Veeba FF:~:Playing With Fire..:~Chapter-15,page-61 updated! - Page 13

🥺 ...hw cud he...bt I guess this is where it gt interesting.

Aww that's really very sad and emotional ... Veera is all shattered ... She is broken but how can Baldev do it ...:(

Plz update it soon :)

Thanks for the PM's really hooked on to your stories

ch 2

awesome update
y is veera talking like that

awesome update
loved it
so its all the plan
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Amazing updates dear..read 3 parts in a go..while reading 2nd part I was lyk...aaww..ab veera baldev se nafrat karti Hai..so baldev wud be sweet in d story..par..afta reading 3rd part,I jus got shocked wid baldev's dialogues..u r jus an amazin writer yaar..ab toh aag dono taraf se lagi hai...n i lyk playing wid this fire..nyc title..Tfs..
I luv ur burning passion too.. u rock wid the romance b/w veeba
Keep writing lyk this..continue soon..

Chapter-3,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100528199

CHAPTER-4.

Veera cried herself to sleep..But just outside the bedroom door,unknown to her,sat the cause of her heart break..Her husband,Baldev Singh..

He deliberately let her each sob pierce at his heart..Shredding it to tatters..

His handsome mask,a ravaged mask of helplessness,he let her sobbing sound eat and gnaw at his insides..

Baldev Singh,had never known himself to be an emotional fool.,But this once he wished,he could just reassure her,and take her back in his arms,where she truly belonged..But he just could not..He had to be patient until..

Her sobs had subsided..He took in a long shattered breath..May be she was asleep..Maybe he could just take a look at her..Just a teeny weeny look and then he would leave her alone..

He slowly opened the door,and then closed it behind him with a slight click..

She was asleep,curled up into a small ball like a baby..

His heart squeezed out in pain again..

He walked closer to her,and could still see the traces of her dried up tears..One drop had not dried yet,and without thinking he removed it with his fingers..

"Baldev..Mainu akeli chaddh ke maat ja please..?

{Baldev..Please don't leave me alone..?]"She whispered in her sleep,making him almost weep out in agony..

He felt his heart was being squeezed painfully until all the blood was forced out of it..

He could not leave her now..Not like this..

Without thinking of the consequence of his action,he got in the bed through his side,and pulled her sleeping form into his arms..

He then pulled the blanket over themselves,as she reflexively cuddled upto his embrace,sighing out and smiling even in her sleep..

He looked down at her beautiful innocent face,and could not help but give a tender smile..Then he lowered his lips,and placed a soft kiss in her forehead,gently removing soft locks of loose hair off her face..

"Veera..Tu meri hai..Aur main tera..Achcha hu,boora hu,gadha hun,job hi hun main sirf teri hun..Aur tujhe chaddhke main kabhi nai jawanga..Wo to baas..

[Veera..You are mine..And I'm yours..Good,bad,stupid,whatever I am,I am yours..And I'll never leave you..It's just that..]"He drifted off,lost in his thoughts..

"Veera tu iththe?!!"He exclaimed out in surprise,as she walked upto him and put her arms round his neck lovingly..

"Ye ki kar raha hai tu..?!Koi dekh lega hume..!"He sounded uncomfortable,and tried to remove her hand from round his neck..

She held him tightly,and pushed him up against a tree..her eyes twinkling with mischief,her face glowing,making his heart race already..

She moved her face closer to his,making him move a bit back..

"Kiu..?Main iththe nahi aa sakti..?Mainu bhi dekhna tha ki meri Sher kya karta hai har roz..!

[Why..?I can't come here..?I also wanted to see,what my Tiger does every day..!]"

He gulped down..

She should not have come here..It was risky for her...For him..

"Waise tu iththe ki kar raha tha?Yaha to aas paas kuch nai hai..

[But what were you doing over here?Nothing is around here..]"She asked frowning,as she suddenly let go of him,and looked around with a frown..

"N-..Nothing..Let's get out of here..I have something to show you..!"He declared grabbing her hand,and quickly pulling her towards the jeep..

"Surprise?!Do you have a surprise for me?!Wow Baldeva!My good and intelligent company is already having appositive effect on your brain..!"She grinned out,and naughtily pulled at his cheek,as he started the jeep,and started driving away..

He turned to pass her a lot burning look,that made her smile falter,and her skin turned rosy red..

"Wo to hona hi tha na..?!Deewana jo banake choda tainu mujhe..

[That was supposed to happen,wasn't it..?Now that you have turned me into your crazy lover..]"He said in a husky voice,making her eyes glow in response..

Finally they reached a lonely place..It was a flower garden,with fresh blossoms of every colour everywhere..

"Wow!Baldev!This place is sooo beautiful!!!"She exclaimed out anf hugged him tight in happiness..

His hands moved to her back,and held her tight..His hand slowly curving round her waist,and gently squeezing there..

She gasped out..

"Baldev..?What are you doing..?"She tried to set herself free,but he just kept his hands round her waist,and looked down at her beautiful face..

"Pyaar kar raha hu tujhse..

[I am making love to you..]"He said huskily,making hr shiver..

"Let me go someone will see us.."She pleaded softly,but his eyes only darkened in response..

"Not now..Not ever.."He whispered huskily,as his lips kissed her cheeks..

Then it moved to the corner of her lips..

She sighed out and her hands suddenly curved round his neck,slowly pulling him closer..His lips were so close to hers now,their warm breath mingling,as he looked into her beautiful large eyes,with a hungry fire burning in his own..

"Veera..Meri Veera.."He whispered huskily,as his hands tightened round her waist making her melt closer to him..

"Baldev..Chaddh na mainu..

[Baldev..Let me go..]"She pleaded in a softer voice,her eyes glazing with the passion that burned his..

His lips moved to her throat,and placed soft kisses over there,making her gasp out,and hold him tighter..

Her bangles tinkled as she clutched him tighter..And Baldev's lips moved up and down her warm milky heavenly scented neck,making her moan some more..

"Baldev.."She gasped out,as he lightly bit at her jawline..

His warm moist lips making its way to her soft lips..

Her bangles tinkled again..

He frowned..But Veera had not been wearing bangles with her jeans and shirt,sometime ago..Nor could they be lying so comfortably on the front seat of his jeep..

The thought just crossed his mind,before he rolled on top of her and claimed her soft seductive lips as his..

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Very clever the way you have mixed the past and his current situation and blended them together at the end. I can guess veera wont be very happy waking up to a kissing baldev

This is such an interesting concept...I truly don't know what's going to happen next...but I know enough about your writing to expect something awesome! Looking forward to the next update.

Superb update!!!