~VeeBa FF~||Ye Bair Ishq||22/6 Ch15 New Update Pg55 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunny303

Woo woo what a hit update bud!!!

I'm loving this:)))

Thnks sunny!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks to these people for liking the previous chapter!
love you all!
😳

Chapter-8

Baldev Looked at her. She was looking at him in shock. He felt hesitant.
He realized his hands were still on her waist and her hands were holding on to his back.

He released her quickly and backed off.

Veera:- uhmm.uh!!! Tu... tu ...
Baldev:- mai... mai.. vo... mai...mai... mai na.. mai...

Veera:- chup kar bakre! 😡
Baldev:- 😡 Meri galti hai? Inni raat me.. kaun ghoom raha tha??
Veera:- mai sambhal leti.. kitni baar bataana padega tenu??
Baldev:- dikh raha tha kitna sambhaal rahi thi tu!! 😡

Veera:- abb vaapas chale?🤢
Baldev:- haa chal vaapas.

Thankfully they found their way back and reached the camp site.

Next day in college. Both Veera and Baldev couldn't help but think about their first kiss ever.

Being in the same friends group they were always close by and both were lost in their own world.

Aakash:- veera.. tu kitthe khoyi huyi hai kal se?
Veera:- vo.. kuch nahi yaar...
Aakash:- fir baldev se ladai ki tune?


Veera recalled how Baldev had kissed her.

Veera:- uhmmm...😕

She hated Baldev for what all he had done with her... But she felt jealous whenever she saw him with ananya... ananya on the other hand had no idea about all this..
She treated veera as her best friend and told everything about her relationship.

*Flashback Ends*
Veera is sitting in her Krishi Vidyalay when Aanchal comes running to her.
Veera:- aanchal??
Aanchal:- mummmaa!!! 😭
Veera:- ki hoya tujhe?? haan??😲
Aanchal:- Mumma... vo mere class me na.. ek ladka hai.. usne mujhse kaha ki mere papa abb kabhi vaapas nahi ayenge 😭
Veera:- 😕 beta..

Veera hugs her tightly.
Veera:- chal mere saath.. aaja.. hum ice-cream khayenge theek hai.
She said this trying to hide her tears.

Aanchal quietly agreed.
Veera took her to the nearby ice-cream shop.
Aanchal:- mumma.. mujhe ... ice-cream nahi khaani... mujhe lassi peeni hai!
Veera:- arre? lassi? kyu?
Aanchal:- Ranvi chachu ne kaha tha ki lassi peene se taakat badhti hai!
Veera:- 😆 accha.. tu kya karegi takatvar banke?
Aanchal:- mai.. mai jaake apne papa ko leke aungi.. vo bohot door chale gaye hain na?
Veera's eyes welled up.

Shopkeeper:- kya doon? lassi?
Veera:- jee...
Aanchal:- 2 glass dena..aadha-aadha...
Veera:- kyu? aadha aadha 2 kyu?
Aanchal:- mumma.. 2 aadhe aadhe 1 poore se zyaada hote hain!!

Veera recalls:
Ananya:- dev, tum mere liye drink le aaoge?😊
Baldev- haa haa abhi laaya...😊
He goes to the drink corner.
Baldev:- oye!! Two half apple
juice plz.!! Aur saath me ek extra glass dena.
Jaggu:- bhai? Ye kya matlab?😕
Baldev:- gadhe! Do half, ek full se zyaada hote hain! Samjha!!

Aanchal:- mumma.. kya hua?
Veera:- kuch nahi.. tu bilkul apne papa pe gayi hai!!😆

Veera got a call from ranvi, there was some work in KV.
Veera:- aanchal chheti kar.. kaam se jaana hai..
Aanchal:- aap jao mumma.. mai vo.. dalbeer chachu ke saath aa jaungi.. unki shop baaju me hi hai na...
Veera:- theek hai beta.. khayaal rakhiyo apna.. idhar udhar na ghoomne lagiyo! theek hai na!?
aanchal nods.

Veera leaves smiling.

Aanchal finishes her lassi and head for dalbeer's shop... just when she was about to reach there, few children gather around her.

random boy:- ye dekho!! aa gayi... 😆
aanchal:- 😡 bhaag yaha se..
boy:- kyu? tere baap ki sadak hai?😆
aanchal:- mai chhadungi nahi tum logo ko samjhe!!!
boy:- hume dhamki de rahi hai??😡 hume gussa aa gaya na, toh koi tujhe bacchane bhi nahi ayega..
aanchal:- kyu? kyu nahi ayega?
boy:- jike papa jee hi use chhadd ke chale gaye ho. use kaun bachaane ayega!!😆

aanchal gives a punch on that boy's face and runs away crying.
She is sitting near the lake.
aanchal:- 😭😭

She suddenly feels a hand on her shoulder.
She looks up to see a tall, and handsome figure. She had never seen him before.

She stands up. She hardly reaches his knees.
aanchal:- oh!! aap toh hero jaise dikh rahe hain.. kaun hai aap?

