The abduction(a veeba dark ff) chapter 3 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note:sorry for the late update but I tried the best to make it to the point pls like and comment plsss.love,Alyna

Chapter:2

VEERA
A voice called out she turned to only see her biggest nightmare her one and only her so called "veerji" she was only angry and upset after seeing him but faked a huge smile as she is a very good actress
Ranvi:Veera tu ae ki kar rahi hai ?tu khud ek Larki hai aur ae mainu tujh se ae umeed bilkul nai thi, main
Apni behen de Taraf se aap se Maafi
Maangta hoon meri behen bohout
Nadaan hai aur uss mein bohout bachpana bhi hai iss vaaste...
He was cut by Neeyati
Neeyati:ji aap kiyun Maafi maang rahe hain aap ki koi galti nahi
Veera butted it
Veera:toh kya meri galti hai
Ranvi:Veera ...
He was further going to explain but then her teacher called her and the convocation ceremony began after she was awarded for the most intelligent and beautiful girl in the college they left for Pritampura.
Veera and Ranvi both were in an awkward silence and when they reached there every single person were celebrating the return of protampura's one and only graduate girl that she was she stepped out of the bus and whole of Pritampura gasped by looking at her clothing which was a red knee length dress with high heels.
From the time she arrived she could feel being watched by someone by she shoved her thought and thought she is paranoid she reached her house where Ratan was standing
With Aarti ki thaal
Veera came an went straight to her room leaving everybody shocked
Precap:Baldev's grand entry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice,..do continue fast.cant wait to read sher's entry.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can't wait for the grand entry ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update soon can't wait for the entry of sher
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note:pls like and comment and just don't ignore it feel free to criticize .


Chapter:3
It was Veera's second day of her pind and she was really excited as to when she'll leave this pind for good.then suddenly her eyes went on the crowd all were girls actually then suddenly...
Aaya laadiye ni tera sehriya wala
Byavan aaya
Aaya heeriye ni tera sehriya wala
Byavan aaya
Aaya te sata rang laya laadiye ni tera sehriya wala
Aaya laadiye ni tera sehriya wala
Byavan aaya
She heard a tune and a beautiful voice,she then saw a boy around her age wearing blue silk Kurta light blue jeans a green pagry and a stick (the typical punjabi Munda types)
O o bole angrezi munda [O karda tezi munda]
Lagata woh tie shaie [Hai very Hi-Fi]
O bole village ko ganda [hO badla hai yeh banda]
Hai bhoola wo desi taane [Hai gaye English gaane]
Aata jata nuks nikale kaam dhaam ka na
Aata jata nuks nikale kaam dhaam ka na
Paav samundar jake usne itna hi jaana
Veera's heart started really fast as he turned in a swift movement and sang
Ke saj dhaj ke, tashan mein rehna
Ke saj dhaj ke, tashan mein rehna
Ke ban than ke, jashan mein rehna
Ke saj dhaj ke. tashan mein rehna
Suddenly out of no where wind blue on her face causing her silky curls fall on her milky skin of her face she was mesmerized dark brown eyes,cute button nose,unshaven cheeks,strong jaw,this guy had really strong features
As he continues
Haye soniya di moniya vi gabru jawaan vi
Aaniya ko mil jaani yahi koi jaahnvi
Haye soniya di moniya vi gabru jawaan vi
Aaniya ko mil jaani yahi koi jaahnvi
He notices Veera but doesn't recognizes her he thought she was some random shehri hot chick he made round circles and with a swift movement caught her hand and whirled her around twice which made her lose her balance which made her to get hold of Baldev's macular chest which was beating very due to the dance or something she didn't know their eyes locked as if in some trance he left her and continued dancing
Thodi khaas ada hai te vakhri shaan vi
Oye shaan vi shaan vi hoye...

Pyaar ko beja apne aap hi be jaana
Pyaar ko beja apne aap hi be jaana

{Oye chhora khasama nu khanya mar jaanya jaa}

Ke saj dhaj ke, tashan mein rehna
Ke saj dhaj ke, tashan mein rehna
Ke ban than ke, jashan mein rehna
Ke saj dhaj ke. tashan mein rehna
He finished the song and all clapped for him as she went to approach him someone called him Baldev praaji which made her stunned was it Baldev her childhood worst enemy this was her worst night mare she was attracted to her worst enemy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like it so far!! But plz plz plz it a request, do give longer updates 😊

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