RAGNA 6 SHOTS:'I DESERVE BETTER' discontinued

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Posted: 8 years ago
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sry sry ,a big sry ..
again i started the new story of ragana.what should i do ragana fever is not leaving me??
this is 5 or 6 shots only.

enjoy the story

SHOT 1


IN THE APARTMENT
A beautiful lady working in kitchen.she has ocean eyes which twinling with happiness, a little cute nose ,her plump lips which is as soft as rose petals, her long silky hair flowing like a dark cloud.( yes! you guessed it right,)she is none other than our beauty queen KALPANA RAGHAV SINGHANIA.
she preparing different delicious dishes for her hubby while hummimg a romantic song..
she looked so happy today as she is going to give a big suprise to her hubby..

kalpi(while touching her tummy): baby i am so happy ,you are symbol of our true love .i love you so much . i eagerly waiting for your daddy to give this wongerful news to him and wanna see his expression.he will be so happy after knowing that you are comming to fulfill our life with more happiness .your daddy and i came together after fighting with this cruel world then her mind shifted to the fast incidents ...
She came out from her past after hearing the door bell.
kalpi( thinking): who would be there at this time.Might be Candy ! she always came at wrong time.
she opened the door and frowned to see courier man.
kalpi: yes!
courier man: mam, this is for you.
he handover the envelope to kalpi

kalpi: what? for me.
courier man nodded his head
she took the courier and closed the door.

kalpi(self-talk): it is a court . who sends me court notice?
she opened the envelope and read it..the ground beneath her feet sliped away after what did she see.
she collapsed on the floor and tears started flowing from her beautiful eyes.
"DIVORCE", whispered kalpi.
how could this happen when I hadn't signed any paper? but her mind got alerted when a fine night Raghav took her signature saying that he bought a land on her name ", whistled quietly under her tongue.

"again he betrayed me", muttered kalpi.

" WHY RAGHAV? WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME. I LOVED YOU SO MUCH ".roared kalpi and started crying bitterly.

she sit on the floor numbly like a dead body. before a few minutes she was looking like a beauty queen and now she looked pale as something sucked her all blood.all the tears of her eyes dried away.
all the flashes of her past rolling down like a movie before her eyes.
she had sacrificed her dreams to fulfilled her mother's dream so that her mother starts loving her.
she selflessly loved her mother but she alwys deprived of her love and attention because her mother always busy looking after her so called daughter pakhi kapoor..
her lonliness in th hostle life,her fear from darkness, her nightmare but she always fighted with them alone . she alwys missed her mother's warmth .
her eagerly waiting of phones calls but her mother never talked .when she asked from her baba ,her baba said she is busy with pakhi.
her always looking towards hostel gets for her parents so that they took her to home to enjoyed her holidays but as always no one came.
she was broken soul but due to her bestie Nishtha roy aka Candy she again stared loving her life. h

she hoped after returning from hostel ,she will be get her mother loves and attentiond but nothing happened like that .thereforth she accepted her faith that her mother will never love her. so started making her own world where she and her bestie will lives for each others .what an ironic her bestie was orphan and here she has family still she is living life of orphan.

breaking her heart's wall, her love her raghav enterd into her world. She got love from raghav which she was craving since her childhood.when raghav propesd her ,she hesitated at first but due to raghav caring nature she falled head over heel in love with her raghav.
suddenly a huge storm destroyed her dreams when she has been waiting for raghav on their wedding day but raghav came with pakhi after marriage her .
she slaped rahgav many times becuase she felt betrayed whom she love wholeheartly.
after lots of begging ,she gave second chanced to raghav for explaination.raghav told her about his mother ,her demand and how did he felt helpless? he promised her he will never do the same mistake again as he loves her more than his life.
after lots of struggle they were together and they got married 1 year ago and now their symbol of love are inside her worb now but she felt cheated from her love and family..

she was not in the sense ..she felt nothing not even a slight pain ,her tears has been dried,her heart is itching badly like someone scretched it with a sharp knife.

she heard someone calling her name but she felt so weak to get up..
again she heard sound like someone calling her name but this time she felt ths sound familiar .she turned and looked across the living room but noone was there then she heard that sound is coming from outside ..someone knocking the door..somehow she standed on her feet and dragged herself towards the door.
she opened the door and someone hug her tightly and asking something but she was getting nothing because her mind was blanked.

