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Posted: 9 years ago
ps- I want seprate comments for both chapters
lol greedy me
Chapter 20

Her heart beat stops almost immidatly when his words drawn inside her
But vikram continue
V- u are the one who trap my son for money ??
She stood rooted on her place
V- how much money he pay u foe a night?? 1 lakh / 2 lakh ?? I must say he has a good taste he said while eyeing her..
Her world shatter and tears start forming in her eyes
Throwing a briefcase toward her he say
V- i pay u 50 lakh just go away from my son. He will forgot u once u left and again concentrate on his life !
I'll pay u for eacc
R- ENOUGH !!!
Vikram turn towad door immidatly as he hear Raghav voice
Taking two long steps toward Vikram Raghav held his collar , giving a last glance toward her whose eyes fixed on floor , her eyes were moist !!
R- WHAT ARE U DOING HERE??
V- COME TO TELL THIS SL
and he held his neck and whisper in a low yet dangerous tone
R- I TOLD U BEFORE THINK BEFORE USING WORDS FOR HER !
Pushing him away as he start coughing Raghav say
R- Get Out from Here !!
Giving a glance toward kalpi vikram know his work his done he broke her !! Before coming here he serched a lot about kalpi he know very well she till now not taken advantage of Raghav money , but his ego is too big to underdstand that poor soul !!
Completing final step of his plan he say
V- ur anger won't change truth Raghav she is nothing but a MISTRESS .
It's enough for Raghav to listen, helding vikram by his arm he throw him out !!
She immidatly rush inside her room dropping herself on floor crying her heart out !
But the deed was done someone bcom succesful to break a soul who won't hurt anyone till now but it was life who play with her at everystep , she agreed she bcom mean in his care , the protectiveness that she feel whenever he is with her ! What she do when she have none but she only make him HER WORLD.
He may only be a person in this world but HE MEAN WORLD TO HER ! But all shattered now , she is shattered now!!
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sweet1308 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
how mean that vickram is
hope they stay together kalpi confined to rag
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update. ..
Vikram😡😡...thank god raghav come on time. ...
Poor kalpi😭 she is shattered. ..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chappy pucchu..


Will kalpi leave Raghav..
That idiot vikram hurt our angel..
I want RagNa together forever..
Plz update nxt chappy soon..
Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice update
vikram knows kalpi will never leave raghav for money...so he hurt her emotionally...😡
hope raghav soothes her pain...& they stay together
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why Kalpi didn't slapped that vikram 😡😡😡he deserved a tight slap...man!!!!! But Y is raghav gettin so angry...isn't its obvious that she is his mistress as he doesn't want to name the relation between him & Kalpi
When will he realise his love for her
I'm loving it 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely concept. You have a lovely story but I have missed it. Quite realistic . Keep up. Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 21

He immidatly rush toward her room knoking it continiously

She was sobbing while sitting beside door ignoring his continus pleads to open door.

5 min 10 min 15 min and more than 1hr passes
Her sobbing cutting his heart in pieces . He pleads , shout , call her softly even blackmail her but he gain no responce after his more than hundred pleads to say something he got only one answer
"leave me " "go back to ur life"

He stopped trying he just sit beside door on otherside hearing her sobs .
It angered him , it hurt him more than anything !! Vikram Singhnia hurt that person whom he hate to even see sad .
Cleanching his fist he get up shutting main door with a thud !!
Her heart stop beating , she cried more and more thinking he left !!!
Driving as fast as he could he reach singhania mantion.

Vikram was sitting in hall and gauri & maya too was their as he saw raghav he get up
V- finally u left her !!
Ignoring him he went upstairs

Gauri frowned at his behaviour
and within some minutes he came back with his bag
When gauri asked in a cold tone
G- where are u going Raghav ?? How much more u want to hurt us??

He laughed at her statment putting his bag aside
R- HURT??
Do u even know WHAT'S THAT MEAN??
( he shouted )
R- u just broke a girl who has nothing related to u !! Do u know what i pay her for every night ??
He say while turning toward vikram singhania
R- U WANT TO KNOW NA HOW MUCH I PAY HER FOR EACH NIGHT I SPEND WITH HER ??
R- Then listen me carefully JUST A SMILE AND SHE IS READY TO DO ANYTHING !!
R- U WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THAT GIRL?? then listen me
THAT GIRL IS A FOOL JUST TOO MUCH THAT SHE HAVEN'T TAKE A SINGLE PENNY FROM ME !! JUST TOO OBESSED WITH HER SELF RESPECT THAT SHE DO STUDY , THAN WORK IN A SMALL CANTEEN EVEN GIVE TUTION FOR HER SURVIVAL BUT NEVER ASK OR TAKE ANYTHING!!

V- that's why she is sleeping with a married man !
R- do hell with u and with this marrige ! Bcoz an egostick person like u never able to understand her!
He grab his bag again and turn toward door
V- where are u going Raghav??
R- I'M LEAVING THIS HOUSE FOR FOREEVER !! I'M GONNA STAY WITH HER !
Vikram clentch his fist
V- what about my reput
Before he complete Raghav say
R- DO HELL WITH U AND UR SO CALLED REPUTATION !! I DON'T BLOODY CARE !!

He came near vikram And whisper in a slow yet dengerous voice " U HURT HER ONCE IF U TRY TO DO IT AGAIN I'LL KILL U WITH MY OWN HANDS " and don't u even try to think i'm joking if one more tear fall from her eyes be prepared to face me bcoz u know i don't care that U ARE MY FATHER OR NOT !!

Vikram stood rooted on his place and gauri drop herself on sofa but the one person looking at him without blinking is maya and whisper
"Raghav singhnia love her"

sweet1308 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
its fabulous
wow rag just amazing
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
😊AWESOME UPDATE TAHNKS 😭REALLY FEELS BAD FOR KALPI MORE OVER IS RAGHVA WILL LEAVE HER JSUT FOR HIS POSITION .AWW ITS KILLING ME TO SEE RAGNA like this

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