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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

aww..it was breath taking yaar...i thnk i need some air ...huh..it was so hot ..can't wait 4 d nxt..continue asap ...

.btw sorry for the loss dear..n glad dat u r getting better..🤗🤗

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

unres in this page at the bottom..

Edited by DazzilerDizzy - 11 years ago

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Great update, baldev is so horrible, I hope he doesn't try and force veera and if he does try to manhandle her I'm sure he will be in for a surprise.

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Id like to see him try...she'd beat him black and blue...

But I have faith in Ballu...he won't be able to harm a hair on her head:)))

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Sidishafan01

@Sidishafan01

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Woow gobsmacked it's sooo good l know for sure it's gonna be intense

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Ayesha797

@Ayesha797

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Wouldn't that be entertaining if that really happened on the show? 😆

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Sina this is just as i expected for u to write!😳

The evil side of him is so wanted!!

Love the whole update!!

So waiting for your this and other stories!

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bavee

@bavee

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Y? 😲 U dnt lyk my story? 😆 Its ok if u dnt..M jst an amateur writer who loves writing for fun and peace of mind..Not a professional one.if dt is wat u mean..But I do want to be one soon InshaAllah..y do u ask? 😛

hey y r getting serious..i just loved the way u have proceeded with the storyline😊..its too good👏 ..u must be proud ..hope u turn professional writer one day..i think u ll inspire ppl over here😊..keep up the good work..good luck