Sweet Dreams ~|ZZ|~ Part 1 Page 1 ~ Nov 3

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"And then I turned him down. Told him I was no man's toy! Poor guy, turned away with the saddest face," and Nyla laughed hard, almost shaking the fragile twin bed. The two girls sat facing each other, telling one another about their recent encounters. "It was so funny! You shoulda been there!"
"Oh. My. Allah, you're not joking are you? He's a bloke anyways," Zaina replied in between giggles.
"He's hawt."
"He's a dumbass."
"He's fit."
"Why'd you turn him down then?"
"Well cause he wanted to take it to the boyfriend-girlfriend level, you know. What kind of girl does he think I am?!?! He's so low!" ranted Nyla, obviously outraged.
"I guess he has to pay back big time," Zaina said smugly.
"Oh hell he will big time!"
Who could guess that two innocent looking 18 year olds could be so dangerous? No matter how sweet they acted in front of the aunties, behind locked doors, when the masks were lifted, a whole new face was revealed. No it wasn't a haram face! It was just the side that over conservative aunties didn't really approve of.
Nyla and Zaina: they were born and raised in the West and battling with the cultural and religious differences of the communities around them, the pressure of being "cool" and trying to "fit in" was a difficult task. But they accomplished it very well without compromising their faith.
"Oh there he comes... that ******!" Nyla cursed, looking out the window in Zaina's room which allowed a clear view of the lawn below.
"What's he doing here?" Zaina frowned. "Guess he found out you were here too, hehe, he must really like you, Nyla!"
"Shut up. Lets go down, I have a jahkaas idea."
The two girls raced down the stairs and got hold of Zaina's seven year old brother who was busy playing video games with his tiny friends and was unwilling to pry his eyes off the television set. Zaina thought it would be best to throw that box out of her bedroom window so her brother wouldn't be glued to it all day and listen to her. Older siblings always have everything to suit their agendas!
"Zeyad listen! When Faraz comes in, spill coke all over his clothes!" Zaina told him.
Zeyad's eyebrows furrowed. "Why? Faraz was nice to me. He gave me candy."
"But remember the time he turned you upside down? C'mon, I can give you candy too if you spill coke over his clothes and hair! Yummier candy than his. You know, chilli milli, I'll give you one every night for two weeks! C'mon Zeyad!" Zaina begged of him.
"Okay, okay! Fine! I'll do it." He went over to the table and poured out some coke in a huge red plastic cup, then went and stood next to the door, ready to launch his attack.
"You stupid kid! Come here!" Zaina yelled at him as the door bell rang.
"Hey, what's going on here?" Omar strode to the stairway. Omar was Nyla's older brother.
"Oh hey... ummmmmmm... nothing bro, nothing. Just getting back at someone..." Nyla quickly said before Zaina could open her big mouth.
"I smell something fishy. You girls are obviously up to something but I'll leave you to it..." saying so, he went back to where ever he came from, some place the girls never bothered to care about.
"Okay look, when he comes in, after a while spill it on him, not right away!"
"Oh. Okay."
Nyla and Zaina climbed back up and stood at the top of the stairs, silently giggling away, where they could get a bird's eye view of their plans.
"Hey kiddos..." they heard Faraz say.
"Hey uncle! You wanna pay with us?"
"Um, what're you playing? Where... is everyone else?"
"Come on Uncle! Play with us pleaseeeee! See Zeyad got a new game!! It's so cool! It's Spiderman!" said the little kids, pulling Faraz's hands and dragging him to their playpen.
"Yayy, you're so cool uncle!" they said, forcing a console into his hand.
Zeyad stood behind Faraz as he sat down boringly. Coke ready in hand, he stood waiting for the right moment. After a while, he tipped the cup and down came the coke right into Faraz's hair making its way down his neck and into his shirt... and god knows where after that.
"Aeaaeeeeeeaeeaee!!!!!!" Faraz shivered from the coolness. Zeyad then poured the rest of it on his butt, giggling. Apparently he thought it was hilarious to watch Faraz move his body back and forth, so he filled up another cup and decided to pour it straight into his shirt, and when Zeyad decides to do something, he does it!
And so the kids played with the coke and the Faraz bhai. And poured some more coke down his back till he was dripping with coke sweat.
Nyla and Zaina burst into splits, yet at the same time, they tried to keep their laughs silent.
"OH MY GOD!!!" Omar came back into the house. He stood gaping at Faraz who was drenched. "Damn, what happened? BRO, you look funny!" And the whole house was in splits. "Okay... okay... do you needa change your clothes? You sure do... No way you're gonna make it home like that. Let me see if I've got something in my car..."
"There, he ruined it! Should've let him walk around like that! Imagine if that... what's that blondes name? Ashley... yeah, imagine if she saw him in such a state! Hilarious!" Nyla laughed.
"Oh my god! Look at what Faraz is doing! Close your eyes, astaghfirullah...." Zaina quickly put her hands over her eyes whilst Nyla gaped at him.
"He IS fit," she said, as Faraz removed his coke soaked shirt.
"He is?"
"Yeah... Okay don't look anymore. He's taking his pants off... ok now he's in boxers. Don't look!"
"You hypocrite! Why're you looking! Lower you gaze isn't only for the guys!"
"Hehe..." Nyla covered her eyes. "Why are we covering our eyes, why don't we just go into your room?"
"Oh yeah... good idea."
On hearing shouts from the window, hurried to see the cause of commotion. And my my, what a sight they encountered! Faraz was running towards his house in boxers. Zeyad and the crew were laughing their heads off.
"I bet they kicked him out. And look at your brother!" Zaina said pointing to Omar down by his car, with this mouth wide open, holding a pair of clothes in his arms.
"Yeah!" Nyla and Zaina hi-fived each other.


