A veeba story part 50 (last part)

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Sonu very bad yaar u skipped all the beautiful moments
But no issues still it was awesome veeba's convo regarding their future
Continue sokn

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overactor

@overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Oh ho yr i can't possibly write their intimate moments...bt ul luv the upcoming romantic sequences im sure i rvn skipped suhag raat bcoz of tht tum log bhi na kuch smjhte hi nhi ho

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: overactor
Oh ho yr i can't possibly write their intimate moments...bt ul luv the upcoming romantic sequences im sure i rvn skipped suhag raat bcoz of tht tum log bhi na kuch smjhte hi nhi ho

no yaar sonu i dint missed tat and liked now ur cont the story
and writing intimate moments r v v difficult we shld pen it down perfectly nahi toh padne keliye bhi acha nahi rahega

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overactor

@overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

no yaar sonu i dint missed tat and liked now ur cont the story
and writing intimate moments r v v difficult we shld pen it down perfectly nahi toh padne keliye bhi acha nahi rahega

han aur ye family forum he haha😳

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ANAM

@khuwahish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Superb...
You are just awesome writer...

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Yaar Luvd it ...read 4parts at a tym..luvd baldev's confession..u r jus a luvly writer..keep up d Gud wrk..waitin 4 ur nxt updt..

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overactor

@overactor

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Part_33

Veera was in her room reading a magazine..Baldev entered the room..looking tired..he threw his coat on the sofa.

Veera; oye mera kamra phela mat..sharafat se tang use

Baldev; mere sir me drd he bht..papaji ne bht kushti krwai meri..tu rkh de

Veera; qn..me to ghr pe jese waili thi na..uth abhi k abhi

Baldev ignored her and rested his head into her lap.

She put a gentle hand into his hair and combed them with care.

Baldev; malish kr de.

Veera took the bottle of oil from the bathroom and made him sit on the floor..she sat on the sofa and started the massage.

Baldev; tere haath me to jadoo hai.

Veera; menu pta he...

Baldev; aaj kal bht ziada pareshaniyan hen..ek to us surjeet se panga le lia mene..dusra election sir pe hen aur mene koi tayari nhi ki..upar se papaji ko mujhe kaam sikhane ka bhoot sawar hogya he.

Veera; haye meri jaan...kitna boj he tere kandhon pe.

he turned and again rested his head on her lap..hugging her legs.

She rested her head onto his...kissing his cheek.

Veera; tu agr surpanch nhi bn paya to

Baldev; bht dukh hoga menu...bht...meri zindagi ka sb se bada sapna he

Veera; sapne tootte hen to bht dukh hta he..menu pta he..

Baldev; han tujhse behtar kon jan skta he...tera england jane ka sapna jo toot gya

Veera; chod ab kya faida us bare me gal kr k..rahi baat tere sapne ki..to jb tk tere sath veera sam

he looked at her and raised an eyebrow

Veera; mera matlab jb tk tere sath Mrs. Veera Baldev Singh he tujhse tera sapna koi nhi cheen skta.

he smiled..she kissed his forehead.

Veera; main hoon na

Baldev; han han pritampura ki shahrukh khan

she smiled.

He got up and lifted her up.

Veera; are ki kr rha he..tu to thakka hua he na...chod

Baldev; nhi chadunga..tera wazan mujhe nhi thakata.

Veera; oye hoye...badi takat he tujh me.

Baldev; wo to hai.

But little did they know..some 1 had returned to Pritampura to cause havoc in their lives.

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Siya N

@monumolu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Yaar Luvd it ... Veera Baldev Singh toh magician hi hai... I love how she lifts his spirits... Kaun hai yeh villain??? Sonu yaar kahi tu ne bhi woh Karan ko waapas toh nahi laayi na???

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overactor

@overactor

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: monumolu
Yaar Luvd it ... Veera Baldev Singh toh magician hi hai... I love how she lifts his spirits... Kaun hai yeh villain??? Sonu yaar kahi tu ne bhi woh Karan ko waapas toh nahi laayi na???

hmm wait and read..