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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
zuzu me here
u can beat me up if u like

No way! I'm not beating ya up... who's gonna write me sweet comment then 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

hey zainab!

Please don't kill me ....but i can't resist and am just gonna comment...

This is sucha diff. fiction so unique...interesting....and just fab!! I had so much fun reading the first part...it was like i could visualize the whole situation...am totally in love with zain-zaina already! :P its soo cute....u know i laughed aloud so many times reading the part that my dad started to give me weird looks thinking that his daughter has totally lost it!! hehe....zaina's bro is soo cute...typical annoying little brother...but still so innocent....i can't wait for your next update....

tc.

ania :)

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

LOL!! Yeh, he did... something like that loool... well... wat can ya expect, it was a hot car after all :P Thanks for the comment :D... and I think I will have to change the no compliment rule 😕 I now want to hear everyone compliments 😆😆😆

lol couldnt keep away from them could you?? so now i can add - this is a unique piece lol

Sania

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@spln

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

omg zuz that was....oh sorry u said um not supposed to compliment...guess i need to leave the reply emty then without much else to say....so...ahem ahem...is this a confession story from the bandar teen on the forum???!!!😆

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: spln
omg zuz that was....oh sorry u said um not supposed to compliment...guess i need to leave the reply emty then without much else to say....so...ahem ahem...is this a confession story from the bandar teen on the forum???!!!😆

noooooooooooooooooooooooooo, you can compliment 😃 I'm dying to hear them. And.. ahem ahe.. *cough* it's something like that... but SHH, that's our little secret!

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

another one !!!!!!!!! way to go i say u ve got too many interesting ideas!!!!! n yeah all da younger ones can b damn irritating!!!! just b'coz dey r da little ones dey find a way out of everything !!!!!!! n u sure zain eyeind da car???????? but den he left a little abruptly!!!!! n"cheers bismillah" it was actually sumthing!!!!!lolzzzz no use of saying cont soon as we ll have to wait 15 lonnng days until u grace us wid ur presence huhhhh!!!!!!!! luv aravi

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Really nice ff zainab...👏👏👏I liked zeyad a lot..He is so cute.....And I liked zaina-zain too...Continue soon dear...

Is the title Sweet dreams decided......?I mean, if you still want help with the title I can suggest "Baakhuda Tum hi ho" or "Khuda jaane"....Sweetdreams is also nice one....😊

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Sadi Patel

@ArmaansGirl

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

OMG! DIS IS SOOOOOOO GUD! U CAN HIT ME ALL U WNT BUT IM NOT LEAVING TILL I GIVE SUM COMPLEMENTS! 😉 lol

i luved it...dis is da 1st non-ccharacters FF im reading!...n i ealli can rl8 2 zainab n her mom! lol plzzzzzzzzz upd8 soon!

tc xx

sadiya <3

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

hey hi

well u asked for critism bt i can't do it when we r presented wid such a hilarious piece of work

this is the first time i have read ur ff and ur a fab

bt somewhere along the line the fights or rather we say cute tussels r becoming a little bit common

bt the bro-sis chemistry was awesome

and zain and zaina well the names r cute😆

jst one more thing can u explain the specific muslim terms since it is slightly difficult to understand them

have u finalised the title?

i quite like it sweet dreams

anshu

Edited by someanshu2008 - 17 years ago

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purplelolo

@purplelolo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

heyy ...zainab ...i can resist but comment ..ok lol it was very good mashallah ...keep it up bery well written but one thing you need to do ...is that in the next part ..or coming parts whatever suits you give a background check do u know what i mean ....
well i hope u do ..cant wait till ur next part and ill find i few "ghaltiyan" in that

hahaha

love
-Hania