An OS : My Prince is here ! (Alternate ending updated)

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anurose

@anurose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thanx for beautiful OS mariee!!..

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow such a cute story all the while i was reading it , the image i have for malhar is a little genius something like that n here 😛 she had acted much like her age 😆 but again in tge end she is what she is 😃

Hehe Raghav n kalpi's hesitation part qas funny especially mai hon na wali 🤣 n Malhar reaction when Raghav enterd 😆

Lovely n cute OS 😃 loved it 😆

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swati

@Ragna1302

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hey its so beautiful os...I loved it...

Yup I know that the girl r not kalpi who is waiting 4 her prince 😉😆...

But loved it...thank 4 sharing. ...

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Brilliant!!! Do I have to say it was amazing!! It's understood from me ok ;)!! Let this be a standing order :))))
Girl you are so creative hats off!!! You know taking into consideration the malhar from Yur other story I was wondering how cum she didn't ask him herself :) now I know why;)!! Smart girl!! Love your creation!! Love how you brought in malhar a familiar being created by you n how u brought her in this OS with the same attitude!! And ofcourse she knew what her massi felt n that girl is so damn smart she even knew Raghav felt the same!! Lol, tk God for her as Kalpi wud have never said anything LOL!! Man, all I have to say is BRILLIANT!! MISS ORIGINAL ;)

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abirami_shankar

@abirami_shankar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely and creative Os dear. I loved it. And malhar, she is amazing.

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b.baheti

@b.baheti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Marushkaaa!!!!

In this OS there was just one hero MALHAR😉 You made me fall for her all over again.

If in coincidences she was sweet and someone who was copy of Kalpana as I remember in stubborness here she was contrast. Prince and that too Raghav for a 5 year old! I loved this OS and I am in love with Malhar😛

Please please please write more often...your writing has great blend of romance and humour which make it all the more interesting...waiting for all your shots too...😊

And yes All the Best for exams do well 😃