RagnaFF:Bittersweet love Part-14b - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
all updates are awesome
loved this sweet and lovely kalpi and her bonding with Sammy
liked jealous raghav
nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: premap

I might be late in my comments but never fear, you will always get a 'dose' of my 'boring' comments !!! Your story has started a 'round of misunderstandings' in RagNa's story. It is going to be a pleasurable reading now, as I have always liked to get Rags ego ' deflated ' !!!!!

Here is some suspense as I have planned which will slowly slowly come outšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-9

After having little refreshment made by Manda they went to small office. Eventhough its small but nicely designed by Pakya he has taken care of interiors. Kalpi is always impressed the way he work both makes perfect team. ( The way Kalpana works nobody can say she is first year management student who has just completed her 12th, degree is just formality she is practically very efficient not only this village organisation she is managing efficiently but also she get involves in her parents business her favourite area is marketing strategies)

The monthly meeting starts up with small presentation by Preeti regarding progress and status of work carried for the last month in the village, expenses detail presented by Hemant, Anganwadi, smart school and women worksop details by Sumanna and Preeti, needs and requirement for farmer was taken care by Sadashiv, hospital and other welfare requirement by Mayuri and Prakash. Kalpana is sharp observer and good listener she observe each aspect minutely, appreciate they work as well as highlight the weak areas, encourage them to come out will the solution. This is every month regular routine of association which is behind the development of Palghar.

Afternoon after lunch Kalpana Samar visited each place personally. After the hectic day, she was to tired had a dinner. Before going to sleep

Kalpi: Pakya what's tommorrow plan

Pakya: Surprise for you, get ready by 4:30am

She bid goodnight to everyone and went to her room to sleep.

In Mumbai, Singhania Mansion

(Today was something different, symptoms were strong indication towards "Lovaria" šŸ˜‰and poor Raghav is attacked by "Jealousy" insect😭)šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Raghav returned home early, he was in no mood to hang out with friend nor he want to talk with anyone only one thing coming in mind "Sammy & Kalpana"conversation.

During dinner

Gauri:( touched his head) Are you fine beta?

Raghav : Ya, mom I'm fine.

Harsh: Its ok beta if anything is bothering you, you can tell me as I'm your best buddy, you know right

Gauri: Did you fight with anyone

Harsh: Latest any gadget you want?

Raghav:(irritatedly) Nothing happen and why the hell you guys are asking so many questions.

Harsh: (smilingly) Because you are having dinner with us at 8 o'clock

Gauri: And you returned home 5 o'clock

Raghav: Why can't I spend time with you guys

Harsh: Ofcourse you can, but Gauri after dinner please give me digestion tablet

Raghav: (worriedly) Kyun Pops what happen?

Harsh: I need to digest the thing which you are doing

Raghav : Very funny

Poor Raghav kare to kya...

Precap: Pakya's Surprise for Kalpi

Edited by Cinderella81 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Nice update really fabulous
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
nice update
poor raghav...but i always like Jealous Raghav
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-10a

Early morning 4.30a.m , Kalpi and Pakya got ready in their jogging suit, tiptoeing Kalpi and Pakya came out of the house.

Kalpi(whispered) Now tell what is your surprise, where we are going and this bag?

Pakya (whispered): Chup ACP Pradyuman, if I answer all questions now itself and what is surprise. Are you scared that I'm going to kidnap you

Kalpi: If you want also you can't (showing karate step)

Pakya: Now stop activating your CID brain and come fast?

He brought her nearby hill, when they reach foot of the hill, he blindfolded her.

Kalpi: What is this you are doing Bhandar I can't see, whatif I fell down?

Pakya: Moti don't you trust me, I won't let anything happen to you

Kalpi smiled and followed him. He has taken her to hill top and open the blindfold. Kalpi was very happy at the top of the world jumping and running like small kid. It was a beautiful small garden with swing and fountain.

Kalpi: Pakya you still remember

Pakya: How can I forgot my Pari's wish. This is your birthday gift surprise.

Kalpi: Aww it very beautiful, its like my dream heaven. You the best thank you thank you

[Kalpi's wish - Pakya I wish here one beautiful garden with swing where I can sit and watch this sunrise]

Kalpi: But Pakya I only said garden and swing but this chair and fountain your really excellent architect ( here eyes got welled up with tears, words got choked she hugged him)

Pakya: Puspha I hate tears ( Rajesh Khanna style)

Kalpi: Beta yeah Khushi ke aansoo hai

Pakya: Kanjoos sirf thank you and this aansoo se kaam nahi challega return gift chahiye

Kalpi: Baalak hum tumse baahut prassana hui, tumhari har iccha puri ki jayegi..

