RagnaFF:Bittersweet love Part-14b

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abirami_shankar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Hey read all 9 , 10 a and b chapters are awesome dear... Kalpi is really smart.. And I too loved Pakya's surprise.. Sweet bond of Kalpi and Pakya... I am very eager to see how Raghav gets heart artack .. Plz update soon sweety.. And about your note I love your story no complains on it.. There is nothing to dislike in your story..

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deepu_kutty

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Beautiful dr. Kalpi & pakya bonding is awesome . Kalpi has some feeling for rags .

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nimmynatarajan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

You really are a fab writer... you are depicting character's bonding very well... Eager much for the story

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Cinderella

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part-11

After returning, Kalpi had lunch with whole family and spend nice galla time, this is the place which fills her loneliness the relations ,love and pamper which she always carved for that she gets here. Here she is Kalpana not KALPANA KAPOOR, every single thing whether is ajooba's dairymilk, sleeping in aaji's lap, mama-mami love, small sister love and most understanding friend, its not that she don't have family she had big family - grandparents, uncle-aunt and cousin but yet she is comfortable here only she really misses her grandparents, they love her but their love is in the form of expensive gifts she can't show her tantrums and naughty antics how she did here, her grandparents : Dada-Dadi live in london and her grandfather he is person ( characters similar to BigB in K3G, "Kahe diya so Kahe diya", this is one of big reason for her refusal to go to London for her further studies, and Nana-Nani (Nana is similar Bomman Irani in Waqt , but her Nani is sweet heart ) : by seeing her Dada and Nana Kalpana truly understand why Sahil and Neetu can't go together as they both are opposite poles, they love her princess a lot but she not feels free she feels like a bird in a golden cage with all the things she needs but she want to be a free bird in free sky and just want to fly fly and fly.

Its evening maha aarti time whole village gathered in temple Kalpana is wearing traditional marathi style saree ( even though she is Punjabi kudi but she likes to wear, last year when she saw Preethi in wearing saree she insisted Manda mami to teach her also and from that she wears, and nobody can say she is Punjabi)

All were in the temple, when they were going to start the aarti immediately Sammy phone rang by seeing Raghav's name flashing he was bit surprised.

Nana : (glaring at Sammy) Ya navina pidhi, puja daramyana apala phona raja d"'u akata nahiSammy gave apolegetical look but instead of rejecting unknowingly he accepted and put in pocketRaghav: (Going to say) Hello But immediately just lost in voice which he heard, its very sweet and just he was falling for that voice. On the other side Kalpana was singing the aarti ( my one of favourite one from IPKKND ) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yId6x_-LMeo

Meri aankhon mein tu muskuraye

Meri dadhkan pe hain tere saiyen

In my eyes you smile

My hearbeats are in your shadow

Meri aankhon mein tu muskuraye

Meri dadhkan pe hain tere saiyen

In my eyes you smile

My hearbeats are in your shadow

Poojati hai nazar

Tujhko haathon peher

Kaun tere siva yaad aaye

My gaze worships

The sight of you from head to toe

Who else would I think of but you

Zindagi ke karam tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

My life's deeds are due to you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

Vaadein aur kasam tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

Promises and vows are made to you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

Zindagi ke karam tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

My life's deeds are due to you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

Aa ke dekhe koi yahaan

Sapne hote hain kaise

Someone come here and see

what dreams are like

Jashn khushiyan manaati hain

Ghar jannat ho yeh jaise

Joys celebrate [here]

As if this house is heaven

Ek duje ke bandhan mein

Band gaye hai hum aise

In a relationship with each other

we've been tied together this way

Koi shikhwa na ho

Daur jaisa bhi ho

Phasala beech mein aa na paye

There are no complaints

Whatever the race [of life] is like

No distance will come between us

Kabhi roothe na hum tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

I'll never be cross with you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

Vaadein aur kasam tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

Promises and vows are made to you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

Zindagi ke karam tujhse

Har khushi har gham tujhse

My life's deeds are due to you

All joy, all sadness stems from you

After the aarthi all were get assemble in chaupal, whole village is assembled its sort of bonfire, were all where having dinner together, after dinner its singing and dancing time, immediately Sammy remember about the Raghav's call he taken out his mobile and saw the call was taken

Sammy: Hello Raghav

Raghav( who was totally lost, back to trance) Ohh Hi dude

Sammy: Is all well, are you fine?

