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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Fantastic CS And Prologue

The Prologue is already Captivating and since its a story set in the
1930's its gonna be interesting for sure
looking forward to the first chapter

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sz01

@sz01

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

this came as total surprise ... and i loved it.. i watch the show... and loved the concept... the cs was quite intresting and gayatri is just 14... aww... believe me when i say instead of writing gayatri i was writing geet ,... so habituated in writing geet... i always love ur work... the prologue was so good... she is just a child... but i think ranaji loves her immensely... thnx for the pm.. i would love to read this ... waiting for the next update... and best wishes for this new ff...😊

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Teaser

Thanks everyone and it's felt so good when my maneet readers are just ready to read another couple FF, just because I am writing it... I am feeling like top of the world. All new readers are welcome but add me in your pm list only if you are really interested.

"It's perfectly fine Rana jii... I am glad... you finally come here as ..." But this time Rana ji attention was again caught with a pair of curious "Deer black eye".. who are peeping from the side of Rajmata Waist and again disappeared behind Rajmata... as soon as they met with his own.

"Rana jii.. I think... you should take rest as you seem quite tired and lost" Rajmata spoke in concern without any idea of Gayatri's sharat of "hide n seek".

Rana jii nodded positively and shoot a glare toward Gayatri, who is again peeping behind Rajmata and her eyes are having naughty gleem.

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Gayatri is so naughty lovely teaser

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Wow..
Superb CS..
Liking it.
Continue sooonish..
Do pm me whenever u update.

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Wow..
Superb n amazing prologue.
Ranaji baras pare on Rani Gayatri...
Felt bad..
Gayatri kahan gayi?
Continue sooonish.
Do pm me.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

interesting cs n prologue...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Teaser is awesome.
Gayatri doing pranks and Rana ji in gussa...
Hmm..
Continue soonish.

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Awesome sketch and progloue. I never read any stories other than maanee but ur title attracted me and strted reading sketch. I loved ur writing. Waiting for your updates.😉