Pakya: (he immediately taken out ghungroos and tape-recorder from his bag) toh hojaaye

Kalpi: (immediately she wore it) Hojaayee

(Here my Kalpi is trained classical dance, dance is in her nerves)

She danced on ore piya song (this is my favourite when I'm happy or sad I like to dance)

https://youtu.be/totoO0WBeBc

After that Pakya taken out tea and breakfast which he bought on the table both enjoyed the food.

Edited by Cinderella81 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Part 10b

After enjoying their break fast both of them sitting on grass and enjoying the beautiful view infront of them

Kalpi: Pakya its so peaceful, I feel like full sky is mine and just I have hold in my fist

Pakya: You and your philosophy, I really doubt are you management student, because like your name you are always in your imagination only. Now tell me what's going on your mind

Kalpi: (gave a I don't understand what you are saying look) Nothing

Pakya: Stop lying to me Moti I know you in and out, I'm not Sammy whom you are fooling

Kalpi: Accha, then why you asking, when you know about me so much

Pakya: You, ok leave it , is he handsome

Kalpi: Ya very hot, all girls in college drool, no wonder , his chocolate brown eyes and way he smirks, handsome is small word

Pakya: How was you First Kiss?

Kalpi: 😳I felt butterfly in my stomach, for a moment I was lost

Pakya: When you also enjoyed and why you slapped him

Kalpi: He did without my permission

Pakya: So it was not because he has not taken permission not that you don't like

Kalpi: Pakya, what should I do this guy is getting into my nerves, its really hard to stay and pretend calm and composed infront of him

Pakya: When you liked him why you running from him

Kalpi: Pakya, this feeling which I felt for him may be because he is the first person who has kissed me, but I'm not first for him. And do you think he must also felt the same no Pakya from past three weeks he is hell bent to become friend of mine, its not because he has fallen for me but some where I hurt his male ego and rejected. You know he tried to make me jealous (and she described the canteen incident)šŸ˜†šŸ˜† you should look his face Pakya I was enjoying it. He is not at serious, and I'm not going to give heed to this childish act

Pakya: I'm not doubting on you but why you are pre-assuming thing, just enjoy the moment come out of cocoon live your life, may be he is one for you and it can also be he also have same feeling for you

Kalpi: Pakya I my research about "The Raghav Singhania" - he gets what he want, I'm at present just a trophy for him whom he want, after achieving he will leave

Pakya: But you are not weak , and nobody can reject "The Kalpana Kapoor", after all you are powerful than Singhania's

Kalpi: I don't want that you know and it won't the relation made by love but it will be deal. Like my parents, the marriage is just merger of two business family. I don't want that whenever I see Vithal Mama and Manda Mami I really miss that bonding in my parents

Pakya: So now what you going to do

Kalpi: Don't know, thanks

Pakya: For how many times you are going to thank for gift

Kalpi: Not for gift, but for understanding me, now I feel light

Pakya: You know I'm always there for you, just leave everything on bappa, and enjoy yourself. Ok now can we go

Kalpi: Few more minutes please

Pakya: Kalpi now it afternoon all will be waiting for lunch

Kalpi: (half heartedly) Ok

Pakya: Are you planning get me beaten up

Kalpi: No, why?

Pakya: Then smile and come otherwise maa won't give lunch to me and ajooba he will throw me out

Kalpi: Aww, (smiling) now it ok

Precap: Raghav-Sammy video chat, another heart attack for him

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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Note:

First of all I want to thank to all who has liked my story, as I have already mentioned I'm just trying and this is my first attempt. One request to all of you if you guys tell me what you like most in my story and what you guy not liked then this would help me in writing future plot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Awesome update...
First time somebody gave pakya good role...hes very understanding
Like kalpi & pakya convo...😊
Like ur writing style...just go with d flow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lolor

Awesome update...

First time somebody gave pakya good role...hes very understanding
Like kalpi & pakya convo...😊
Like ur writing style...just go with d flow...

thank you for your motivation. I'm glad that you like Kalpi & Pakya convo😳

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