Raghav: Why I can't call you

Sammy: No, you can but at this time

Raghav: Just missing you yaar (jhootha)

Sammy: Strange

Raghav: Hey, I can hear some musics and laughter are you hanging out or partying

Sammy:Ya you can say a sort off I'm in my village, its just bonfire

Raghav: Village, bonfire , sounds different, I wish I could be with you

Pakya:Sammy what you are doing here

Sammy : Talking with my friend Raghav, just telling about our bonfire party

(Hearing Raghav's name some plan started in Pakya's mind you were thinking to make Kalpi jealous wait I burn you)

Pakya: So why you are waiting invite him to join us

Sammy: Pakya stop kidding how come he can come here

Pakya: I'm not telling to come here but he can see us wait

As this chaupal is near there office, immediately Pakya made arrangement for video call through his laptop and it arranged as such Raghav can see live telecast of event.Pakya: Hi, Raghav myself Prakash Sammy's cousinRaghav: Hi Prakash ( but his eyes were searching someone else, finally he spot her in the cowrd she was looking like a fresh flower), and thanksPakya: Any time dude( kahin pe nigahe kahin pe nishana, chodo aab chodo mujhe ullu bana)

All people gathered and center bonfire and they split in two groups girls and boys, for elderly and children they were sitting as spectator and cheering them.

Suru karo antakshari leke prabhu ka naam samay bitane ke liye karna hai kuch kaam

Girls turn to sing song starting with 'm'

Kalpi came forward , fidgeting fingers and giving all old heroine expression sang the song

Mere piya gaye Rangoon, kiya hai wahan se telephon, tumhari yaad sataati hai, jiya mein aag lagaati hai

Boys team with 'h'

Hanste hanste kat jaye raste, Zindagi yuhi chalti rahe, Khushi mile ya gham, Badlenge na hum duniya chahe badalti Rahe

Girls team with 'r'

Ramayya vastaavyyaa, ramayya vataavyyaa, maine dil tujhako diya, haa.N. ramayya vataayyaa

Boys team with 'y'

Immediately Pakya come forward and infront of Kalpi and sang this song

Ye reshamii zulfe.n, ye sharabatii aa.Nkhe.n , inhe.n dekh kar jii rahe hai.n. sabii ( winked at her)

Girls team with 'I'

Immediately Kalpi sang - Iss pyar se meri taraf na dekho, Pyar ho jayega, Yeh pyar ho gaya to tiir dil ke paar ho jayega (winked at him)

Boys team with 'aa'

Aaj kal tere mere pyar ke charche har zabaan par, Sab ko maloom hai aur sab ko khabar ho gaye

Girls team with 'E'

Ek mein aur ek tuDono mile is tarahAur jo tanman mein ho raha haiyeh toh hona hi tha

Boys team with 'T'

Pakya with Kalpi "Teri Meri meri teri prem kahani hai muskil" sang and dance they dance so passionately seeing Kalpi comfort zone Pakya on romatic score Raghav got attack and in anger he thrown his phone. Now he really don't know why he is feeling like this.

[RaghavPov: The moment I saw laughing with her friends I simply want to go near her there, even I don't hear what Prakash was saying just I'm very thankful to him for doing this favour. When she was singing the song " Mere piya gaye Rangoon" her eyes speaks volume, I just feeling having my favourite delight, but when Prakash and Kalpi dance on " Meri meri teri prem kahani hai muskil", I just feeling to kill Prakash I don't know why. First this Sammy and now this Prakash how comfortable she is enjoying with them.]

Edited by Cinderella81 - 8 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Lovely update

Wow loving kalpi antics

Sad that the grandparents are not caring enough

Hiji jealous rag

Update soon

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premap

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Fab update. Kalpi has real wonderful friends in Sammy and Pakhya. Glad Pakhya has 'awakened the Green-eyed monster' [ jealousy ] in Rag's heart ! Its going to be an interesting 'RagNa 's journey of love ' !!!

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deepu_kutty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Ty nu UPdate dr . Pakya is so sweet nd jealous raghav also cute

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naharkhan123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Awesome update kalpi have a big family raghav see kalpi singing nd dancing with pakhya nd he felt jealousy superb love it dear update soon

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Cinderella

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Part 12 (Completed)

Really this three days were like a hell for Raghav. He can't wait for Monday only one thing going on his mind that he want to meet her.

Kalpana also thought to give chance to Raghav as Pakya told her be on shore you can't find the depth of the water for that you have get in.

But in Pakya's mind some other plan was going on. He also came with Sammy and Kalpana on pretext of some official work.

