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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks all for likes & cmnts
i thought to press like button for all who comment bcoz i unable to rply
but my like button not working:(
but i do read comments thanks..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz update nxt chappy Pucchu.. Waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 22 (a)


Kalpi cried for a long time when nearly for an hour she haven't listen his voice , she thought it's good , good for him that he leave her but still her heart break in million of pieces first Vikram & then He !! She opened her room door and went outside she want to be alone for sometime so she decided to visit her bappa his temple where she feel safe and peacful she still rember days when her baba first introduce with his only friend !!
Sitting in front of her friend she place her head on his feet and cried
" after losing her maa only in age of 2 yrs kalpi start to feel alone despit the fact that her baba try his best to being her mother , one day that time she was 5 yrs old kalpana came back with moist eyes vitthal got worried that day she cried and cried a lot when she told her baba that no all tease her always that her mother leave her bcoz she is a very bad girl they say those people who are bad lost their loved once . First vitthal fumed and then cried with his daughter pain , he then take her to bappa temple and make her sit in front of bappa and say
V- u know kalpi that he loved u more than anyone so he call ur mother so that he can take care of ur himself . He want to be ur mother , friend and everything !! U know u are special .

Carresing her forehead vitthal say to his princess
V- promise me u never lose hope , i be with u or not but u won't leave ur only friend.

Kalpi nodded her head and that day she met her only friend !!
While vitthal fold his hands in front of bappa and pray him to be with her daughter always !! "

When Raghav reached her flat he found it empty for once he was scared , he called her on her new number but her phone is in her room itself . Throwing his phone on couch he mutter where she went that late!!

15 minute passes and he was walking too & fro but still no sign of her , that's when he rember where she went mostly when she was sad too met her friend..
Despite the fact that he won't believe in God but he DO TRUST ON HER FAITH .
Grabbing his car keys immidatly went to take her back ...
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Sry for crap

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
aww that cute
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww that sweet
Great update and plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update. ...
Too emotional. .😭
kinnapatel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnaks neha little but sweet update .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update.
I m still hopping kalpi will not leave raghav. He left everything for her. Hope she understand.
Edited by farhana04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 22 (b)


Thinking about all events that happen and then her child she fall asleep on his feet determined she will not let anyone hurt hurt her child . No one...

When he reach temple where she used to visit when she is too happy or too sad or whenever she want to meet her friend .
He saw her sleeping on his foots . He is sure she must complained , scold and then aplogolize to her friend and after crying her heart out she fall in slumber in presence of him !
He walk toward her without making sound decide to talk to her in morning, he pick her up carefull enough to not wake up , thanking not God but to her only friend to take care of her !
Carefully he pick up in his arms and went toward her no now their house !
As he reach to their house with her in his arms he make her lay on bed and after changing he too come on his side . Caressing her head then kissing it he whisper
R- sorry i was the reason u got hurt today ! But i'll make sure it never ever happen again.

Kissing her forehead again he just keep looking at her whole night !!

In mrng

Kalpi was first to wake up and she open her eyes she saw him lying on his side his hand rested on her waist .
Smiling she caresses his cheeks causing him to wake up .
Pulling her toward him he kiss her on her lips wishing gud mrng , and then realization hit her , her eyes widen immidtly she get up and then last night moments flashes again in front of her eyes . All the while he was looking toward her wishing only she understand him! Or atleast try to understand him
R- kalpi
He whisper while sitting on bed
K- what are u doing here?? U need not be here u need to be ur family ?
Just go !!
R- first i'm not going anywhere ! And second i'm here where i want to !
He pull her toward himself by her hand looking in her eyes that went moist by now and say
R- i know u are hurt that too because of me !!
But believe me jaan i promise u i'm not leaving u !! and i meant my words .
Pushing him away she say
K- i don't want that go i don't need u !
R- and who say i'm here bcoz u need me !! I'm here bcoz i need u !!
As he take a step toward her she take a step back
She was detrmined that she is not letting anyone hurt her child in furture...
So she shout

K- JUST GET OUT I DON'T NEED U !! I'LL NOT GONNA TOLRATE FURTHER !
R- kalpi i know
K- U know WHAT?? huh ??
Tell me u know what ? Do u know how it feel when u was alone ? Do u know how it feel when my baba left me ? Do u know how i felt when u left me everytime ?
R- kalpi
K- tell me Raghav Singhania ! Do u know anything !! How much it hurt when he say that i'll get paid for each night i spend with u? Do u know how it feel when he say that u just want my body ? Do u know how it feel when u fight with same fear everyday that i might lost u despite the fact that u was nvr mine!!
BUT ENOUGH NOW JUST LEAVE

I WON'T LET MY CHILD FACE THIS LIFE ...
She say while breaking it tears !
Causing his breath to stop almost ..
His child ..

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Edited by darkloveriam - 9 years ago

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