... so I started all over again and I like this piece better than the other one. This one's for Nyla 😃 I know there's no Zain yet, but he'll be coming up in the next part or so... I hope you guys like it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okie zainab di since comments are not allowed m gonna ask u something did the 2 boys stare at poor zaina coz she was laughing ??? or coz she was laughing at cheers bhismillah??and i think the guy nxt door shd be a little less irritatin coz i mean he just oved in rite??? n okay i cant cntrol myself ne longer brilliant.. dats the 1st non ar ff m reading..heh!!! sorry 4 commenting..lol!!
cheers
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This was just too good! I enjoyed reading it although im sad it wont be updated soon=( but you write very well : ) & no compliments? umm now thts difficult...
Edited by ~@$hm@~ - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lightening

okie zainab di since comments are not allowed m gonna ask u something did the 2 boys stare at poor zaina coz she was laughing ??? or coz she was laughing at cheers bhismillah??and i think the guy nxt door shd be a little less irritatin coz i mean he just oved in rite??? n okay i cant cntrol myself ne longer brilliant.. dats the 1st non ar ff m reading..heh!!! sorry 4 commenting..lol!!
cheers
love
stutie

😆😆 Because she was laughing... Lets say... Zain must've found her laugh attractive?😉 And Zeyad invited him in LOL... *blush* i guess you can pass compliments then😆😆
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Originally posted by: ~@$hm@~

This was just too good! I enjoyed reading it although im sad it wont be updated soon=( but you write very well : ) & no compliments? umm now thts difficult...

😆😆😆 Thanks Asma... Hmm... Asim and Asma LMAO, I'm always trying to match names these days..
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Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty



😆😆Because she was laughing... Lets say... Zain must've found her laugh attractive?😉And Zeyad invited him in LOL... *blush* i guess you can pass compliments then😆😆




😆 hmm ur 😉 😉 is giving me a lil hint of wat is comin up nxt hehe...
neway we ll have to wait 15 th august..INDEPENDENCE DAY!! 😆 😆 😆 mayb zaina ko bhi independence mil jaayegi to go shop...n yea..keep blushin cz m gona keep commentin..hehehe 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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another ff...
wen i saw ur name in d ff forum wid a new ff i felt lik taking chappals n hittng u simply becoz u haven't update 3 ff's of urs frm such a long tym..
bt my views chngd dis 1 is soo different frm d other fanfics... nt based on any charachters n it happens 2 b a eye opener..
i noe no compliments...
bt a little doubt
by nychnce did zain found d laughter attractive .. i'm nt sure bt jus wondering..
now til independence day i hav 2 wait... don't worry i wil keep ranting til dat
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hey zainab, 1st of all another??
how do u manage?
anyways coming back to this one!! the brother reminds me of my cousins!! irritants they all are
and Zain, i wonder why he left so abruptly after Zaina laughed, did he find it attractive?? and eyeing the car??
anyways its very hard not to compliment the ff, so im not going to say much, apart from i can relate to Zaina and her mum (ninja)
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
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zuzu me here
u can beat me up if u like
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Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey zainab, 1st of all another??

how do u manage?
anyways coming back to this one!! the brother reminds me of my cousins!! irritants they all are
and Zain, i wonder why he left so abruptly after Zaina laughed, did he find it attractive?? and eyeing the car??
anyways its very hard not to compliment the ff, so im not going to say much, apart from i can relate to Zaina and her mum (ninja)
Sania

LOL!! Yeh, he did... something like that loool... well... wat can ya expect, it was a hot car after all :P Thanks for the comment :D... and I think I will have to change the no compliment rule 😕 I now want to hear everyone compliments 😆😆😆

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