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Beautiful... Omg I loved it 👏
You guys write so well... Awesome expression 😃
My fav part where there was the reference yo a burning flame and the candle...
Beautiful expression and brilliant choice of words and ofcourse a spectacular plot.. 😳
Looks like an emotional and intense story.. Can't wait plzzz update soon 😭

Originally posted by: Princessxyz

Beautiful... Omg I loved it 👏
You guys write so well... Awesome expression 😃
My fav part where there was the reference yo a burning flame and the candle...
Beautiful expression and brilliant choice of words and ofcourse a spectacular plot.. 😳
Looks like an emotional and intense story.. Can't wait plzzz update soon 😭

Thank u so much! your comment just boosted our confidence 😃 and yes thank the electric board for cutting the electricity that fateful day which gave rise to a brainstorming candle idea in vibha's head 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki36

That was so well written, felt so bad for baldev as I read that!! Veera is a such a mean cow for throwing salt in his wounds, glad its haunting her and continues to do so.

poor baldev 😭

continue asap please and thanks for the pm

I am GLAD to hear your reaction!!! 😃 this is the exact reaction i wanted towards veera. vibha pestering you to rewrite this chap over and over again has paid off! 😉 😃

Originally posted by: sarah333

you protray the emotions sooo well 👏! Loving every bit of it ❤️ ! can't wait to read more of it😳 ...thanks for the PM 🤗

thank u so much for your interest and enthusiasm 😃 yes i agree she does portray emotions very well 😳

@Bars @Jenvita_Neha. @feck thank u all so much for the support and nice comments 😃

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

very interserting.. eagerly waiting 😳

thank u so much! 😃

lovely update 😃 waiting for the next part .

Originally posted by: jammygal19

Awesome update!

Reminded me of Baldev's emotional breakdown in the show after sarpanch elections 😭

How I wish Veera had got to know that Baldev hadn't attacked Ranvi..But those CVs 😡

Looking forward to reading the next part 😊

i could never get the fake love drama,election loss and the false accusations veera hurled at him for beating ranvi out of my head 😭 all this along with the attitude veera shows towards him and the way she takes him for granted even after falling for him ( 😡 ) is what gave rise to this story! 😃 thank u so much for reading and sharing your thoughts,we appreciate it very much 😃

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan

lovely update 😃 waiting for the next part .

thank u 😃 the waiting will not be too long we will update in max two days time,by or before the 4th hopefully 😛 😃

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Thank u so much! your comment just boosted our confidence😃and yes thank the electric board for cutting the electricity that fateful day which gave rise to a brainstorming candle idea in vibha's head😆

Haha.. It was a great idea 😳
I actually got addicted to this forum by accidentally coming across an FF , so FFs are my absolute fav. Hence , I try to read them regularly 😳 u guys have gotten me curious about what's gonna happen in the story so I'm quite interested.
Btw I'm Marwah , would love to be frnds with u guys 😳