An OS : My Prince is here ! (Alternate ending updated)

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: niru04
Beautiful os

Tysm 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aru_27
Awesome update

Tysm 😊

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: naam11
Awesome update. Both ending are wonderful.

Thank u ...

Glad to hear that u liked both the endings 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: anurose
Thanx for beautiful OS mariee!!..

Hehehe ... thank you for your comment as well anu 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Maggi-
Wow such a cute story all the while i was reading it , the image i have for malhar is a little genius something like that n here 😛 she had acted much like her age 😆 but again in tge end she is what she is 😃
Hehe Raghav n kalpi's hesitation part qas funny especially mai hon na wali 🤣 n Malhar reaction when Raghav enterd 😆

Lovely n cute OS 😃 loved it 😆

Santhiii ...aaj Kal tu toh bhul hi gayi hai meri stories pe comment karna ...not fair , glad that u did on this one though 😃

I have only utilized the name Malhar , the characters are way too different ...but phir bhi happy to hear that she's left an imprint on ur mind that u remember her even after coincidences has ended a long long long time ago ...

Main hoo na wala woh slide mera fav hai ...and I think a girl doing it makes it all the more happening , isn't it ?? 😉

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: meenukansal
Awesome os

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Ragna1302

Hey its so beautiful os...I loved it...
Yup I know that the girl r not kalpi who is waiting 4 her prince 😉😆...
But loved it...thank 4 sharing. ...

Tysm ...

Obvio yaar ..meri Kalpana ki Kalpana hai ...& I don't write desperate girls ... ego ka sawaal aata hai 😛😉😆

But temme to write a desperate Raghav ...muhhhaahhahaha...I can write an entire chapter ...lol ! #Feminism 😛

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Brilliant!!! Do I have to say it was amazing!! It's understood from me ok ;)!! Let this be a standing order :))))
Girl you are so creative hats off!!! You know taking into consideration the malhar from Yur other story I was wondering how cum she didn't ask him herself :) now I know why;)!! Smart girl!! Love your creation!! Love how you brought in malhar a familiar being created by you n how u brought her in this OS with the same attitude!! And ofcourse she knew what her massi felt n that girl is so damn smart she even knew Raghav felt the same!! Lol, tk God for her as Kalpi wud have never said anything LOL!! Man, all I have to say is BRILLIANT!! MISS ORIGINAL ;)

Di didididii ...yep u have to say that it was amazing !! 😆😛

Lol , just kidding ...I knew it the moment this story struck my head taht u r gonna love it 😉

Malhar... indeed, she's the most easiest character to write...maybe coz her attitude & responses are very much similar to the way I am in real life ...so it's like I just have to think how wud I react in a particular situ .. & bam ! Malhar's part is done ...

It's always difficult to write Kalpi though , then may it be this or coincidences since she's so measured in life ...

Anyways thanks for the comment.😃

And do I have to say that I was waiting for it 😉