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ManaliRoy

@ManaliRoy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: zainabawoon
I dont remember changing the plot honey but then what part of it did you exactly know,i dont remember... (msg about that on FB lol ) oh i know i can never write anything short,ask vibha about it for further knowledge 😆 but vibha is here to save the day,she is like the very dutiful censor board,she writes in one page what took me 3 pages to narrate 😆 vibha 🤗

I so knew it,,that's why mentioned it is her who did the kanjoosi lol.😉
I was talking about the narration which I knew 😲

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ManaliRoy

I so knew it,,that's why mentioned it is her who did the kanjoosi lol.😉
I was talking about the narration which I knew 😲

This is just preface,its like a teaser lol,wait till we update the chapters 😛

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Lovely_KaranIka

@Lovely_KaranIka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

very interserting.. eagerly waiting 😳

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

@Manali, I'm not Kanjoos😡😉 It was only a trailer as Zainab said...

@Zainab, *Hugs back*🤗

@Everyone, Thank you so much for the wonderful comments🤗😃
Im gonna post the first chapter in a while...

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Vibha Bangalore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

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...Jammy...

@...Jammy...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awesome update!

Reminded me of Baldev's emotional breakdown in the show after sarpanch elections 😭

How I wish Veera had got to know that Baldev hadn't attacked Ranvi..But those CVs 😡

Looking forward to reading the next part 😊

Edited by jammygal19 - 10 years ago

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Bars

@Bars

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Gud start! Baldeva 😭 Waiting to read next part! Update soon. 😊

Edited by Bars - 10 years ago

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Nikki

@Nikki36

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

That was so well written, felt so bad for baldev as I read that!! Veera is a such a mean cow for throwing salt in his wounds, glad its haunting her and continues to do so.

poor baldev 😭

continue asap please and thanks for the pm