ontop off them while they go wild under neath ....... the scene soon fade away.....
it eight in the morning and ranbir and kanya are both sleeping wen they here their alarm going off
kan; ranbir switch off the alarm it to loud.. ranbir..ranbir.... gosh ranbir u r so lazy it right nxt to u and u just ssleep through it like nothing happened. goshhhhhhhhh men usless.
kan: ranbir it time to get up we leave in another two hours
ran: kanya i'm so tired from last nite.... wat i'm mean is we can continue were we left off.... kanya hearing this turned red...
kan; no ranbir come on we need to have a wash and get ready.
ran: ok but this time we having a shower together and thats final..... ranbir carry kanya to the bathroom and they are having a shower and making out in the shower.......... they soon come out ready and realise it 9.0.clock and they are kind off late........... ranhbir and kanya come down stairs with two suitcase and have some breakfast and 15mins later they touch malika bd big d feet and take their blessing and leave the nanda and sit in the car and head straigt to the airport
part 6 will be soon hope u enjoy it leave loads of comments
Edited by sweet cherry - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good job
But tooo short yaar.
Update ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Good job
But tooo short yaar.
Update ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: disha11

it was awesome!!!!!
and there was a place where you spelled shirts- "shits"
it cracked me up.... coz if u read the full sentence its hilarious
LOL
LOL
hahahahahahahahahaha
anyways.... it was incredible but very short!!!!!
plz cont sooon!!!!!
really can't wait

Lolz that cracked me up too.hahahahahahahhaaha😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
gr8 part but short
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6
Recap: ranbir and kanya went shopping and made out in the bedroom and left the nanda house and head straight to the airport.
kan: ranbir can you please tell me where we are going on our honeymoon.. i can't wait anymore plzzzzzz tell me.
ran: kanya darling do you really wanna no where we are going
kan: yeah please tell me
ran: ok i will tell u were we are going but i want sumthing in return.
kan: fine u can have anthing u want ok
ran: thats fine by me... kanya we are going one week in paris and one week in goa... how do you like my surprise.
kan: ranbir u did all this for me.. u r the best husband ever.... i love you so much ranbir... i really love you from the bottom of my heart.
ran: kanya i love u to but what do i get in return... come on tell me wat do i get in return.
kan: well ranbir close ur eyes
ran: kanya were at the airport... y do i have to close my eyes y can't u do it where i can see it
kan: that fine by me..... she come close to him and kisses him on the lips for a good two minutes.... ranbir responed and deepened the kisss..... soon kanya break the kiss.
kan: well ranbir did u like ur reward
ran: kanya if i book more honeymoon and holidays like this and i get kisses like that then i would book more holidays more oftern for us.... shall we go now and board for paris.
kan: yeah ranbir one minutes before we board.
ran: wat is it..... she come close to him and whipe his lips because..... he had lipstick on them.
kan: now we can go
ran: thanks u
kan: ur welcome
ranbir and kanya both board their areoplane and both sit in first class.
ran: kanya were going on our honeymoon and i don't want anyone to disturb us .. wat i mean is no phone on during our honeymoon... and we will ring them to tell them we have reach our destination...and i pursonly ask everyone not to ring us
kan: ranbir tahts fine with me... just u and me enjoying our honeymoon......... she kisses him on the cheeks
ran: that settle..... well kanya we have eight hours on the plane u sure we can make out u no ..that fine by me.
kan: no ranbir u have to wait till we get to our hotel ok.... for now we watch a film..let see wat on... how about jab we met that a really good film.
kanya and rabir arewatching the film wen the air host comes and ask them wat would they like to eat.
kan:can u please give us five minutes to look at the menu please.
ah: sur maam.. i will be back in five minutes ok
kan: thanku...... ranbir wat do u want to eat.... we been on the plane for three hours and we have five hours left.
ran: kanya i have the same as u.... wat ever u order i have the same
kan: are u sure...ok but don't mone to me later that u still hungry.
ran: i won't ok
ah: maam are u ready to order
kan: yeah can we please have two big subway sandwich with two cokes and one chocolate chip cookie and that all for now
ah: ok maam it will be with you in five minutes
kan: thank u
ran: goshhhhh kanya u sure no how to order food.
kan: well haven't u seen who i married to then... even though he got a body wat can kill u just by looking at it
...i have to make sure my husband eat well
ran: kanya u r so sweet i love u so much......he kisses her on the cheeks
their food arrive they eat the food which was really taste.... kanya was tired and she fell asleep on ranbir shoulder ranbir puts his jacket over her to keep her warm.... and soon he fall asleep.... their journey have fiinish and now they have reach their destination
ladies and gentlemen........ welcome to paris i hope u enjoy ur flight
guys hope u enjoy the update
plz leave comments 😊
let see wat happens in the hotel room 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely update. Loved it. They R so playful
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys i will update today in the evening time
hope u like the nxt update

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