RagnaFF: The Soul Of My Life (pr,cs:pg1, p1:pg2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys.. what's up? I know i know.. I haven't finish my other stories yet.. but i will give updates for them as well.. this story has been wandering in my mind for weeks.. if u guys dont want me to continue this story, pls let me know..

Prologue..


It was a beautiful mountain.. the scenery from the top of it was breathtaking.. A girl was sitting near the edge of the mountain looking sad.. her back was visible..she was hugging her legs near her chest and lost in her sadness..

A guy came and sat beside her... after a few seconds of silent,

Guy: " Beautiful isn't it?", he asked looking at the breathtaking view from top but He didn't get any response from her.

Guy: " Kalpi... dont be sad yaar... its just france.. the internship will end in a month.. then we wont be away from each other..", making kalpi look at him..

K: " how will i be able to live without you?"

Guy: " u r saying like im gonna die n_", before u could finish it kalpi kissed in on his lips making him shut..

K: " dont u ever say that.. dont u ever think of leaving me..", she said breaking the kiss..

Guy: " ok.. i wont say that.. i promise.. now come on.. give me the smily face.."

When she didnt,

Guy: " oh come on... smile.. if u dont smile im gonna jump off this mountain..", he said playfully pouting his lips.

Smile formed on her lips seeing his. antics..

K: " u r impossible..", she said giggling..

Guy: " and u r beautiful.. and u r even more beautiful when u smile.. keep smiling," saying so he kissed her again..

She felt something wet in the corners of her eyes... she slowly opened her eyes.. she was in her room... she looked at the wall clock.. it was 3am... she woke up and open the windows and gazed at the stars in the sky..she thought about those memories.. those beautiful memories that are always fresh in her mind... nothing can erase HIM from her memories..


PART 1: PG 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Kalpana Allyson Grey: 17 years old. Beautiful. Her father passed away when she was 8. She was raised by her single mother.

Raghav Singhania: 17 years old. Goes to school in Lakeview (my imaginary town.. it is a rural area.. wet area..). He is kind.. school's football captain. Handsome. The most popular guy in the school .

Samar Raizada : known as sammy.. he is Raghav's friend.. he is the brainy guy (@ nerd). Wears thick black specs.. bullied by others but always saved by raghav..

Pakhi shegal: beauty queen of the school.. she is so much into herself.. she has her eyes on raghav as according to her theory the beauty queen and the popular guy of the school belong together.

Seena Mehta: Pakhi's side kick.

Diya Khandelwal: Pakhi's side kick.

Mrs Grey: kalpi's mother. Loving mother. Her daughter is everything for her.

Gauri Singhania & Harivansh Singhania: raghav' parents..
Edited by Dimple_0510 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Its awesome n thrilling kalpi dream
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1



Mrs Grey walked upstairs towards her daughter's room before opening the door. She saw kalpana sleeping on the couch near the open windows in sitting position while leaning her head on the wall. Mrs Grey walked up to her before kneeing before her daughter. She placed her hand fondly on her head and caressed it.


MG: " Allyson.. Al.. It's getting late.. Wake up dear.. It's ur first day in new school.."


( kalpana's full name is kalpana allyson grey.. Her father was half indian and half american.. People usually call her allyson or al for short.. Her father fondly calls her kalpi..)


Kalpi opened her eyes.


MG: " good morning baby.. Get ready.. I will drop u at ur new school.."


K: " morning mom.. U dont have to drop me.. I will drive myself.."


MG: " no way.. It's ur first day and im gonna drop u.. From tomorrow u can take the car.."


K: " ok.. I will get ready.."


She got ready and ate the breakfast quietly without exchanging any words with her mother. Then, both drove towards the school.. Once they reach the school, kalpi opened the door to leave but her mom stopped her.


MG: " Allyson..", kalpi sat back and looked at her mom.


MG: " i know this is difficult for u.. For being in a new school.. But i assure u, u will be alright and will have a wonderful time here..", she said squeezing her daughter's hand slightly.


Kalpi just nooded her head slightly and went outside the car. Mrs Grey looked her daughter entering the school and sighed sadly before driving away.


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Lakeview high school..


Once she stepped in she saw lots of faces.. All unknown and new.. She walked past them, ignoring their questioning faces (new girl.. Obviously). When she found the principal's office, she knocked the door.


"Come in..", a voice echoed from inside.


Sitting there was principal Duvall.. He is a tall dark man in his 50's.


K: " good morning sir.. Im..", before she could finish,


PD: " aah.. U must be miss grey..", kalpi nodded.


PD: " have a sit miss grey.. Im glad u joined our school..i saw ur academic details.. And they are phenomenal.. And dont worry about the 4 months of studies u missed.. I will appoint a student, brilliant one indeed,from ur class to help u catch up with the ones u missed.."


