Mana meets Kalpi FF part 5

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Theirs a saying that everyone has a look alike on Earth, in kalpi case this maybe true. mana meets a woman in distress, their she decides to help her Get the respect she deserve.

Note: inspired from sita and geeta. The story won't just focus on ragna theirs another couple as well.



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Mana Is a girl who don't think before reacting , She's in her own little world. She's that one girl who Parents don't want their son to bring home and that girl teenagers admire.

Ajay mana best guy friend; he works at the car place, but comes from a respectable family. He loves mana just the way she is and would do anything for her.

Kalpi who is raghav fiance is being mistreated by his family. Raghav don't know this because his a workaholic, unlike mana she's the type you can bring to your mother.

Raghav: husband

Sammy: boyfriend of paki

PAKI : sister

PAKIYA : Brother of mana

gauri: mother of raghav

KAMLA : aunty

pooja: Ajay younger sister

VITTHAL : Ajay father


Chapter table of contents

Prologue : pg1
Part 1: pg2
Part 2: pg3
Part 3:pg 4
Part 4; page 5
Part 5; page 6


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome cs dear
Eager to read more...
Update first part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice cs.. Plz do continue..
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Nice cs plz continue dear
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Prologue



I tried everything I could to grasp that small hope I had left, but nothing changed, things are still the same, and after what happened that night I don't deserve to be in his life.

(Earlier)

Kalpi was on the run, she had bags full of grocery in her hand. Her phone kept buzzing all day, doing choirs for people. Well not any people, but her in-law.

Seeing the house, she sigh with relief. She stop to search for something, when she spot it her eyes brighten. "His here" she thought with joy.

Entering the house she puts the food down and walk in the living room to see raghav. His father usherd her over, while the rest of the family members gave her a nasty look. Kalpi being shy stood where she was.

Mr. Singhania asks if raghav won't say something to his fiancee. Raghav looks at her with a smile , " won't you come and hug your fiance"

Taken back, kalpi hesitate. Mr. Singhania laughs " go on, don't let me stop you"

Gauri seeing kalpi coming, puts her footout. Causing her to fall. Kalpi hits her face on the table while her duppat falls on her shoulder. " be careful dear" she says

Raghav sister paki says " she's such a cluts, why is bhai marrying her again mam?"

Gauri shush her and told her not to say anything infront of her father.

Kalpi looking down in embarrassment quickly fix her outfit and apologize. " are you alright dear?" Mr. Singhania says

She quickly got up and nod before walking away. She could hear paki voice laughing at her. When she reached the hall, she stops and recall falling on raghav.

Smiling she starts to day dream.

(Few minute earlier)


Raghav was exchanging gifts when his father told him to go after kalpi. He says she barely has time to be with you, and everyday she asks if your doing fine and we'll.

Gauri didn't like what her husband was saying. Her son just came back, and he hasn't seen his mom for a week, she will be the first person he spend time with. " honey, raghav needs to rest, he had a long day"

Mr. Singhania, shush her, he turns to raghav once more " go ahead son, she needs you"

Raghav sigh before getting up. His dad stops him saying " don't forget her gift. "

(End of flashback)


Raghav seeing kalpi smiling while her cheeks are tinted red claps. " waw... You are really something" he says

Kalpi stops her day dream to look at raghav. He says " not only did you embarrassed me by touching me, you ended up getting my family wrapped around your finger.

" what?" she says

Raghav walk near her and grab her hand pulling her close. Kalpi hand starting to hurt asks raghav to let go. " your hurting my hand rags "

Hearing his old nickname from school he glares at her " isn't this what you fantasize kalpi, you should be happy I'm giving you this privilege of being this close to me."

Kalpi struggling to get free, starts crying. Raghav seeing this sigh he let her go and turn his back on her " you were always a crybaby when we were younger, and you still are. Nothing has changed. "

Kalpi rubbing her hand asks why raghav was behaving like this. He turn remembering the gift his dad said to give her.