Pakya: Pari tomorrow after lunch make yourself free

Kalpi: Pakya I have a college and its important lecture. I will try but why

Pakya: For a romantic date.

Kalpi: Accha, ok what you want me to wear for the date

Pakya: Jeans and top, tie your hairs

Kalpi: But for date jeans don't you want me wear short

Pakya: What to do you have to go college also I will adjust with jeans

Kalpi: (mockingly) Very funny, know tell where we are going?

Pakya: For shopping, I thought to buy something for family

Kalpi: Wow, for that I'm always free

Pakya: Ok after meeting I will directly pick you up from your college

Kalpi: Why only picking you won't drop me

Pakya: Only if your wear jeans

Kalpi: Ok done, good night.

Next morning Kalpana got ready, came down

Neetu: Baccha, are you fine?

Kalpi: Mom...

Neetu: No, I'm surprised for college you are wearing

Kalpi: Mom if you tease again I will change

Neetu : Sorry sorry, but I will happy if you surprise me like this everyday

Pakya: ( while entering inside ) Aunty, then I will become bankrupt

Neetu: Why?

Pakya: She is wearing this as I kept condition for taking her for shopping

Neetu: Don't worry I will sponsor

Kalpi: If your self appraisal is over can we go I'm getting late for my college

contd...

Pakya dropped Kalpana in his bike when they entered the college everyone was staring and eager to know who is this new students, especially Raghav about the girl, as soon as they reached Kalpana immediately removed her helmet bid bye and ran inside as she was getting late for class, leaving some shocked people behind.

In Canteen

Raghav seeing Kalpana, Sammy and Priya thought to spend time with her, by seeing Raghav Kalpana also felt happy but she has masked very well her emotions.

Raghav : Hi Guys, Can I (moving the chair sit opposite to Kalpana)

Sammy: What happen you are alone?

Raghav: What ?? (puzzled look)

Sammy: Where your chamcha and girlfriend strange they left you alone

Raghav: Very funny Sammy they are my friends same like you.

Priya: Hey guys can we order something, I'm very hungry before that rats which are playing kabbadi inside comes out I have something.

Kalpana: Oye dramaqueen stop I'm ordering.

Pakhi: Hi Raghav, I missed you baby ( saying so she kissed on Raghav cheeks and sit next to him)

Priya: (in low voice) chalatha phirtha makeup box

Kalpana called the waiter and order for everyone except for her

Raghav: Why you have not ordered anything for you?

Kalpana :Voh (interrupted by Pakhi)

Pakhi: Baby may she wont have enough money, you know what I mean she can't afford

Priya: Oh hello chalathi phirthi makeup box this treat is given by Kalpana and for payment you need not have to worry.

Kalpana: Priya relax, and have your lunch before rat come out. Pakhi its not like that actually (interrupted by Pakya)

Pakya: Bonjour ma douce (Hello, sweetheart)[listening Pakya's voice she smiled and got up] , Missed me (M'a manqu) [saying so gave side hug to her, smiled and said hi to everyone]

Kalpana: Beaucoup (Very much ), Hey quel est le plan d'aujourd'hui (hey what's today's plan)

Pakya: D'abord nous aurons votre djeuner et shopping prfr (first we will have your favourite lunch and shopping)

Except Priya and Sammy, Raghav and Pakhi were just staring as if they are watching movie which they don't understand, even Priya and Sammy doesn't understand but they know and used to it.

Pakya: Donc, pour ce que vous attendez, laisse aller (So for what you are waiting lets go)

Kalpana: Juste une minute (Just a minute) [ Kalpana called the waiter and paid the bill, then turning to everyone] ok guys I take a leave you guys continue your lunch. Bye

Raghav: This not fair Kalpana you are host for today's treat and you are leaving and Pakya atleast you can have coffee with us

Pakya: Thanks Raghav, we are extremely sorry but I'm short of time so we have to leave I know its not fair but cant and coffee now Kalpi is here then you can often see me next time.Ok bye ( turning towards Sammy) bye dada

Kalpana and Pakya left

Pakhi: Who is he and Raghav how you know him and in which language they were speaking?

Priya : Oye chalathi phirthi makeup box strange you can't understand what they were speaking, last whole month you were in Paris for fashion week and you don't know french.

Raghav: (although he was upset but impressed) She know french

Priya(proudly): Not only french she know many Indian and Foreign languages

Sammy: Same Pakya also so mostly they interact like this only and we are use to it.

Raghav: (thought) Everytime I think I know you but you are puzzle

Edited by Cinderella81 - 8 years ago