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Posted: 10 years ago
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iwill soon!!😃😃
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hi guys, sorry for late update , i hope you enjoy this part, and please leave your comments and likes ⭐️

Part 2

Gayatri was getting ready and , in that moment her bhabis entered ...

Bh1. Wah ! Yeh ladki ko toh raja mila hai

Bh2. Haan , iss liye toh itna tayaar ho rahi hai

G. Bhabhi ji aap ko maa bula rahi thi , aap ko wahan jana chahiye

The bhabhis faces were to be seen , and in a rush , they went out from there .

At the palace , in rana jis chamber ,

He sat on the sofa and took the tea cup from the little table and took a sip , then ... He got completely lost in his dream .

Dream starts

Gayatri is wearing a pink saree with a yellow floral blouse and she is standing facing the window and outside , its raining .

Rana ji steps in his room and locks the door , he walks towards gayatri and smells her heavnily feminine scent and wraps his arms around her waist which made gayatri shiver , and she turnes around still in his arms , and places her hands in the nape of his neck,

G.. rana ji , aaj apko masti suj rahi hai , kal apko jaldi uth na hai toh jaldi so jaiye

r.. ( pulling her more closer to him , making the distance between them less, they could feel each others warm breaths and feel their heatbeats running fast ) masti toh hum karenge , aakhir aap biwi hai meri , apke saath masti nahi karunga toh kiske saath karunga ?

and saying this in a teasing tone , he lifts gayatri up , with that, gayatri tightens her grip on him ., and takes her to their bed and gently places her there , he slowly leans forward and kisses her cheek ...

Dream ends.

Raj mata. rana ji ranaji !!! ap kahan khoye hue hain ?

R.. umn,mmm... kahan bhi nahi , hamein chalna tha , who ,, aj ... gayatri ki ghar jana hai na , unka haath maangne

Raj mata. hamein toh yaad hain, bas, aap yaad hai , iss baat ki hamein khushi hain , ab chalein ?

R.. ji

And they leave for gayatris house .

In gayatris house ,

Rana enters with raj mata and badi rani ma with shagun, and take a seat . Rana looks everywhere to see gayatri but , he doesn't find gayatri anywhere , and becomes a bit anxious to see her.

Her bhabhis comes and stands rigth next to where rana ji was sitting,

Bh1. abhi tak nahi aayi hai wohh,,,,

Bh2. pata nahi kya kar rahi , ya kuch ho toh nahi gaya iss se , waise bhi hai toh yeh panauti..

ranaji heard that , and was really furious on their comments but , in that moment he saw gayatri sneaking from the wall , but didn't come out , gayatri was really feeling shy , her heart was beating really very fast and she couldn't help it.

G.. gayatri , kya soch rahi hai , itna darr kyu lag raha hai , raj mata tujhe kuch nahi bolengi , rana ji hain na... tu bas ja...haan ...

Rana ji understood it very well, she was really afraid of coming in front of evryine, specially raj mata. when raj mata was busy talking to the the family , he tried to look at gayatri, gayatri also looked at them , and then, her eyes met rana ji , who was looking at her, lovingly and smiled at her , she lowered her eyes due to shyness and a soft pink blush appeated on her cheeks . She broke the eyelock getting afraid if someone catches them staring at each other .

Somehow gayatri gathers courage to come out and walks towards where her father was sitting and stood next to the sofa. Rana ji looked at gayatri and then , he loked at her father,

Rana . hum apki beti ka haath maang ne aaye hain ( and gave a hum- karenge gayatri -se-shaadi- look to both bhabis , whose faces were jaw-dropping ) ,( and then looked at gayatris father ) waise app logon ne the toh kar liya that, magar, humein ,( and looking at gayatri now ) gayatri se poonchna tha , ki , kya usse yeh shaadi mansoor hai ? kya who kush hai iss shaadi ?

Gayatri was standing silent and not able to raise her eyes to see rana ji due to the nervousness.

Gayatris father. gayatri sharmao mat

Ga. ji mai khush hoon ( she said gathering courage )

Raj mata. gayatri kaisi ho ?

Gasyati. main theek hoon raj mata aap kaise hai aur badi rani maa aap kaisi hain ?

badi rani ma. hum theek hai beta

Raj mata. hum bhi theel hai, accha to , agle hafte shaadi ki tareek nikale hum , ap ko koi aitraaz toh nahi

Gayatris father. agle hafte theek rahegi , aur hamein kya aitraz hoga ?

Rana jis eyes were stuck on gayatri and smiling , who sometimes looked up and saw him , and gave him her little smile and rana ji was heavenly pleased at her.

the marriage talks were going on , and gayatris bhabhis were standing without being able to say a thing out of the shock. Soon, rana ji , raj mata and badi rani maa left .

Precap. Raga marriage , raga after marriage romance.


PS. guys, please tell me if I should write a third part or not , if you liked the precap, if youre interested.

Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wow..
Beautiful update.
Loved it.
Yay..
Finally,Gayu ki shaadi horahi hai with Rana ji.
Aww...
Those moments when both were trying to see them stealthily.
Gayu is blushing.. Aww..
Precap is really awesome.
Continue really sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
curiously waiting for the next chapters, plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely


love raga scene




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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Ufff such a beautiful update
Simple, romantic

Loving the story ❤️

You are simply amazing 👏

Keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks for PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2 Gayatri's bhabhis are burning in jealousy😆Rana comes to Gayatri's house with Rajmata and badi rani ma ...Rana and Gayatri's relation is fixed
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

Wow..
Beautiful update.
Loved it.
Yay..
Finally,Gayu ki shaadi horahi hai with Rana ji.
Aww...
Those moments when both were trying to see them stealthily.
Gayu is blushing.. Aww..
Precap is really awesome.
Continue really sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.




Thank you so much 😃

Im really happy you liked it ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: max_thakker

curiously waiting for the next chapters, plz update soon



I will update the last part of the ts soon this time 😃 thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

lovely


love raga scene




Thank you very much 😃 😃

Im glad you liked it ⭐️ 😃 😃

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