A veeba story part 50 (last part)

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Troll Master Gogo!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Bansuri changing sides is so typical of her. 😆 And Veera taking advantage of this is more 😆.

Aww at how Ranvi placed himself near the door! Adorable! 😳

And yikes, hope Karan's plans fail in an epic manner. 😃

Thanks for the update! Waiting for the next! 😃

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Muna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Yaar please update ASAP!!Have been waiting for a long time..for your stories!!

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

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Veera and Baldev were getting ready to have their first visit to the

dr.

Bansuri; puttar..tum log phir kisi din chale jana..aaj dil wada ghabra

rha he..pta nhi ki gal he..

Baldev; o bg kuch nhi honda..aap ko na bas..

they were getting into the jeep..Ranvi came running

Ranvi; ruk baldev..aaj mat jao..mera dil ghabra rha..me bhi chalanga

agr aaj jana zarurui he

Bansuri; ab tu hi rok inhe ranvi..mera bhi man nhi ho rha Veera nu aj

bhejne ka

Veera; baldev..do do maon ka dil ghabra rha he..tu dr. se kisi aur din

ki appointment le le..

Baldev; acha theek he jesi tum log ki marzi..

they went back inside..

*****

Surjeet and karan were furious..

karan; wo gai hi nhi..hell..ye veerji bhi na..i just want to shoot that

baldev off..but..

Surjeet; o puttar..ki faraq padta he..bacha ho bhi gya to..baldev ko

aur bache dono ko maar k veera tujhe tofe me dunga

*******

Month 6

Veera was screaming

Veera; i hate u..i hate u baldeva..aur tu..haye me mar

gai...veerji..veerji..aaa

Bansuri; bilkul is pe gya he is ka bacha..menu bhi isi trh pareshan kia

tha isne

Veera grapped baldev's collar

Veera; kuch kr wrna ye football khelte khelte menu maar dega..

Baldev; me ki karaan?

Ranvi entered the room..

Ranvi; ki hoya veera..

he was sweating badly..

Veera; veerji dekho na..menu bht dard ho rha he..booboo ko chup

karao plx..

Ranvi; han han veerakhdi..

Ranvi started singing his lullaby

[AaSmAn Pe JhOoLa DeKhO ChAnD Ne BaNaYa,

HaUlE Se ChAmAkTe SiTaRo Ne HiLaYa,

TeRe LiYe SaArI KaYnAaT HaI SaJaYi,

So JaA MeRi NiKkIyE Ni..NeEnD RaNi AaYi.]

Veera; aaa..veerji iske kicks aur tez hogaye hen

Baldev; wo to hone hi the..mera bacha he..ise ranvi ki lori nhi pasand

ane wali huh!

Ranvi; booboo..acha booboo...dekh mamaji ki gal sune ga na tu..so

ja..bg nu inna tang nhi krte..so ja booboo..so ja

Veera; haye chup hogya..dekha mera booboo mujh pe gya he..kese

veerji ki baat maan li

Ranvi; ab tu bhi so ja veerakhdi...raat bht hogai he..

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Troll Master Gogo!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Aww! Ranveera's lullaby! I miss Bhavesh and Harshita now! 😭

This was a sweet update. Loved that mother(s)ly intuition. When will Baldev and Ranvi's dushmani end? 😆😆

Why do I have a feeling you are ending this story? 😔

Edited by tvlover92 - 11 years ago

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: tvlover92
Aww! Ranveera's lullaby! I miss Bhavesh and Harshita now! 😭

This was a sweet update. Loved that mother(s)ly intuition. When will Baldev and Ranvi's dushmani end? 😆😆

Why do I have a feeling you are ending this story? 😔

i am😭 bcoz it is almost complete but dont worry il b back with season 2

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Siya N

@monumolu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

hahhahahhah Bansuri cracked me up... iska bacha is pe gaya hai lol... I love how Veera Ballu ka collar pakadti hai...

Sonu loved it... I wanna see Ballu taking care of Veera and accepting all her mood swings if possible...

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Aww VeeBa's Baby!What r u going to name her?

Continue soon!

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: overactor

i am😭 bcoz it is almost complete but dont worry il b back with season 2

Wow season 2...yay iam so glad..yuh gonna continue this!

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy
Aww VeeBa's Baby!What r u going to name her?
Continue soon!

wait and read..u'l c

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: monumolu
hahhahahhah Bansuri cracked me up... iska bacha is pe gaya hai lol... I love how Veera Ballu ka collar pakadti hai...
Sonu loved it... I wanna see Ballu taking care of Veera and accepting all her mood swings if possible...

siya wait 4 the delivery scene..haha..and u'l witness a loving husband in ballu in d upcoming updates.