A Mistrusted Trust AK/AR *NEW* pt10, pg54 2/05

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi! So here I am presenting to you my second ever fanfic.......I know I haven't still finished the first one....don't worry I'll be continuing it....this idea was roaming in my head from the past few days and wouldn't leave me until I typed it out ....So here it goes..

A Mistrusted Trust

Prologue

Trust... a short, one syllable word is so easily said at times but hardly understood the meaning of. What do you expect from a person when you say the three words, blindly, "I trust you!"? What more can you expect than just a smile of assurance which tells you that you can rely on them? Why is this small word...so weird? It's so hard to gain, yet easier to loose? This little word can either leave a person satisfied on the inside or just tear apart their soul once it changes itself into mistrust.

She sat down infront of the long, oval shaped mirror and stared at her own reflection. Who was it? She didn't seem to recognize herself for the first time. She took out her shaking hand and brought it closer to the mirror. "Who are you?", she said out loud, touching the cold surface of the mirror. A tear rolled down her pale cheek but she wiped it harshly. "Who are you anyways?", she mocked realizing the bitter truth. Who was she? A NO ONE! She was nothing to anyone! Nothing! A voice shouted inside her as reality downcasted upon her. She fell to the ground and hugged her knees, crying silently.

He drove aimlessly through the dark streets, unaware of his surroundings. His hands reached to apply the break unconsciously as he recognized the sight infront of him. Sighing loudly, he loosened his tie and fell back on his seat. It was the most peaceful place he has ever been to...his only favourite destination. The moonlight sparkled over the lake's surface, making it glow like specks of diamonds. He closed his eyes as he felt the damp breeze touch his cheeks. The lone drop of tear silently escaped his eye, as he allowed it to fall. He missed them...but they might never come back, never!

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Now, coming back to the ff....This is based on both the lovely couples...
AK and AR!! This is like my first ever AR ff....so bear with me all the AR fans if i do any mistake This will probably be a short story (hopefully ) and and....I will really try and update it regularly like good kids ...So, if you have any complaints or suggestions...feel free to express them...
And, please leave comments if you even liked it a bit... and yea yea....you can criticize as well (lolz just kidding) give me all your criticism freely as it will only help me improve!
Now, enough of my blabbering...you can go ahead and comment!!

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Note: As we all know the number of posts hv been changed to 8 again...so just finished re-indexing the pages and as suggested by ppl, i hv provided the "direct link" as well. So, if there are furthere changes in the future...i wouldn't have re-index it like this again...so just click on the direct link and it will take u to that post!!!

INDEX!

Prologue ........... page 1
Chapter 1 .......... page 6 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 2 ......... page 12 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 3.......... page 16 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 4.......... page 22 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 5............. page 27 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 6..............page 33 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 7...............page 39 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 8...............page 44 ======> Direct Link
Chapter 9...............page 52======>

tc.
ania

ps: please feel free to leave your thoughts/comments...or just click the Thank you button....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start..interesting concept....👏 do continue soon..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Ania!
Firstly ur FF's name is really good!
Kinda contraditcing..made me wanna open up the thread and read it! Good choice!
Secondly...the prologue is very well penned
Am very curious to know who the girl and boy is!
Do begin soon..And if possible...Please PM me 2!
-Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, nice beginning. it sounds really interesting. can't wait, continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyy looks really interestinggg....im sure u will do greatt...i loved the whole first paragraph u wrote on trust it was amazing...really curious to kno who the boy and grl is...and i really like the title...its like an oxymoron...lol...great job....continue soon
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wow interesting intro. wud love to read more 😛
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very interesting concept..!! looking forward to reading the first part!!!
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nice intro cont soon plz!!!!!!👏👏👏
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nice concept...cnt wait 2 read mre....
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woooow nice concpt lkin 4wrd to readin
mre seems very interesting
nizma x

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