Kalpi just nodded her head with a blank face.


Principal Duvall called a person from student office through his phone to come to his cabin and asked him to give the class schedule and show her the class she belongs to.


Man: " this is ur class.. And these ppl here are ur new classmates.. Here's ur schedule.. If u have any doubts, u can refer to the student office.. And dont forget to collect ur student id during lunch break.. All the best..", the man left after showing the class which is very noisy as the teacher is not in yet.


Kalpi just nodded her head and stood at the door. She walked into the class holding her books and schedule in her hand while her eyes downcast. The focus of the whole bunch of students who were busy making noises turned towards her. They started whispering seeing a new girl in class. There was only one seat empty in the middle row. She silently walked there and sat. She could clearly here some making fun of her. She sat there silently ignoring all those eyes on her.


" Silence!!!", Mrs Montez, the science teacher entered the class..


All became silent and went to their respective seats.


MM: " good morning class.."


"Good morning, Mrs Montez..", the class wished back.


MM: " well.. Principal Duvall told me that we have a new student here today..", mrs montez's eyes followed the eyes of the students which were on kalpi.


Kalpi stood up silently.


MM: " welcome to Lakeview dear.. Im sure all are eager to know who u r.. So, pls introduce urself.."


P: " yes.. We r very eager..uff..", pakhi kapoor who was also in the same class murmured sarcastically making the whole class laugh.


MM: " thats enough miss kapoor... U carry on dear.."


K: " Im Kalpana Allyson Grey."


Se: " what a short name..", seena teased and hi-5ed with diya earning another wave of laughter.


K: " Allyson... Al.. Thats what ppl call me.. Im from Port Villa."


MM: " thanks for the introduction miss grey.. Principal Duvall asked me to appoint a student to assist u to cover the 4 months syllabus u missed. Samar.."


The students talked among each other wondering why kalpi missed 4 months of classes..


S: " yes, mrs montez..", samar raizada @ sammy who was sitting right next to kalpi replied adjusting his big black specs.


MM: " i want u to help miss grey to cover up the 4 months syllabus as u r pretty comfortable with syllabus.."


S: " sure, mrs montez.." , he said giving a small smile..


Di: " the nerd's got a new job..", the class laughed.


Kalpi didnt give any expression. She was just looking in front.


MM: " alright then.. Lets take the attendance and start our class... Where is mr singhania?", she asked looking for him around the class.


V: " he is at the football training mrs montez.."


MM: " i wonder when this boy gonna focus on studies as well.. Alright class turn to page number 57 of ur textbook.. Today we're gonna study about density.."


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The school bell rang. It was recess time.. All packed their things and went out towards the canteen. Kalpana was keeping her things inside her bag. Sammy went towards her.


T: " Good luck with ur tutoring u geek..", Tarun from the class taunted sammy and went out.


S: " hi. Allyson right?Im samar raizada.. U can call me sammy.. ", he said extending his hand.


Kalpi just nodded her head slightly ignoring his hand for handshake..Sammy withdrew his hand.


S: " well.. Ok.. I will start helping u with the studies starting tomorrow.. Maybe after school.. Is it ok for u?"


Kalpi just nodded her head in agreement. Sammy frowned slightly thinking how strange is this girl.


S: " ok then.. See u after recess..", he left the class..


The class was empty. Kalpi sighed and looked outside the window blankly.. After ten minutes, she remembered that she has to go to the student office to get her student id. She picked her bag and moved out of the class. She had hard time finding the student office and the corridors were crowded with students as it was recess time.. Some were kissing near the locker doors, some were chitchatting and some were gossiping. She saw pakhi, diya and seena boasting and gossiping and the bunch of boys who were drooling behind them.


Suddenly she heard a loud noise. She saw Tarun and two boys bullying sammy.


T: " u scary little froggy.. Are u gonna wipe my shoes or not?", he was holding sammy by the collar against the locker door.


S: " i wont..", Sammy said struggling to free himself from Tarun's grip.


Tarun and his friends laughed.


T: " look at how brave this timid mouse has become.. Let me teach u..", he was about to punch sammy on his face when,


" LEAVE HIM ALONE!!", someone warned in deathly voice.



Sorry.. If it is crap.. I started writing after so long.. Sorry for mistakes. Pls let me know how u feel about this update.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved ur story dear, please continue it. Its awesome. I will be always waiting for ur updates..! Missed ur stories a lot. Please continue all ur stories na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...missed your stories...thanks for updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Nice update
Hmm kalpi n rag finally near face t face
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
plz update ur others stories im die hard fan of ur ff love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
I LOVED YOUR STORY VERY MUCH,Its very interesting.THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

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