He puts his hand in his suit, but stop and move to the other pocket. pulling out a pen he threw it . " I'm sure you will need this pen to write my name in your diary, so take it"


After raghav was gone kalpi rub her hand. She look at The pen which says raghav on it and pick it up. Raghav wasn't always like this, it was a year ago, after kalpi finished her college that her father passed away.

Not knowing what to do Mr. Singhania asks her to live with them. Two month after living with them he announced kalpi and raghav engagement just when raghav had proposed to his girlfriend Natasha.

Raghav had caused a fit and his girlfriend broke up with him. Because of this their friendship wasn't the same anymore.

But as time passed kalpi couldn't stop loving him. She kept it to herself while secretly hoping he will one day accept her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting prologue dear

wanna read more

felt bad for kalpi

raghav had gf?? but married kalpi for his dad!! so he torture kalpi

update chapter 1 soon
can't wait
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Part 1


A meeting was going on near a restaurant. Kalpi doing another task was looking through the list of things paki wanted because she was sick.

She could hear someone speaking and females cheering. She asks one of the cashier about what was going on. The man sigh " it's just another trouble maker causing a scene about equal rights"

Kalpi became interested. The man says " that girl is always causing trouble around here, I swear one day she will mess with the wrong crowd, and it won't be good. "

Kalpi thank the man, and walk out. She walk to the side while calling for a taxi, waiting she heard the woman's shouting again.

The voice says " why should we stay at home like good housewives while our husband is at work making income. We should be allowed to help them as well. "

The voice says " taking care of the kids, cleaning, cooking, is that all we are good for. Can you live your life like this everyday, knowing you have the chance and opportunity to be something other than a housewife. "

"no!" they said

The voice smile " than why do we let those man's control us, do we not have a voice or a mind of our own. " " us females can't do anything with out the male society looking down on us. If our husband cheat, we should stay silent, fearing that it might make the family look bad. "

Kalpi didn't see anything wrong about being a housewife, she sigh to herself. " whoever that is don't know the warm feeling and the importants of a wife. The wife holds the household, if she works she won't have time to bring order in the house. She's the key to holding the family together. "

The taxi she ordered arrived, and she quickly got in. Just when she left, a group of man looking to cause trouble appear. One says " hey, pagal, why don't you get down from their and go home"

Another says " stop brainwashing those idiots."

" their husband shouldn't have let them step out the house. " another says

"yeah! Stop thinking we are equal. We're the ones that make sure you live under a roof, and live comfortably. You guys have it easy, so why complain. " another spoke.

The woman sigh "look, do you hear the ignorance that comes out of their mouth" she jumps down from where she was standing and walk to the leader " you ungrateful, ugly, sheet. You think you can just boss us around, like you own us. You being here right now talking like this shows you have no self-respect for us woman and your mother."

The man angry raise his hand to hit her, but she grabs his hand. " you touch me, and I will file a domestic violence complain. "

The man not caring push her to the ground. He smile while looking at her " you crazy woman, you think with your words I will be scared." he signal his man's and they surround her.

The females try to stop them, but more of the man friends arrive and block them. " today I will show you the difference between man and Woman. "

Elsewhere, Ajay fixing someone's car, came from under. He got up and look at the owner " I screwed in the new parts, so your car should be good now"

The woman thanks Ajay and tells him if he ever need something to give her a call. Ajay looking at the card was about to reject it when a friend of his barged in and told him about mana.

Ajay not worrying, walk to his motorcycle. The man says " hurry she's in trouble"

Ajay starting the bike says " mana knows what shes getting into, she can take care of herself. "

The man watch him leave, he says "than why are you speeding "

The woman upset asks who was mana. The man smile " she's a unique woman that holds Ajay life in her hand. She's his boyfriend, and partner in crime. "


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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update dear
is that girl mana
superb concept dear
update it soon
thank you for this lovely update dear
hope kalpi will change herself soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice concept and love the first update can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome jpdate
Hmm kalpk is mistreated
Update soon

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