Girl: what is this kalpi ? what aren't you opening the door? i has been calling you since 15 minutes.i got scared .some weird thoughts were running through my mind.tell me why are you so silent..

when she didn't get any response then she noticed her state. her red and swollen eyes looking like she has been crying for a long time, her dried tears marks over her cheeks,her messed hair and dress.


her heart paining now,her eyes got wailed after seeing the condition of her besties ,her chocopie.she looked like broken soul..she never seen her chocopie like this before as she is seeing now.. she alwys known her as strong girl ..she never got so broken from her mother ignorance and not even when raghav broken her heart and chosen vengenance over love,still she standed like a strong soul.

girl( with broken voice): choco pie ! what happened darling? what had you done to yourself?

her hand was shivering while touching her face.she was feeling weak now.
kalpi responded a little when she felt her bestie's touch.

kalpi( stammering): ca...n..dy... ra..gh...v... di...vo...", said kalpi while struggling as her throat was paining with emotions.

candy: yes ! tell me..anything to raghav as she know kalpi love raghav moer than her life.
again kalpi was not responding, standing like a statue..candy shaked her with force again she is standing without any emotion which sent shiver in her bestie's body..now she was fearing .something serious happened which shocked her heavily.
Then she noticed a paper in kalpi's hand.

she snatched the paper and started reading ,she sat on the floor with shocked. there is got the reason of kalpi'state .she never thought in her wild dream raghav could have done this ..she thought raghav was now a changed man. she always stand with kalpi in her thin and thik.she could hold her tears more and they start flowing.
someone broken her friend beyond the limit ,this mere thought boiled her up.
In between wiping her tears she said you only met with candy which is kalpi's bestie now you will BE see NISHTHA ROY.you have to pay for your deed ..you made my kalpi a lifeless person. now i am coming MR. RAGHAV SINGHANIA .you have to tell me why did you broke my friend's heart again.

she turned a looked kalpi she was still standing lifelessly and lost somewhere..she got up and held kalpi's forearm and dragged her with herself ..she made kalpi to sit on passenger seatt and turned towards driving seat and started the engine and flew away towards her destination.

IN THE SINGHANIA MANSION
IN THE HALL
GIRL( grinning like a fool): kamla maa i am so happy today ..i am going to marry to raghav ..i love him so much and so does he.i told you kamla maa kalpi has been came between us only..raghav doesn't loves her..he loves me only.
kamla: i know pakhi ..raghav baba doesn't loves kalpi..he loves you only..now you both are together..

pakhi: thank you kamla ma..i love you.

kamla: I love you too pakhi.

both didn't realise they two broke the innocent soul and hurted her many times,..
and one another soul was broken too beacause of his own deed.he claimed to loved his wife but he himself betrayed her by taking her sighnatue on divore paper withour her knowlege ..he was helpless and he couldn't lost her mother again.he lived many years without her. he never loved pakhi ..he is going to marry her only for his mother..this heart always beat for kalpi only and will be beat for her only.
his trance broken with the pakhi's shouting.
pakhi (roaring): "WHY ARE YOU SITING LIKE THIS RAGHAV AS SOMEONE HAS DIED.PLEASE STOP DON'T BEING A DEVDAS..KALPI IS NOT HERE STILL YOU LOST IN HER MEMORIES. FOR GOD SAKE KALPI IS MUCH ALIVE ..YOU ARE BEHAVING LIKE SHE IS DE...

Before she completes that word she felt hot sensation over her cheek and she fell down with the force of the slap.

DON'T YOU DARE TO SAY ANYTHING AGAINST MY KALPU.",roared candy.
with difficult pakhi got up and shouted "YOU B***H..."
Again she felt the same burning sensation,infact, this time, blood was coming out from her lips and every person in the hall frozen at their spot and the sound of slap ecoes in the entire mention.
"NOT A SINGLE WORD MISS KAPOOR", said candy angrily.

kamla( with her sweet coded words): nishi beta ,listen.
but candy cut her off in the middle.
"YOU LISTEN MRS.KAMALA JHADAV ONLY CLOSE ONES CALL ME NISHI AND HERE NOT A SINGLE PERSON IS MINE AND I DON'T LIKE WHEN STRANGER CALL ME NISHI..IT'S MISS ROY ", roared Nisha Roy.

