A Mistrusted Trust AK/AR *NEW* pt10, pg54 2/05 - Page 12

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

gr8 part

continue soon

sry 4 tha late comment n thnx 4 tha PM n tha update! luved tha prt! But i think Ridz is a little harsh in Armmy n wats uo AK 2 yrz ago hmmmmmmm sun thin lukz fishy lolz! do cont soon!

Originally posted by: twinkle94

sry 4 tha late comment n thnx 4 tha PM n tha update! luved tha prt! But i think Ridz is a little harsh in Armmy n wats uo AK 2 yrz ago hmmmmmmm sun thin lukz fishy lolz! do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

Ridzzy is evil seems evil as always always being harsh to armmy ( just kidding lol well most of the time she is pretty harsh lol) I sort of sense some tension between Angad and Kripz. Interesting FF you really know how to capture your readers!😃 I hope there nothing serious with Armaan and Kripaa please do continue soon

OMGG ariii.....again i have shooo mcuh to sayyy.....i'll start off again frm the beriii beginning
Ahem, jaise madam je ka hukam naama aaya tha, that i shud comment more on the characterz....to hukam ke bahaali honi chahyiee...lolz...so here goez mi character comments:
omg arii...i luvv ridz...n its soo unusual to see her being soo evil and a prankster as someone said above....but that brings a greattttt twist in the story......what i dont understand is why is she willing to take revenge frm Armaan, when she doeznt even know him n i think thats their first ever meeting?? canttttttttt wait to read the reason behindddddddd ittt......i luvvv ridz's character no matter how she is...i m on her sideeeeeeeeee...lolzzz
yaar u hv captured everyone's attention shooooo well, by having this twist and leaving it all suspenceful....cooool
And wat going on between armaan n kripz????cant waittttttttttttttttt to know that....
Angad is a cheat??WOooo now thats interestinggggg
i m soo in a suspenceee rite now...cant waitttttt to read the next part
i think ur fanfic is the besttt one there is.....Totally outstanding
arii ki bacchi....tujhe itna acha mashwara diya tha...bout doing a serial........per madam jee ko aaj tak meri koi baat passand he nahi aaye..................abay ina acha mashwara muftt ka nahi milta.....ja dafa ho yaar....atleast hori dair ke liye he....2 sec. ke liye he soch liya hotaa iss baare mai.........
seriously mai yaar...i m not talking out doing it professionally...siraf fun ke liye....summer ke last month mai..............aur wo Geo par keh bhi rahe the.......v can give aur auditionz too......chota sa koi serial yaar..........sochieen is baar...........dill seee
aniwaiz..bohat lambi chorri hai iss bar
this time im the last one....but next time will be the first one here to comment.........next part update ho to sab se pehle mujhe pm karein...samjhi???theek hai
ok yaar..i m out now
luvved reading the fanfic................
n luvvvvvvvvvvvvvv u
jeeti rah
Daisy!!

Originally posted by: .::ANiSHAXx

Ridzzy is evil seems evil as always always being harsh to armmy ( just kidding lol well most of the time she is pretty harsh lol) I sort of sense some tension between Angad and Kripz. Interesting FF you really know how to capture your readers!😃 I hope there nothing serious with Armaan and Kripaa please do continue soon

Hi Ania,

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Ania,

I just read both the parts now, amazing parts.....loved the title....thats what made me read the FF ....awww...thankshu shoo much 😳😛

So Kripa is a lawyer & now Angad wants to her to work for him & that too, when she was against him....really this guy will make her feel guilty to the utmost.....hmm lets see 😛

Poor Arman, feel so bad for him...he is getting agony from Ridz for something that he didn't do also...I hope u justify Ridz's character soon, cos Part 1 she was ok, but Part 2 she bacame kind of evilish....but what I am thinking that maybe she has suffered a lot due to someone & now is holding a grudge against everyone.... well there is a past to Ridz...and thats the reason she is behaving in sucha way...

anyways, would love to read more...please do continue soon & pm me if you can.... sure will do so...😊

thanks & take care u too! 😛

A Mistrusted Trust

Chapter Three

"WHAT???", Armaan yelled out, surprising himself more than Kripa. His voice echoed through the spacious apartment and returned back to his ears screeching. He took a deep breathe and closed his eyes to control the temper rising inside him.

After a while, he finally relaxed and held her shoulders firmly. "Do you have any idea what you have just done Kripz?" She looked down, unable to meet his gaze. "Answer me Kripz. Couldn't you give me a call? Just one call? Is that a lot to ask for?", he shook her getting more annoyed. She was unresponsive. "Kripz I am not going to leave until you answer me!", Armaan warned. Tears rolled down her eyes slowly as she hid her face under her arms. Kripa started to sob silently as she felt him hug her affectionately.