He knelt down and took out his goggles. It was Baldev.
Baldev:- 😊 mere naam baldev hai... aapka?
Aanchal:- aanchal.. 😳
Baldev:- aap ro kyu rahe the?
Aanchal:- avai!! 😆
Baldev picks her up in his arms.
Baldev:- chalo!! hum chalke lassi peete hain!
Aanchal:- vaise toh mai abhi pee ke aayi lekin mai fir se pee sakti hu...😳 usse taakat milti hai na..
Baldev:- 😆 haa princess.. chaliye... 😳

Meanwhile, Veera at KV doing some work with ranvi.
Ranvi:- Veera... aaj ka din yaad hai tenu... aaj ke din tune apna college khatam kiya tha.. farewell tha tera...
Veera:- aapnu kaise yaad hai veer jee?
Ranvi:- arre.. kinna intejaar kiya tha maine ki kabb tu vaapas ayegi... toh bass yaad hai!

Veera smiles.

*flashback*

It was the college farewell day.
Everyone was enjoying the party while badlev was drunk and sitting with his friends.
Billa:- bhai bass karo! kitna piyoge!
Baldev:- chup kar!!! ye sab uss veera ki vajah se hua hai! 😡 i hate her! 😡
Jaggi:- bhai...
Baldev:- ye usne theek nahi kiya!!!!😡 i hate her
Billa:- kya theek nahi kiya bhai!
Baldev:- kuch theek nahi kiya!!! 😡 sab. sab galat kiya!!!
dekh kaise hass rahi hai aakash ke saath!!!😡😭

Billa:- bhai lekin.. ananya aapko dhoondh rahi thi...
Badlev:- kya? ananya.. arre baap re... mujhe jaana hoga.. use bura lagega toh. veera ko bhi bura lagega... ruk./.
Baldev left.

Jaggi:- ye bhai dono me se kisse pyaar karte hain?😕

Precap:- Veera take Baldev to his room, Baldev hugs her.
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I know this was small, but i am busy with some work... sorry!! 😭 and translations baad me ok!!
please hit like and comment!!! love u all! 😳




Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
BALLU'S BACK!!!!!😲 ,gawwwd do u have any idea abt hw desperate i was 4 his return 2 the present,yeah it was short rimi,but was good enough 2 make me impatient 4 the nxt update.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

BALLU'S BACK!!!!!😲 ,gawwwd do u have any idea abt hw desperate i was 4 his return 2 the present,yeah it was short rimi,but was good enough 2 make me impatient 4 the nxt update.😃

thnks dear!! 😆 even i was dying for badelv's entry!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear...wow🥳 finally our handsome prince is back. And I guess he is not aware of his daughter??😲 and drunk Ballu one of my favorites. You always include something in your stories which makes me visualize it and fall in love more with your story - last time it was Vishal singing and this time his goggles. The precap looks awesome😉 I am seriously in love with your story dear. Though small this was quite a lovely update. Awesome dear.👏 Please do update soon as I am eagerly waiting for veeba encounter in the present. And thanks dear for updating it so soon.🤗 Great story and great writing👏 Thanks as well for the PM.
Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaaww...😭😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭😭
my khushi ke aansu are not evn stopping rimi...yeh tune kya likha hai??...haan kya likha hai yaar..tune..⭐️⭐️

love u for this😳😳 😳😳 😳😳 😳😳..i'm loving the path of stry progression👏👏 👏👏..u r tickling my heart..with ur evry update..😉😉

oh wow..ballu is back..omg he is back..that too..in a cool guy avtar..offo..i'm totally in love this guy nw..

aaw..loved cute aanchal😳😳 n her dialogues..aaw..tho papa par gayi hai kudi..not only in thinking..but also in man handling n fighting😆😆😆

aaj ke update chota tha ..lekin tu badi khush hai na aaj😉😉..tho maaf kar diya😆😆..chalo..ab chetti chetti ek accha long wala update karna..

plzz continue it asap..i can't wait for d nxt ...love ya🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗

Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just loved your update, it's got all the emotions in right quantity😳
Romance, jealousy, suspense and moreover Baldev's entryHim meeting his own gal was very sweet and emotional😭... Plz update soon, next time want more detailed update, plzzz😛
Edited by Veebafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow ...amazing update...
U nailed it...continue posting such amazing updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awes Ballu's back!!! What a cute meeting between the two:)))

Loved it bud...I'm looking forwRd to the next chapter cuz this story is getting so interesting!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Hey dear...wow🥳 finally our handsome prince is back. And I guess he is not aware of his daughter??😲and drunk Balluone of my favorites. You always include something in your stories which makes me visualize it and fall in love more with your story - last time it was Vishal singing and this time his goggles. The precap looks awesome😉I am seriously in love with your story dear. Though small this was quite a lovely update. Awesome dear.👏Please do update soon as I am eagerly waiting for veeba encounter in the present. And thanks dear for updating it so soon.🤗Great story and great writing👏Thanks as well for the PM.


oh awww eli!! thnku so much!!! 😳 i am so happy today and with your complimets now i m evn more happy!! thnk u sooo much again! keep reading!!!

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