Nisha whirled and looked at the person who is sitting as nothing happened .
she marched towards him and held his collars , dragged him up and gave a tight slap .
" YOU BL***Y bas***d MR RAGHAV SINGHANIA ! YOU AGAIN DITCHED MY KALPANA ..THOUGH SHE IS ALIVE BUT DEAD FROM INSIDE..YOU ARE An MURDERER ..YOU KILLED HER SOUL BRUTUALY.YOU ARE NOT A HUMAN BEING ..YOU ARE A SPINLESS ,HEARTLESS MONSTER"roared nisha while shaking him with his collars.
YOU CHEATED HER BY TAKING HER SINGHNATURE WITHOUT HER KNOWLEDGE ..YOU ARE COWARD WHO COULDN'T TOOK STAND FOR HIS LOVE."shouted nisha.

she took out all bangles from her wrist and thrown on his face and said" WEAR THEM BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT A REAL MAN .YOU DID THIS ONLY FOR YOUR MOM .YOU ARE PUPPET OF YOUR MOTHER'S HAND.YOU FILTHY MAN, GO, AND HIDE BEHIND YOUR MOM'S PALLU.

OH ! THE GREAT GAURI SINGHANIA, YOUR NAME SHOULD BE WRITTEN ON GENIES BOOK .YOU ARE WELL KNOW HOW TO USE YOUR OWN SON ON THE NAME OF REVENGE? .HOW TO USE HIS WEAKNESS.?
I MUST SAY WHAT A PERFORMANCE?.YOU ARE REALLY A GOOD ACTORESS?" questioned nisha while clapping.

she roated and walked to the Kamla Jadhav
NOW YOU ARE HAPPY NA MRS JHADAV BECUASE TODAY YOU DONE WHAT DID YOU WANTED .CONGRATULATION! TODAY YOU BROKE YOUR DAUGHTER COMPLETLY.", spoke nisha with extra coded words.

MY KALPANA ALWAYS CRAVED FOR YOUR LOVE AND ATTENTION BUT AS USUAL, YOU WAS BUSY WITH YOUR OBSESSED DAUGHTER MISS PAKHI.
YOU ARE HER REAL MOTHER STILL YOU BEHAVED WORST THAN A STEP MOTHER.YOU NURTURED HER IN YOUR WOMB FOR 9 MONTHS BUT YOU ARE FAILED AS A MOTRHER.
THANK GOD I AM ORPHAN BECUASE IF MOTHERS ARE LIKE YOU AND GAURI SINGHANIA THEN I AM HAPPY I DON'T HAVE PARENTS.

all the time kamla hung her head down .
DON'T BE SORRY ! YOU DONE A GREAT JOB.DON'T FEEL GUILTY hurrahed nisha.

kamla tried to reached to nisha but nisha stopped her .
DON'T COME NEAR ME. I WILL GET DIRTY IF YOU TOUCH ME.

LISTEN ALL YOU HEARTLESS PERSON DON'T EVER SHOW YOUR FACE ..DON'T THINK KALPANA IS ALONE ..SHE HAS ME .
TODAY I SWEAR TO GOD YOU WILL NEVER GET TO CHANCE TO SEE KALPANA..YOU WILL BE REGRETTING BUT THERE IS NO KALPANA TO FORGIVE YOU.
AND YOU SPINLESS CREATURE "MY KALPANA DESERVE BETTER THAN YOU.
by saying this she left the place which was suffocating her..

she reached to the car but found kalpanawas missing.
nisha(panicked): oh god ! where has she gone .i left her in the car only..i said her don't come out from car.
she was badly sweating as kalpna was not in sense.
" what would if she did something to herself ",said nisha while roaming here and there. her mind diverted to the direction where everyone was shouting.she got frozen at her place as some car hit her and thrown her body away.


sry for poor English and grammatical mistakes


INDEX

SHOT 1 : SCROLL UP

SHOT 2 : PAGE 5

SHOT 3 : PAGE 9

SHOT 4 : PAGE 14

SHOT 5: PAGE 20

LAST SHOT PART 1: PAGE 27

LAST SHOT PART 2: PAGE 30

LAST SHOT PART 3 : PAGE 33





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely hope kalpi didnt hurt herself and their baby
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome!!
Makhi got her dose.
Even raghav.
Please save kalpi and her baby.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is what I wanted Kalpi to be ! Just 'dump' the 'garbage called Raghav' and move on with her life! But you have given Kalpi a friend , Nishi , who has the attitude , which Kalpi should have. Brilliant story ! Please do continue soon without leaving it to 'hibernate' ! Thanks. I am waiting with 120% ATTENTION FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. BTW you need not apologize for you English , which is good. We are grateful to you for writing this story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update...pls update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Like it but at end......hope kalpi & baby r safe...
I feel whayever candy spoke r our ragna fans words..👏
Just want strong kalpi...
& Raghav to beg ...but kalpi not even listing to him
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Lovely update hope kalpi n her baby r safe
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Awesome update story :) pls update soon nd save kalpi nd her baby
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Beautiful story ...pls continue
Pls update soon
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Story is written very nicely can't wait for the next shot

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