tunna’s saarthi ff... [nice name na:-)] - Page 12

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Posted: 19 years ago
hahahahahaha.... hihihihihi... hohohohohoho!
yaar cant stop laughing! i read all the parts together! n i think its awesome! this might be the funniest thing i have read in my whole lifetime! imagine mamaji as ghanu kaka and kakasaheb as a servant! 😆
u rock tuhina! 👏
i have become a fan of ur ff! pls post soon! pls pls pls pls pls pls pls! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey bhagwannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!! 😆 plz help me , i m laughing madely after reading dis. 😆
if my family will see dat i m laughing loudly alone den i m sure kal tak main mental asylum main pahunch jaaongi. 😆
juzz a suggetion 4 u 😉 plz send ur script anyhow 2 sarathi's dir 😃 😃 .....yaar i swear kya story banegi 😃 😃 ..very happening 👏 .atleast bhoomika maayee se mukti mil jaayegi re . 😃 😃 haila kakasaheb aur jharoo. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
tuhina plz yar aur mat hasao.mere petme ab dard hone lagi hai 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww guys........
thanks for the extremly sweet comments......
😃
😳
cant tell u how happy n touched i'm reading all these comments..
each one of u is soooooooooo nice..... wow........ 😃
mehak,poonam,mita,shirl,arjun_bhavri..
i luvd ur all comments yaar... n really soooooooooo happy that u liked it...
actually wanted to ask every1
should i continu this ff???? cos i'm not sure whether to..or not..
Mehakk.S thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
tuhina plzzzzzzzzz continue the next part i am waiting for it 😊
poonam kg thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
cont it 😛 .........its not a req. its a order ok. 😉
n yeah next time itna stupid n silly q's poocha na...den be prepare 4 a punch ok. 😡 😡 tab to krrish bhi nahin aayega tumhein bachaane. 😳 jyaada bhaav mat khaao ab. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwww guys... cho chweet again... 😃
n okay poonam.. i dont want a punch.. will continu.. but out of ideas n late for now.. will rit n post as soon as possi.. next episode shuru hoga ab to.. so guys plz don forget this till now.. will post n tell u as ssoon as done.. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Its late at nit.. n Arjun n Bhoomi r still awake.. 😉 They r sitting by the window looking at the moon.. 😳

A : wow bhoomi.. tum dekh rahi ho.. aaj chand kitna beautiful lag raha hai..
B : yes.. it's the prettiest thing I'v ever seen.. 😊
A : but not me.. I'v seen something prettier.. 😉
B : ( knowing Arjun is talking abt her 😳 😳 ) Who 😳 😳 😳 ..... I mean wat..?? 😳
A : Aishwarya rai !!!!!! O my god.. she's sooooooooooooooooo pretty !!!!! ❤️
B : wat !!!! how disgusting.. 😡 wat choice u hav.. she's just so plastic.. n so made up.. n so much attitude..and.... and...
A : n ur just jealous.. 😛 😛 😛
B : no I'm not!! 😡
A : ur jealous.. bhavri is jealous.. ya yaya ya ya…la lalala la la.. 😆 😛 😆 (kuch kuch hota hai style)
B : I'm not jealous.. I'm not jealous..
A : Bhavri is jealous.. she's miss jealous..
(then Bhavri shouts real loud)
I'M NOT JEALOUS !!!


Suddenly ground floor se suraj-manasvi ke room se awaz aati hai.. (it is directly beneath their room and the window is also just beneath their window)

Suraj : Arjun-bhoomi.... !!! plzz try to control ur emotions.. khali tum log iss romantic mausam mein chand ko enjoy nahi kar rahe ho.. 😈
Bhoomi is surprised to hear suraj's voice.. then blushes.. 😳
A : are kya karein bhaiya.. !! ye bhoomi hai na… isse control hi nahi hota hai !!!! 🤡 😛 😛
S : okay thik hai.. ab achche bachon ki tarah sone hale jao quickly.. okay..good nit..
A : good nit bhaiya.. n bhabhi u too…
😃 😉 😉
Manasvi : good nit Arjun..Good nit Bhoomi.. Sleep well…
😉
Arjun To bhoomi : chalo ab.. yaha hamare seniors hain.. wo hamein enjoy nahi karne denge .. hum log kisi dusri window se jhankte hain..

B : I think we better sleep.. 🥱
A : are sone ko to tumhare paas pura din pada hai.. aur mere paas pura office..
B : tum office mein jaake sote ho?? 😲
A : obviously !! ek hi to company.. usmein bhi Suraj bhaiya, Keshav, Dadaji,Bade Dadaji.. Sab to kaam karte rehte hain.. mere liye to kuch kaam bachta hi nahi.. main to office mein sota hi hoon khali.. 😉
B : wow.. tumhare to maze hain.. aur yahan main !! 😭
A : are I know sab.. tum bhi to ghar mein kya kaam hai .. Itne saare log hain..Bhabhi,shefali,mummy,kaki, ghanu kaka, sarita.. baap re.. 😲 😲 tumhare to mujhse bhi zyada maza hai..no work to do… isilye din par din moti hoti jaa rahi ho.. 😎 😉 😉 😛
B : wat !! main moti ho rahi hoon… I'm going fat.. !!!Arjun Goenka !! main tumhe nahi chodungi..
And she runs after Arjun.. and they run arnd the room.. but soon bhoomi is exhausted.. 😔 😔
B : huh.. (taking deep breaths) I cant run anymore.. huh.. hooh.. 🤢 🤢
A : dekha.. I told u na.. ur getting fat.. see how quickly u exhausted.. now from tomoro.. I'll make u join a gym..
B : Gym !! O my God.. I don wanna go to a gym… !! Bah.. 😭 😭 😭 🤢 🤢 🤢 ( falls on bed n starts snoring in 5seconds) 🥱 zzzzzzz........
A : halle lo !! kitni fast hai ye.. and I thot I was the one who practices sleeping daily… 😕 😕 😕




ummmmm... guys...???? ????? 😕 😊 😕


Mehakk.S thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tuhina its really really super 👏
great work
keep it up!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Its mind blowing.........superb... 👏

it was relly sweet and humorous ....short and sweet....

i really like ur fan fic 😃 ....and all episode of it........(well i hv just read all 2-3 days b4) and the person who can write so much good episodes couldn't be out of ideas 👏 👏 ........so plz continue the good work always...............

thanks 😊

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