"Now, tell me what is going on? What really happened between you two?", Armaan asked, handing her a glass of water. She gulped down the cold water and sighed loudly. "Armaan, what else was I supposed to do? I fought that case against Angad two years ago but…but Armaan he was not at fault. He was blamed for something he didn't do. His whole company was at stake Armaan…the whole Khanna Empire's reputation was ruined. It was all because of my fault. I supported the false side…those Oberois.", she said as the regret took over her again. "So what? How was that your fault Kripz? How would you know the truth and anyways at that time all the evidences were against him. Kripz, I am warning you, don't you dare blame yourself for the mishap!", he gave her a friendly punch on her cheek.

Armaan and Kripa sat on the couch, lost in deep thoughts. He was worried about her. Why would Angad Khanna want to hire someone who has fought against him? Why Kripz only, when there were other lawyers who also helped in the case? What if he wants to take some kind of revenge? Nah. That just sounds too filmy. But if that jerk ever tries to hurt her… No. He wouldn't. He can't. Will he? Armaan's heart beat raced as all the possible, yet horrible scenarios flashed in his mind. He closed his eyes tightly and fell back on the couch in a huff.

"So, are you sure you are going to join him from tomorrow?", Armaan asked hoping that somehow, magically the answer would be in negative. "Of course, Armaan. I've already signed the contract…I have to start from tomorrow only.", she replied as a matter-of-fact. "You could've asked me first…it just takes one call Kripz.", he pouted. She smiled and made him face her. "Armaan, please try and understand. I am feeling extremely guilty to support something wrong. It's just that…I don't know Armaan…I just feel like I should help him out…maybe it'll make me feel better and help me overcome this guilt. I have to do it Armaan.", she said hoping that he would approve of it. Kripa knew what was exactly on his mind. Armaan nodded slightly and took her hand in his. "But if I ever find out that he tried to harm you in anyway then I'll make sure he never sees daylight." "ARMAAN!", Kripa shook her head and giggled, while he grinned.

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They were walking along the seashore in silence, barefoot on the cold sand. The air was filled with heavy humid winds, rushing from one direction to the other. It was past midnight already and only a few people could be seen roaming around the beach.

"Armaan let's sit somewhere now. I am tired", Kripa exclaimed stopping in midway. Armaan looked at her standing a few paces away. She brushed the sand off her jeans and folded them up a bit. His lips curved into a big smile seeing her struggling to tie her hair with one hand while holding her sandals from the other. Letting out a short laugh, he took the flip-flops from her hand. That's how their relationship was. They would tease and laugh at each other, but will stand up and fight for the other if a problem arises.

Armaan and Kripa have known each other from their school days. Kripa made a place in his heart the day she cried out to him, forlorn of the miseries of being an orphan. She was unable to understand why didn't she have someone who would bring her toys, pat her back when she gets good marks, and console her when she cries. Why didn't she have those two people that her friends had. Why didn't she have her own parents too? Where were they? Why did they leave her like this?

Kripa could never forget the moment she had broken down infront of Armaan when a bunch of kids had called her orphan. She was barely seven. She could still recall Armaan's words. "Kripa please don't cry…nobody will tease you…and they tease you then I'll call Super man to help you. Super man is my goody good friend Kripa.", an eight year old Armaan who barely talked to anyone in class had tried to assure her. "But what if Super man comes late…then who will save me?", she had asked innocently between her hiccups. "So what? I'll be there…I am also very powerful like super man!", Armaan had told her confidently. Kripa was glad that she cried that day…otherwise she wouldn't have got the most beautiful gift of her life. A precious friend like Armaan.

That one day had interlocked them in a special bond that only they could feel. For Kripa, he was her only family. For Armaan, she was the only friend he ever had.

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"I swear I'll kill you…idiot monkey….cave man!"

"I'll kill you before…you freak weird hairdo women!!"

Armaan heard voices as he walked towards the front desk. The yelling got louder as he reached closer. Who could it be? Before he could reason out an answer, the sight in front shocked him. The two people were now pulling out each others hair. "How dare you make fun of my hair?", the girl shouted trying hard to grab the boy's tiny hair. "Well you deserve it women!", he replied pushing her back. "Stop calling me women!", she was more irritated. "Why? Aren't you one?", he smirked cheekily.

"Muskaan! Rahul! Stop it you two!", Rhidhimma's voice came preventing Muskaan's attempt to strangle Rahul. "Guys please behave. I can't believe that you two are engaged.", she walked towards them angrily. "Ridz it wasn't my fault. This Rahool started it all.", Muskaan tried to defend herself. "Hey…you are so dead Muski. You were the one who got mad for not buying you that silly red dress.", Rahul retorted back. Here Armaan quietly stood in a corner entertaining himself. He couldn't believe that two people who were fighting like cats and dogs were engaged?

