Sweet Dreams ~|ZZ|~ Part 1 Page 1 ~ Nov 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

part 2 was really interesting, liked the way you shown the friends conversation

i really just enjoy reading the ff, so glad you made time to update
thanks for the PM
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
hey zuzu it was gr8 yaar😃 luved d way u described all emotions d convo to her feelings 😊 actually zaina to cute n easy to relate wid 😉 n she waiting 4 her prince charming wid blue eyes hayyyyy😳 newaz lets c wat future holds for her👏👏 n puhleeezzz u better cont sooon dis tym😆😆 thnks 4 d PM ................. luv aravi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey zuz...i do remember u talking of similarities n non similarities with this char of zainab.....the fic just so sounds like a self narration, possible in every respect.....n a totaly different one, since atleast the concept isnt quite a fictional one right!!!

loved reading the update, but u have to make the next one quick now, the wait is so long.....lovd this part....one more teeny demand....cud u show us something more to zain's emotions, he sounds like quite a pick!!!!

hehe...loving mariam, missing imraan so far....but an awsome read

ps:why did u not like this part....just curious.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

hey zuz...i do remember u talking of similarities n non similarities with this char of zainab.....the fic just so sounds like a self narration, possible in every respect.....n a totaly different one, since atleast the concept isnt quite a fictional one right!!!

loved reading the update, but u have to make the next one quick now, the wait is so long.....lovd this part....one more teeny demand....cud u show us something more to zain's emotions, he sounds like quite a pick!!!!

hehe...loving mariam, missing imraan so far....but an awsome read

ps:why did u not like this part....just curious.....



😃 Well... its completely fiction.... As the title states... Sweet Dreams *hint* lol... i leave the rest to you. But yeah... i guess Zaina's like me, hence the name 😆😆 the next part will come soon. Hmm.. and that is a good idea. I'll include Zain's thoughts in the next part. And Imraan will hopefully make an entry as well.. :P And I didn't like this part much cause I thought it wasn't really well written and the story was going blob... but oh well.. i hope its gets better in the next part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

gr8 part

thank for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
i like it!! although sum words were new..habidh???

it was vry conversational..gud goin!! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hi.....
another ff??
.........................
u said consructive criticsm??
i have none.. but i will give compliemts sayign i LOVED it...
its really normal... in a good way because u can imagine anyone doing that...
and tell me one thing...
have u found ur zain??
;) ...
lol...
cont soon n remember plz pm me..
Soni
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hey hi
before i forget the words what does hijab and hafidh mean. i kind of guessed hijab is like a dupatta and hafidh maybe bad guy
as for the update i like mariam she is instinctive.
with jst one look she can tell what zaina is thinking cool
bt i can't quite get a grip of zain's character, i know he is a nice guy bt what's so special abt him to catch zaina's eyes 😕
apart from him looks
though i m not saying they don't count😉
anshu
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: someanshu2008

hey hi

before i forget the words what does hijab and hafidh mean. i kind of guessed hijab is like a dupatta and hafidh maybe bad guy
as for the update i like mariam she is instinctive.
with jst one look she can tell what zaina is thinking cool
bt i can't quite get a grip of zain's character, i know he is a nice guy bt what's so special abt him to catch zaina's eyes 😕
apart from him looks
though i m not saying they don't count😉
anshu



Hijab literally means protection... and Muslim women are supposed to cover their heads... And hafidh is a person who has memorized the entire Quran... I need to put up a glossary lol... will do it with the next part..

The next part will include more or Zain so youll get a grasp on how special he is :P...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
you have amazing diction.
the way you handle the conversations & thoughts are really smooth and right in place. i just cant wait to read more.
i had also thought about the whole zain thing and im glad that his views or so will come in the next part.
update soon! not like last time 😆

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