Betrayed - ch 11 pg 33 - Page 13

Everyone is hurt in this chapter and you did great by by showing it. Raghav is hurt by what he did. Maya is hurt for what she did to Raghav and Kalpana is hurt due to her child, parents and Raghav. I wonder how will she will do when she gets out. Will she find out the truth of her not being Sahil and Neetu child. Well good work and can't wait for the next chapter. And yeah 6 hours is a long time and I appreciate and applaud oh taking the time to write this chapter. Love it

It' so emotional poor ragna felt Very bad for them raghav he thinks that kalpi aborted his child because he has hurt her nd now she hate him he now realized his mistake he now understand kalpi pain superb update dear very nice plz update soon

Very sad update

Raghav realized his love too late after his revenge had consumed him and an innocent soul has taken the fall.

Now that Maya has realized how ugly she had become will she atleast try to bail kalpi out?

Please update next part

Truly very emotional Hopefully now maya true colors also comes in front of Raghav and Kalpi will be out of jail soon...

Fabulously written

Beautiful update

Waiting for update. Please update dear

A 'heartbreaking ' update !! Could almost visualize a devastated Kalpi suffering not only physically but mentally as well ! A fabulous update! Thanks and sorry for a belated comment !

Sorry for my big breaks between chapters and a big hug and thank you for your patience.

Chapter 11

Stretching to release the ache on her back, her movement limited because Ragav was fast asleep, his head resting on her lap. Neetu looks around surprised, daylight streaming into the room through the windows. She continues to comb her fingers through a sleeping Ragav's hair, soothingly, her eyes filled with sadness. She doesn't stop, instinctively knowing that Ragav has not had a sound nights sleep since Kalpi went to jail.

"Silly boy, she mutters to a sleeping Ragav, shaking her head, continues, "if only you had realised sooner that you would hurt more.

Nervously sitting next to Kalpi's lawyer, Ragav thanks his lucky stars that his mother in law had finally agreed to Ragav assisting in kalpi's appeal... of course conditional to Kalpi agreeing.

Hearing the sound of the door opening... his gaze turns towards the door... "finally, he thinks as he stares at the opening door... his gaze thirsty for a sight of her.

Kalpi forces a slight smile on her lips, keen on reassuring attorney kumar that she is fine. Stepping in, she stops midstride, her smile faltering as her gaze meets Ragav instead. She stares at him for several seconds... confused... then panicky... ready to run.

Sitting still like a statue, Ragav watches Kalpi... to scared to move, just in case he startled her and she would choose to leave. Attorney kumar quickly reacts by walking up to Kalpi and guiding her to the desk, talking softly... his intention to distract her from fleeing. He says, "your mother has allowed Ragav to be part of your defense.

Confused, Kalpi turns away from Ragav, looks at her attorney and asks, "mummy wants Ragav to defend me? Nodding, attorney kumar replies, "only if you allow it.

Ragav tries to mask his frown as his gaze falls on the light bruise on Kalpi's left cheekbone. Failing to do so, he stares at the bruise, thinking, "this bruise is a few days old. Noticing his gaze, without meeting his gaze, Kalpi lowers her head slightly, allowing her hair to fall forward, covering the bruise.

Panicked, she thinks, "he can't be here... he can't see me like this... he can't find out Turning to attorney kumar, she tries to infuse calmness in her voice and says, "uncle, please tell mum that I don't want...

Ragav quickly interrupts, knowing that she was going to reject his offer, says earnestly, "Kalpi please don't refuse. I need to do this. I never intended for you to go to jail. Please...

Kalpi looks at Ragav hesitantly, Reading the agony, the guilt in his gaze, she unconsciously nods her head affirmatively, saying softly, "okay. Her heart automatically needing to ease his pain.

Unable to stop himself, Ragav leans across the desk, caresses kalpi's bruised cheek and asks, "how did this happen. Kalpi pulls away, her gaze sad, says aloud, "l was clumsy. While telling her heart... "calm down... stop racing... he is no longer yours. with a stronger voice she adds, "you can represent me on one condition... let's never meet again. Without waiting for a response, Kalpi turns around and walks out of the room.

Ragav watches the door shut quietly, disheartened by her words, recollecting the abortion, his heart cries out... it's too late... she no longer loves me.

Kalpi leans on the closed door, needing its support as tears fall unabashedly down her face. Recollecting the kiss she had witnessed, she places her hand on her bruised womb and whispers to herself, "if only you loved me.

Two weeks later

The judge looks at maya in surprise and says, "prosecutor Maya are you sure. "Yes your honour,maya replies, "the state is no going to fight against this appeal.

Ragav walks up to maya and says, "thank you. Maya gives him a weak smile and replies, "you were right. I should never have asked for jail time. Placing her hand forward for a handshake, Maya smiles and asks, "friends? Ragav smiles, shakes her hand and says, "friends

Please complete chapter can't wait