To his surprise, in moments those two who were just fighting like sworn enemies were now acting as if nothing happened. "Musku…I promise to buy you that dress…but I like it in white more…it suits you better.", Rahul said lovingly. Muskaan rolled her eyes. "Okay. Then, ummm…how about you buy me both the dresses? This way we both won…right?", Muskaan suggested sweetly, batting her eyelashes. "Sure. You are absolutely right Musku! We'll go today and buy you both of them.", Rahul agreed without wasting another moment. Muskaan jumped in excitement, getting things her way again.

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Kripa stared around his cabin. Her hazel eyes moved slowly from one object to the other. The touch of elegance was presented beautifully in everything around the place. She loved the interiors…there was something so extraordinary in those ordinary objects.

"Who designed this cabin Angad?", the words slipped out casually as if she were addressing a friend. "Excuse me?", Angad gave her a confused look. "I really like your office Mr. Khanna.", she said giving in a pleasant smile. Angad looked at her strangely for a moment but got himself together before he was lost…"If I am not wrong than Ms. Kripa Kapoor you are here to work under me. So, please concentrate on that only!" His harsh tone was enough to ruin her mood, still she plastered up a smile. "I am sorry Mr. Khanna but you were the one who told me to wait. Even I don't prefer wasting time. I am a busy lawyer you know.", she replied back confidently.

Angad exhaled out a heavy breathe. Grabbing a bunch of old files from the back drawer, he shoved it infront of her. "Okay, Ms. Kripa if you want to start so badly then there you go.", he said folding his hands upon his chest. "Search through all these old records. Find out all the errors. Correct them and I want a final report prepared on whatever you have done by this evening.", he ordered and smirked victoriously. 'Don't worry Kripz, you can do it.', Kripa comforted herself looking at the big pile on the desk. "Thanks sir. I am glad that you think of me sufficient enough to finish it all.", she stood up and smiled back, grunting her teeth. "It's my pleasure Ms. Khann…err…I mean Ms. Kapoor.", he flushed, going back to his seat quickly. Kripa chuckled on her way back, taking the files to her cabin.

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"So, Ridz where are we going?", Armaan asked walking beside Rhidhimma. They had finally decided to take Sanjeevani's tour after Armaan introduced himself to his colleagues, including Dr. Rahul, Muskaan, Anjali, and Atul. They were quite friendly and supportive. Armaan really liked the bond all these friends shared.

"Can you walk faster Dr. Mallik? And would you do me a favour and not call me Ridz?", her strict tone made Armaan come out of his dream world. "Umm…I am sorry if you didn't like it. Actually you know my best friend…", he was cut short before he could continue. "We are not here to discuss your personal life Dr. Armaan. Keep me out of it.", she shot him an angry glare and marched ahead. "Wow! This girl has some attitude problem!", Armaan murmured to himself. Rhidhimma looked back. "You said something Dr. Mallik?", he nodded his head sideways, making an innocent face.

"Dr. Armaan, I am assigning you both day and night duty in Sanjeevani, through out this week. So you might only get a few hours break in between.", she announced, waiting impatiently to see the shocked look on his face. It was the perfect plan. He would be so tired and annoyed that he'll leave Sanjeevani this week only. What a sight! She imagined Armaan holding his head and running away crazily. "Sure, no problem Dr. Rhidhimma.", came his reply, shocking Rhidhimma instead. Okay. This is NOT how she planned it to be.

"And I am also thinking about putting you 'on call' from the next month, while you will still be giving a regular eight hours day time duty.", Rhidhimma hoped to find that sad look on his face. But Dr. Armaan Mallik seemed to be the least bothered. He was too busy enjoying his sandwich. "Dr. Armaan? Are you even listening to me? You know what it means to be on call? You'll have to come to Sanjeevani whenever you are called, at ANY random time of the day.", she said almost yelling at him. He wiped his mouth. "I know what you are talking about Rhidhimma. I am in for it, don't worry!", he flashed a bright smiled and left the table to dump the paper plates.

Rhidhimma Gupta closed her fists tightly, in anger. How come he wasn't bothered at all? Not even a bit disappointed? Ahh. She screamed mentally. All right, Dr. Armaan Mallik this is not the end. It's just the beginning. Let's see who really is in and who gets out!, she smirked getting busy in coming up with a new, fool proof plan this time.

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Quite a long part eh? 😳 ...sorry if it bored you...i just wanted to express Kripz and Armaan "thing" since all of you were asking about it....i know u all must be hating Ridz...but don't ...shes not bad 😳....its just that shes been through a tough time and in a way still haven't recovered from it ...okay i'll stop my rambling now...please criticize all u want!! would love to hear them, any suggestions?😃 questions?😛 feel free to ask... and last but not the least...leave ur comments!! they really encourage me.....😊

tc. ania 😊

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