RaGa OS: Passion of Love *finished*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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After she fails to stop Ranaji and Raageshwari's marriage,she comes to her room and cries her heart. Her doe-shaped eyes' became red due to crying.

Suddenly,her door banged open and entered Ranaji,with his eyes full of anger,pain,hurt and what not. Gayatri wiped her tears and had a smile on her face but,after sensing the reality,she changed her emotions and asked, ''Ranaji,aap iss waqt mere kamre mein kyun aaye hai. Ek raja ko yeh shobha nahi deta.''

Ranaji smiled with a sad grin and with a taunt said, ''aapko bhi bohut kuch shobha nahi deta,phir bhi aapne apni marzi chalayi. Maine kuch kaha..nahi na? Toh phir? Main raat ko kahin bhi jaau,aapko kya?''

Gayatri was shocked as he trapped her in her own question and was inching a step closer to her. Gayatri,scared and already broken,sensing his anger,took steps backwards and suddenly,her back hit on the wall. Ranaji blocked her both sideways with his strong built biceps.

''Ranaji,humara raasta chhoriye.. Humein jaana hai..'' she replied with a tinge of discomfort.

''Kyun? Aapko koi shikayat hai? Main yahaan se nahi jaunga. Yeh mera mehel hai aur yahaan sirf meri marzi chalti hai,samjhi aap.'' he replied tauntingly.

He held her upper arms tightly,causing Gayatri to flinch in pain.

''Aapne humein dard diya humare beech ki rishtey ko torkar. Aur,ab,hum aapko iski saza denge.. Aapne humara pyaar dekha par aapko paane ki junoon nahi dekha aapne.. Aapko paane keliye koi bhi hadd par karsakte hai..'' he replied,anger spitting through his words.

''Humein maaf kardijiye Gayatri. Hum aapko kabhi bhi dukh aur thhes pohuchana nahi chahte thhe,par,aaj aapne majbur kardia. Hosake toh mujhe maaf kardijiye.'' Indravadhan thought in his mind.

He took her hands and pushed her on the bed. He opened his kurta,showing off his masculine body.

''Ranaji,yeh kya kar rahe hai aap? Choriye mujhe.'' Gayatri pleaded to Ranaji.

''Aaj aapko Rana Indravadhan ka pyaar nahi,junoon dekhne ko milega.. Bohut hogaya pyaar se samjhana,ab aapko main apni tareeke se samjhaunga.''

He leaned down and slammed his lips over hers and kissed her forcefully. Gayatri struggled in his tight hold,which made marks on her delicate body. Indra was feeling ashamed of himself by doing all this,but,he needs to set situation and his relation right. Moreover,he needs to make Gayatri realize that he doesnt need anyone else and he doesnt love anyone else,except Gayatri. Gayatri is his queen and will always remain his wife and queen.

Gayatri couldnt control herself and she hugged her Ranaji tightly and cried her heart out. She kissed all over his face and pecked his lips that she will always be with him.

Ranaji smiled and hugged her tightly,kissing her hair.

''Ab aapko pata chala ki,agar main aisa nahi karta,toh,mujhe pata nahi chalta ki aapke mann mein mere liye kya bhavnaye hai.'' Ranaji kissed her cheeks,to which she blushed and hid herself in his strong embrace.

''aap bhi na..'' Gayatri replied.

''aayinda agar aapne phirse aisa kuch kiya toh..'' Ranaji warned.

''toh aisi pyaar bhari aur junoon se bhara hua saza mujhe har waqt manzoor hai.'' Gayatri replied,blushingly.

And,again,they drown in the ocean of love.

*The End*.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nicely written for a passionate couple. But cv's dont want this. They belong to 1940's so Rana cannot love one women and show passion, he has to look and act nonchalant so that he can get married to multiple women. Lol!
So yes. please add "Its a dream" of Gayatri.😉
Then we can identify with the characters, otherwise this Rana looks like a stranger or ML of another show.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS, Brilliantly written, loved every bit of it. Happy that you are giving us the scenes which the CVs are not giving, keep writing more.

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