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ah bless. i am completely enchanted by your story. i'll be honest, i'm such an angst wh**e, i can't read a story without a little bit of angst and i'm glad you've added it into the mix. as much as i love your portrayal of gayatri, she comes off a tad bit shrewish for me. no, don't get me wrong, i like the fact that she gives as good as she gets, but there are moments where i think she could've done without the rudeness. how do i put this? i thoroughly enjoy ranaji's bouts of grovelling, and it makes me squee how obliviously jealous he is.. so i understand why you've made gayatri a little hard around the edges. oh bother, i'm talking in circles. what i'm trying to say is your story rocks my socks so carry on my dear!
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