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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gunjan helped veera in dressing up and took her to the place Baldev told her.
He was waiting there in a white suit..looking like a prince, with rose in his pocket.Gunjan went away.
As soon as he saw her he was gone. She was in a white lehnga dressed like a princess just for him.
He came to her

Veera; baldev

he silenced her with his finger and then blind-folded her then he helped her get into his jeep.
He took her to a random place and then opened her eyes.
Veera was unable to believe her eyes..the forest trees were lid with lanterns..candles were placed all over the place and then he turned her to show something.

In the sky the fireworks wrote

"I love you Veera"

Veera was touched, she got tears in her eyes.And then baldev sat on his knees and took a flower and said

Baldev; Veera..me tujhse boht pyaar krta hun..bachpan se..jab tu yahan nhi thi me pagal hogya tha..aur phr tu ai..aur mujh me phr se jaan ai..pr tu badal chuki thi meri Veera kho chuki thi...aur wo karan...pehle to menu pta nhi tha...lekin phr jb bhi wo tere qareeb ata jaan niqlti thi meri...aur phr mene tujhe paane k liye galat rah chun li...menu maaf krde...mene galat kiya..tujhe itna dukh diya..mujhe hamesha se lagta tha k tujhpe mere ilawa kisi ka haq nhi lekin phr Ranvi menu sunane laga...mere andar aag lag gai isi wja se mene inna wada qadam utha liya menu maaf kr de..

he got tears in his eyes too

Baldev; Tujhe bht dukh diya mene..tujhe paa k phr kho diya mene..us din tere mun se phir se us karan ka naam sun k mere andar phir se juwala mukhi phat gya..yahan tk tere upar haath uthana chaha mene..pr tb bhi tere liye dhadakne wale is dil ne menu rok lia...menu maaf kr de Veera. Maaf kr de

she kept nodding and smiling, her eyes glistening with tears and happiness.

Baldev; bv to tu meri he phr bhi me tujhse poochta hun
Mujhse shaadi karegi.

Veera's heart was racing..she was breathless...she took the flower and hugged him tightly to never let go.

Veera; me bhi tujhse boht pyaar krti hun...menu bhi nhi maloom tha k tu mere liye kya he aur agr tu aisa nhi krta to menu kbhi pta chalna bhi nhi tha...me to hun hi pagal...mene hamesha tujhe galat smjha...tujhe sataya..menu bhi maaf krde baldev

they kept hugging and then baldev carried her in his arms towards a little cottage.

Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaaye I love u Veera in Aasman... Aatishbaazi hogi when VeeBa confess... Dil Khush kar diya sonu tu ne... Dua karti hoon Vishal tuje roz thank u bol de... Phir tu inni vadiya vadiya update karke humein bhi khush karegi na,,,, I am stuck with the Aasmaanwaala kissa... I want my hubby too to do it now... Haaye kitna acha lagega...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monumolu

haaaye I love u Veera in Aasman... Aatishbaazi hogi when VeeBa confess... Dil Khush kar diya sonu tu ne... Dua karti hoon Vishal tuje roz thank u bol de... Phir tu inni vadiya vadiya update karke humein bhi khush karegi na,,,, I am stuck with the Aasmaanwaala kissa... I want my hubby too to do it now... Haaye kitna acha lagega...

haye inni pyaar dua..thnx yr

aww i hope u get that asman wala firework too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!!! Superb!!!
Amazing upd8's again!!
Ur an awesome writer nd can't w8 4 the nxt part!!
Thnx 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg finally sad part ka end ho gya now veeba r together
Waiting for the next part
Plz plz update as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg can't wait for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god... i can't wait for the next part.. update asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The next morning brought a bright new day..and a new beginning for Veera and Baldev..filling their lives with beautiful colors.
They were going home after spending the night under the stars and the full moon.Veera was blushing all the time..Baldev was still in his dreams.

Baldev; me tujhe bta nhi skta me kitna ziada khush hun.

Veera; dikh rha he..us din ki trh teri bateesi phr bahar he.

Baldev; tu kabhi meetha nhi bol skti.

Veera; nhi..moti chaiji menu mirchi kehti hen..tune kabhi meethi mirchi khai he ki?

Baldev; tu na sara romaantic mood khrab kr deti he.

Veera; romaantic nhi romantic...gadhe..todha padh leta tu to tera kya jata.

Baldev; oye padha to tha..pr bs guzare wala..aur tune padh k konse teer mar liye hen wese bhi...

Veera; mare hen na...pritampura ki iklto padhi likhi kudi hun.

Baldev; faida ki he

Veera; oye tu kesa bewaquf he..dekh..jb hamare sone sone bache honge..to unhe padhaongi na..unhe teri trh gawar thodi banaon gi

Baldev; acha g ab me gawar hun

Veera; aur ki he

Baldev; tu bht buri he

Veera; wo to me hun.

They reached the house..

Baldev; bg se bach k rehna

Veera; sambhal lungi teri bg nu..

they went inside..Bansuri was ignoring her.Balwant greeted her

Balwant; hamare ghr ki laxmi wapas agai..o bansuri g mun t meetha krwao.

Bansuri; bazar se pede le k kha lijiye ga. huh!

she went away.

Balwant; o puttar tu na bansuri g k galan ka bura mat manana.

Veera; nhi tayagi..kabhi nhi..me unki baton ka na kabhi bura nhi maanti

Balwant; ja puttar aram kr aur tu nalaiq chal kuch kaam dhanda krna shuru kr..jb dekho wela phirta rehta he.

Veera; han baldev ja na...tayagi ka hath bata

Baldev; (saying between his teeth) jata hun.

they both left.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey girls now get ready for a lot of romance between VeeBa...a villains entry..shocking revealations..and Baldev becoming surpanch and much more..hope u all keep up with me
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Posted: 11 years ago
romance??? why you skipped such a beautiful night??? hm... i will be waiting for the villain!!😊

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