RAGNA 6 SHOTS:'I DESERVE BETTER' discontinued - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: aru_27

awesome update...
why raghav is behaving like an animal ??? what is the reason for this behavior of raghav??
who is in the dark room??
nice


thx dear ..

have patient ..you will get to know
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice update

End is confusing
Is real Raghav kidnap or something
Update soon



thxx dear..
you confusion will get clear in nxt update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nimmynatarajan

Hi sana, Welcome back with a bang update yaar... plz update soon bcoz wats happening to kalpi is killing us...

hi nimmy

thx dear..

you will get to know in nxt update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: premap

Superb update! You have made us 'stand upside down ' wondering whether Rags is really a Negative character. Please do continue soon. Thanks


thxx dear.

glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: rachufan

Awesome awesome dear very welwelllo written raghav is trying to make her life hell who is that guuy is he ra...



thanks rachs..

glad that you like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: mermaidheart

awsm sana..

you left me in thought who is actually a 👏raghav..


thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

I'm so much in love with this story of yours. I don't know what Raghav is trying to do but I HATE HIM. And Nisha and Arush are so awesome friends. Update soon please.


P.S. : Can u please provide an index at the first page ( I suffered a lil problem when I read it first)


Thanks!


glad you liked it my new rreader..

thx , for reminding me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
NOTE :
THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT GUYS..lOVE YOU GUYS FOR ENCOURAGING ME..


I WILL 'FINISH' THIS STORY AT THE END OF DEC..

SHOT 4 WILL BE UPDATE TONIGHT OR TOMORROW PAKKA.




LOVE,
SANA

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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
SHOT 4

after checking Kalpana, the doctor left to his cabin before indicating both of them to follow him.

once they entered doctor barked on them.

" what the hell you are all doing .. I told you about Kalpana's serious condition still you didn't listen to me once", screamed doctor on them.
" A little stress is harmful to her and I am afraid she can lose her baby too because of her fatal condition", warned doctor.

" please, keep her happy ", said the doctor and excused himself and left the cabin leaving shocked and worried arush and nisha..


both of her friend looking at kalpana with moist eyes who was lying lifelessly on the bed .they has been failed to kept her happy..both were lost in thier respective thoughts and they came back into sense when they heard kalpana's scream.

kalpana : RAGHAV !!!!!!!

They reached to her in no time and hugged her tightly..

" shh...doll... we are here ", spoke nisha softly while rubbing her back to made her calmed down..
" Don't be scared happiness..noone could harm you and your baby", assured arush while giving her side hug.

kalpana broke the hug and looked at both of them with worried face.

" he is back arush", whispered kalpana in shivering tone.

" who is back happiness", asked a confused arush.

" SAM", whispered kalpana and hugged him tightly making nisha shocked and left a confused arush.

" are you sure kalpana", asked a shocked nisha and kalpi nodded her head .

" this time i won't leave that b*****d", said a furious nisha .

" would anyone tell me who is this bloody Sam", asked a frustated arush.

handling the situation in her hand nisha spoke and started narrating the whole sam's fiasco.

" he is a sam d'souza. he was business partner of raghav . he started liking kalpana secretly.at first kalpana was hesitate to accept his friendship..but after some time she realised he is genuine person hence she accepted his friendship and raghav had no problem with their friendship as he thought him his good friend..their friendship growing with the time..

after few days he approached kalpana for dinner but as friend while hidding his real motive. the same day he proposed but kalpana rejected him sweetly by saying that she considered him only her friend and she also said she was engaged to his raghav which made him shocked..he said he is alright with being her friend as he don't want to lose friend like her and kalpana got relifed from her reply..

few days had been passed and he came under good book of kalpana and she started trusting him..one day he called kalpana that he met with accident and could not attend the meeting.kalpana got worried as his voice sounding, he is very ill so kalpana went to met him after meeting but she didn't have slight hint that she is going to face hell that day.

here nisha was narrating and kalpana lost in her bitter past ..

FLASHBACK

when kalpana reached there, it was dark .she entered with shaking legs but couln't found anyone.she shouted his name but nothing worked.suddenly someone hugged her from behind .with great difficulty she made herself free.when she looked back she was surprised to found a known face .

" sam , what are you doing ?", asked a shocked Kalpana by his sudden behavior.

" just hugging to my sweetheart", replied sam with the evil smile and moved forward to touched her.

" STOP SAM, DON'T YOU DARE TO MOVE FORWARD.HOW COULD YOU THINK ABOUT ME LIKE THAT? YOU KNOW I AM ENGAGED THAT TOO WITH YOUR FRIEND WHO Considers YOU A GOOD PERSON BUT YOU ARE SO CHEAP..

CHIII, I ASHAMED TO CALL YOU MY FIREND WHO KEPT DIRTY EYES ON HIS FRIEND'S FIANCEE..IF MY RAGHAV COMES TO KNOW HE WILL RIP YOU LIMB TO LIMB", warned kalpana while moving back

" Not today sweetheart, i will fulfilled my desire today ", said sam looking at her with lustful eyes .

" Please , leave me ", pleaded kalpana while tears were flowing from her eyes continously..

" no way darling, just wants to taste you . i want you so badly", said sam while moving forward looking at her with dark desires.

" NOOO !!!!!!", screamed kalpana while her voice echoed entire the mention but noone was there to heard her piercing scream.


sry, guys for short update as I have come down with fever but I have made a promised with you guys which I couldn't afford to break.

and I wrote this shot in the hurry so you might be found lots of mistakes..sry once again

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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Hope kalpana will save herself...
She is strong...
She don't need a knight in shining armour..
Hope u will consider it...
Get well soon

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