Pyaar Ya Dosti part 7 pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuramesh26

arrey waah! nice thought sher proposing - (rather roaring) claiming his sherni as his over the cliff!😉

Anirudh ka chutti kardo yaar bohot pakaatha hai😆.
eeshvara! da moley balu ne endhengilum sambavichalo ividae ellavarum🤢
take care and thanks for the PM

thank you chechi.lets just hope that veera will realise her love..but will it be too late? Thats what this story wil🤗l unfold...will try to give next update faster...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow wow amazing superb no words how I say simply hatsi off 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...bohot hi vaddiya ff hain ye di... aaj maine saari updates ek saath padli... omg...aap baldev ko nahin maaregi na...? agar voh chala gaya tho story khatam...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5


The earth was spinning for veera now.
Her heart beat was stopping...
hearing baldev's words,"jisse maine pyaar kiya,agar muje usse nahi milla tho mai zinda rehna ka koi wajah nahi hai)
(if i do dont get the person iam in love with,then there is no reason for me to live)


baldev began to move back...to the cliff.
veera began to cry,"baldev dekh..meri baath tho sun"
(look baldev, just hear me..)
but i was too late.veera was helpless.
aahhh...veera...he screamed and fell.

baldevvv...
veera jumped to hold onto him.
"teri majaal jo tune tunne muje chodkar jaane ki koshish ki.mai tannu itni aasani se azaad nahi hone doonga"
(dont even dare to try to leave me and ko.i will not let you be free so easily)
she began to pull baldev up with all her might.
baldev saw something in veera's eyes he had never seen before.sparks of love began to flow like waves in her eyes.
that was enough for baldev to keep his heart beating on.

"oye kamli,muje yahi sunna tha tere muh se.ab muje chod de."
(hey u crazy, i just wanted to hear this from your mouth.now leave me)

veera was shocked.
has he gone nuts? he is telling her to leave him

baldev understood by looking at veera's face that his words were not clear to her.
"muje kuch nahi hoga,chad de mainnu"
(nothing will happen to me.let me go off)

baldev himself let him free of veera's hands..to her amusement baldev casually jumped down,
to her awestruck this was a small cliff from which you can easily climb down and jump.it was a set up by baldev to scare veera that he will jump of a real cliff.

baldev came to veera from the other side of the cliff.
He sat down next to veera and placed his lips on hers,veera first was pushing away baldev then finally lost to his lovely touch on her hair .

He murmered,"tannu ki laga?mai tuje chodkar aise hi jaaunga? mai jaanthi thi ki veera singh bhi muje pyaar karne lage jiss din maine tannu kiss kiya teri gaal pe tunne muje roka nahin,balki teri chehre mai ek muskurahat aa gayi,tuje khushi aathi hai jab bhi mai teri paas aaun,aur jis din tum ne muje gale lagaya uss samay jab mai hatna jaa raha tha tunne mainnu jaane nahi diya..


isse pyaar nahi tho kya kehte hai?

(what did u think? that i will just leave you and go?i knew from the day that veera singh started to love me from the day when i kissed you on your cheek and you did not stop me,infact you had a smile on your face,you get happy whenever i come near you,and the day you hugged me when i was starting to let go off you,you did not let me.

if this is not love that what should it be called?)

veera sobbed on baldev's chest ..
"veera,mai jaantha tha ki tum itni aasani se apne pyaar ka qubool nahi karegi,aakhir pritampura ki sherni tho ho tum,isiliye mere paas iske aalava teri pyaar ko baahar nikalvane ka aur koi tareeka nahi tha veera"

(veera,i knew that you will not easily accept you love,after all your pritampura's lioness,i did not had any other option than this to make your love for me come out)

veera started hitting baldev,"tu jaantha hai ki main kitna dar gaya?jaan nikal rahi thi meri toh...agar tannu kuch ho jaatha tho mai apne aapko hi maar.."

(did u know how scared i was? if something happend to you then i myself will kill ...)

baldev covered her mouth
"khabardar agar tune marne ki baath bhi ki toh..."
( dont even dare to say about killing yourself)
agar mai zinda bhi ho toh yeh sochke ki tu meri hai
(iam alive just because of the thought that your mine)

veera was overwhelmed by this.
she began to say,"baldev...mai tuje like nahi...love karthi hun,muje nahi pata ki yeh sab kuch kab hua kaise hua.
but baldev,yakeen maan...mai sacchi mai tere naal pyaar karthi hun.

baldev started to smile like an idiot . he has never been this much happy in his whole life
veera holded to to his hands and said."sherni hun..itni aasani se sher ke haathom thodi na aayegi".
(iam a lioness...cant come into the hands of lions that easy)

they laughed out loud.

baldev placed his hands on veera's waist and came closer.
"lekin aakhir aa hi gaya naa...ab tuje koi nahi bacha paayega"
(but finally u came ...now no one can rescue you)



baldev pulled veera close to him.they hugged each other.


rain began to pour down on these two love birds.it blessed them .

they kissed each other with passion and love which had been burried under them for days.both attacked each other with adoration.
baldev made his way under veera's skin.
veera was also not letting go..
The unique sher and sherni who expressed their love in their own wild ways...




p.s. sorry,was not able to update for soo long.next update will be after 2 weeks as my exams are coming.
so hope this part will make it up for the 2 weeks delay.
please comment and like.⭐️
if i dont get comments or like i am thinking to stop this ff and will think you all does not like it.😭
hope you all like it!




Edited by sanjanabaldev - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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like this post so that i will know who alll want pms for the next update.
also you can send my buddy requests.
hope you all like the new update!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice update ❤️❤️❤️ And plz do continue I love it 😉 ...also I just wanted to say that it might be better if u wrote the dialogues as if VeeBa are talking, I mean like they usually talk in Punjabi/Hindi but more Punjabi so it would be nice reading more punjabi in their dialogues... Hope that makes sense 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: veeba4eva

Very nice update ❤️❤️❤️ And plz do continue I love it 😉 ...also I just wanted to say that it might be better if u wrote the dialogues as if VeeBa are talking, I mean like they usually talk in Punjabi/Hindi but more Punjabi so it would be nice reading more punjabi in their dialogues... Hope that makes sense 😊





thank you sooo much . and yes,i thought of writting it in punjabhi with hindi but just was afraid if everybody will understand it..😉😃,from next update on wards i will do like that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awesome update sanju plzzz do continue it and don't stop wiritng... u really doing a geat job welldone keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Pls stop kidding dear ur awesome yaar the way u expressed Veeras feelings for Baldev but dear plz kick anirudh out ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Aha! Sanjana! Sanjanatamannah se sanjanabaldev! Kya bat hai! Anyways nice update,just the hindi dialogues are drawbacks,otherwise its gud :-)

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