The abduction(a veeba dark ff) chapter 3 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note:hey guys!i know I have pending ff but couldn't resist writing this.the next update would be after march and pls drop ur comments below whether to continue or not.buddy me for pm's

Prologue
What is love?
Love is a beautiful feeling
But there is also a fine line between love and obsession
What will happen if this love changes into obsession
This is Baldev Singh's obsession for his childhood foe Veera since childhood he is just obsessed with her...
What will happen if he comes to know that Veera has different plans altogether...
What happens if he comes to know that Veera love somebody else and doesn't like this pind,this country,this very angry young man ,
Who is dreaming about her day and night what will happen?
If he comes to know that his lady love is in love with his cousin,Karan what will he do?
Will he forget her or get her by hook or by crook,
What will this love story lead to??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mix of jealousy, rivalry, love and hate🤔 sounds good to me 👍🏼😆..but next update march ke baad kyun?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!! Pls continue 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note:sorry for the late update I had my second term and finals on head so I was busy with that...

Character sketch[FONT=Arial]

Veera Sampooran Singh:
stically after she meets Baldev.She always wanted to go
To America and live there but,destiny had something else for her.

A total fashionista.Who loves the word Fashion who has h
Her life for fashion.
Doesn't believe In god and hates her
Veerji and father Sampooran Singh very Much.
She loves Karan Khanna unaware of the fact that he is related to her
Balwant uncle.Life changes drastically after she meets Baldev.
She always wanted to go
To America and live there but,destiny had something else for her.


Baldev Singh:

Handsome hunk of his pind.
every girl drools over him but he,
he is loves,obsessed with Veera,
cares for her and wants to be with
her he will bring a hurricane in her sweet life


Karan Khanna:

Handsome hunk of the college whom
every girl dreams of.
He just wants Veera warm under him on his bed
just a matter of fact that she is just a part of his bet with his
hooligan friends but slowly slowly falls for her later on.
Veera's love interest.(negative character)


Ranvijay Singh:

Sweet cute boy of the village like Baldev.
Rival of Baldev wants to defeat him in everything
both Baldev and Ranvi has the the
same characteristics but he is th le one to show off his goodness.
Loves his sister dearly and can do anything for her.
Ranvi is not dumb in my story as in the show


Gunjan Singh:the patakha of the village
.loves Ranvi dearly and marry's
him in tragic circumstances really good at heart and really
mature unlike Veera immature and childish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds cool!! Ab jaldi se part 1 update karo plz!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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siperb sketches of al character
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds awesome now update soon
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Note:thanks everyone for ur encouragement love u all do give ur feedbacks pls


Chapter:1

It was the day,the day in which a brother would meet his sister a day in which a mother would meet his daughter,thinking why I said his instead of her because he forgot his name he just remembers one thing and he is known for this one thing Veera ke veerji.A young handsome boy in his mid twenties named Ranvijay Singh was a good boy of true pind known for all good things,he took his little sister's responsibility from a very young age and now,now she is coming...
Next day(Veera's college)
Every boy or let's say every one in the college were saying VEERA VEERA
And there she was the most beautiful girl in the college Veera or better known as Diva was here
"The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
There Veera comes with her back turned to everyone with four five outfits in hand as the music plays
I've got it all,
Jimmy Choo & Manolo, Prada, Galliano,
Cant get nuff, I want more and more...
Then she goes in a room changes and comes in a pink dress
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Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi,
Diwana har dil hogya,
Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,
Ki jeena mushkil ho gya !!
Veera whirls around winks at a random boy goes in her room again to change
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
Veera comes back in a silver part dress
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Mujhsi kahi, koi nahi,
Jo sab k khabo me hai, I'm the one !!
Duniya mere, piche chale,
Mai sabse age hu, I'm number one !!
Veera whirls twice Karan comes by that time
I've got it all,
Jimmy Choo & Manolo, Prada, Galliano,
Cant get nuff, I want more and more...
Louis Vuitton & the Stella Mccartney, Donatella Versace,
She picks up a branded silver purse with crimson red lipstick
I Use bag from GUCCI !!
Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi,
Diwana har dil hogya,
Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,
She walks a ramp towards where everyone stood still
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything
The girl's got everything"
And the song finishes,this was Veera's daily routine she then sways her hand in the air by chance any boy is lucky to get hold of her hand and that lucky guy is Karan who lustfully makes circles on her hand which is definitely not unnoticed by her but she ignores it
Some other girls gives her a call
Random girl1:Veera mam Veera mam ek Larki hai Jo humare group mein aana chahati hai
Random girl2:ap please jaldi Chalo abhi convocation ceremony se pehele
Veera makes a face and goes there to find out that the situation is...ragging
Veera:aeee stop!!!!!
Everyone get stunned
Veera:ye kya kar rahe ho?haan! If she is new then make her feel comfortable not this
She continues
Neeyati you are included in our gang
She smiles
But only on one condition
Rocky a random boy comes
Veera:kiss him or get lost the countdown begins
10 9 8 7 6 54 3 2 ...1

Note:that's it for today pls give ur feedbacks


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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh..my verra is nowhere lyk our veera...but i lyk iy...waiting for baldev
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice! Evil Veera 😆 ...plz give longer updates 😊

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