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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
thank you for the wonderful comments guys😳😊.i will definetly continue.
i will try my best to give the dialouges in punjabhi from next update onwards.😊😆.
anirudh will be kicked out asap.
but our veeba has thier own style in everything...so expect great twists coming your way.
have exams this week,but still will make time to update,
once again thank you guys sooo much for liking my ff.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
part 6
Baldev and veera was walking on the road after the rain has stopped.
the road was filled with rocks,so veera accidently tripped on one.but luckily baldev caught her by waist just in time.

(mahiyaa tune playing)
both stood up straight after some time and baldev started scolding her.
"tu kaha dekhke jaa rahi hai?tannu kuch ho jatha tho.."
veera did not let him complete his words as she quickly placed her lips on his making him muted.

"tu haina mere saath,toh mainnu fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat hai kya,mujseh zyaada tu meri kayaal rakhta hai."

baldev started smiling and pulled her close.
"itna yaqeen mujpe?"

veera says,"haan.ek duje ke saath ladte zaroor hai hum.lekin jab mai koi takleef mai hotha hai tab aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki mera sher muje bachana nahi aata waham par"

"waah,kya baath hai.sherni itna..woh kya kehta teri angrezi mai,haan itna romaantic bhi ban sakti hai kya?"

baldev began to make fun of veera
veera began hitting baldev

baldev,aaj toh mai teri jaan le loongi..
baldev paused for a second and said.

'aisa mat karna'

'kyom nahi kar sakta hai?tannu dar hai marne ke baath se hi'

veera asked him teasingly.

baldev replies,
meri jaan tujme basti hai.agar tu mera jaan le lega toh tu tannu apna jaan bhi lena padega saath.
aur mai yeh nahi chaahta.


veera 's eyes began to be filled with tears.
how was she able to fill her hatred for this baldev,who loves her more than anything.

veera bounced onto baldev and both shared a tight hug.

i love u baldev..

mai bhi love u kudiye..

at night in ss house,
anirudh came to meet veera.
baldev was coming to drop veera when he saw him.
'tu yaham kya kar rahi hai?'baldev became angry on seeing him.

veera tried to calm down baldev...
baldev,shaant hona.kuch zaroori kaam hoga usse,tabhi toh woh raath ko mere ghar aayu huwa hai.

anirudh did not understand why veera was behaving and consoling baldev like this.
but he was too busy to think about that.

veera,maine koi zaroori kaam se hi aaya tha.

anirudh,tu kal aa,hum aaram se betkar baath karenge.ab raat bohot ho gaya hai.tu ja..
anirudh came in front of veera and said loudly whereas baldev's temperature is increasing.

veera,muje abhi baath karna hai.
muje apna jawaab chahiye..abhi issi waqt.

baldev had it enough of him and shouted,
'kon sa jawaab ke baat kar raha hai tu? aur woh bhi itni raat mai aakar ek ladki ke ghar mai'

anirudh stared at baldev and replied..
woh jawaab jo veera ne kaha ki woh baad me batayenge jab maine usse kal propose kiya..


veera was helpless . she could not stop him from saying that.

baldev began to take steps back.
has he heard something wrong.he wondered.

he shouted at veera when he came back to his senses,
tune isse bataya ki tu soch ke batayegi.matlab tannu mujse pyaar nahi hai..

anirudh was shocked by hearing that

veera tried to explain but baldev stormed out of the house.
anirudh thought in mind,"chalo,kuch tho accha hua.ab baldev veera ko itni aasani se maaf nahi karega.matlab mera plan kamayaab hone laga"

outside,
veera began to plead crying,'baldev,mai uske dil nahi dukhana chahti thi tho bas isiliye maine usse jhoot bhola ki main sochke batayegi usko.
sach baldev mai usse pyaar nahi karti hun.sirf tumse.
woh mera dost hai .bas isiliye uss samay uske dil todna nahi chahti thi mai...

baldev came closer to veera and spoke..
tho kya iska yeh matlab hua veera ki tu har kisike dil rakhne vaaste unse kahoonga ki tu sochke batayegi? haan? bol veera..ab chup kyom ho?

things were getting out of veera's hand.she knew she should not have said this to anirudh last night.

baldev,mainnu maaf kardo.maine aisa matlab se nahi bhola.please muje samja karo na..

baldev looked into her eyes which were fillend with tears.
but remember the words she said to anirudh.

veera,mainnu lagta hai ki tu mainnu ek time pass ke tarah istemaal karti hai.
maine socha ki tum ne apni zindagi mere naam kar diye.par mai galat tha.
hamesha ki tarah..ek baar aur,baldev singh galat tha.


baldev being broken drove fast away from veera's house leaving a shattered veera alone ..



do comment and like⭐️😊🤗


Edited by sanjanabaldev - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
have model exams going on.
will only be able to update after 2 weeks.😊
hope you all liked this update
Edited by sanjanabaldev - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome update sanju, LOVED IT!!! 👍🏼Best of luck for your model exams!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Very good!! But patch up jaldi karna plz 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
very well written... best of luck for your exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
thank you guys soo much.your appreciation makes me to improve.
part 7 will come up soon in a week itself.
will try my best to update..😊😊

and yeah agar ladai hui tho patchup bhi hoga.
waise bhi veeba kitne din tak rute rehenge?😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Very well written sanju as alwasy... please jaldi sy patch up krwa dena ziyada missunderstandings create mat krna... best of luck for your model exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 7


anirudh was walking down the streets when suddenly a hand came and came and caught him..
mainnu chadd,kon hai?

it was dark all around so anirudh could not see who it was.
the person dragged him through the streets .he kidnapped him but no one saw that.

veera at her room crying,
veera,tu ro mat,mai aaya hoon na..
veera turned back to see baldev with a box of choclates.
tu,tu yaham kaise? tu toh mujseh naaraz tha na..

baldev,veera tannu pata haina mera gussa ekdum pressure cooker jaise hai.isiliye mai bas yuhi tuj par gussa hua.
mainnu samajna chahiye ki tum ne usse aisa kyom kaha aur yeh bhi ki tu sirf mujseh pyaar karti hai.haina?

veera ran to baldev's arms.
baldev, tu teek toh haina,tu jab samajdhari ki baat karte ho toh mainnu toh tension aa jaati hai.

baldev started laughing.
baldev, yeh tension hamesha keliye ab teri hone waali hai..

baldev picked her up in his arms and walked towards her bed
veera,baldev ,i love u.
baldev,main bhi luv u
he slowly placed her on the bed and kissed her forhead.

meri veerakdi ko mujse aur koi nahi cheen sakta,haina?

veera brushed baldev's hair by her hands
muje apne sher se cheen na door muje teri nazron se koi bhi alag nahi kar sakta.
mai teri hun aur tu mera
chahe hamare dosti ,dushmani ya pyaar chale us waqt pe.
baldev cupped veera's face.they shared a kiss.it turned passionate as their hunger to get each other flooded out.
veera,baldev main bahut lucky hoon jo muje tu milla

baldev,lekin veera mujseh zyaada lucky nahi hai tu,jab se yeh sherni meri zindagi mai aaya hai mere life hi badal gaya..

baldev placed his lips again on her lips and sealed it as his own. he leaned onto veera
but suddenly the kiss was broken by a phone call.


ab yeh kya nahi siyaapa hai,

veera was laughing seeing baldev irritated.
baldev was going to cut the call when he saw the number and who was calling him he quickly jumped out from the bed.
baldev,veera mainnu yeh call lena hoga ek minute.

baldev redialled the number and walked towards the window so veera cant hear.
baldev,kaam hua ki nahi?
person on phone, hua.jaise tumne kaha.
lekin sirf iss baar tum jeet gaye ho,agli baar shayad nahi jeet paaunga.
baldev,jeet meri tha ,the, aur hamesha rahenge.aap uss baat ka phikar mat karo,
person on phone,teek hai phir.

baldev cut the phone and came back to veera
veera,kon tha?
baldev,koi nahi ,bas mere dost tha.lekin veera sun,mainnu ab jana hoga bahut der ho gaya hai

veera was sad hearing that.

baldev gave her a kiss ,
phikar naa kar mere heeriye,jald se jald tannu apne dulhan banakar apne saath lekar jaaunga..

veera smiled at that.
they shared a passionate hug.both of them holded on to each other promising to never let go.



thats it for today.
drop in comments and likes.😊😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Oye hoye!! Sher ne phir koi ulta kaam to nahi kar dia 😲👏

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