The Ending: RagNa TS,Part-1 & Part-2, Page-1, 10/09/2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wohooo beautiful TS charu simply superb dear
its true if one determines strongly then nothing is impossible same with kalpi here n ragna do fit well in every story v take or u all pen it up
that's the speciality of ragna the r mesmerizing the mesmerize their viewer's or reader's with there charm n all thanks to all who r writn amazing stories on them u ppl really make them alive though they r not together now n hope they come soon to rule our hearts once again
coming to this story inner turmoil of kalpi makin her weak or say get fear of losin her world her husband her only family n there daughter the news of landslide made worry totally n scared too the journey now seem to b longest the erg to c her family hale n hearty was the only moto the convo btwn ragna was too filled lots of love the love they share is inseperable the r meant to b together forever may it b alive or dead n yes how can raghav leave they symbol of life alone as she is their symbol of love to prove that they r meant for eachother
the songs which used to b scary now r soothin to kalpi givin her hope that nothing can happen to her family
the promise they made to eachother how can it tarnish how can b it happen
finally fightin with all the odds wen she reached to her destiny lil relief she got but main turmoil was ahead r her family safe r they fine n alive she was prayin to god that they shudnt go anywhere as they r used to go to their frnds house wen ever she was out of town for meetings her family used to go for dinner n all though she was sorry for her frnds but still hopin that her family dint go to there house
she was findin difficult to knock the door the fear of losin n the things that happen few mins back was runnin in her mind with gr8 courage she knocked the door fear was creepin on her again she knocked the door n this time she waited n silently prayed to god that she shud hear the someone to come n she cud hear bolt of door to open
n few mins she really heard the sound n the moment she found her life infront of her she really relieved to her husband her love her life her Raghav hale n hearty she wanted to touch him to feel him that he was really standin infront of her
only watchin her face gaze fixed on her n felt the same relief to find her safe too n thanked god for it
the confrontation was awesome one shud trust other in a relation ship n true no outsider can destroy its bond n shudnt allow any such doubts in mind wen love is immense in two souls
the moment kalpi saw her daughter was happy that her entire family is safe n moment riya hugged her she was sooo relieved n kissed her as she was missed the soft touches n craved that nothin shud happen to her also
confrontation of them being parents was sooo touchy really they upcomin blessin was a blessin or ray of light to show them path
superb charu
sry any mistake in this comment wanted to pen up more but cudnt make it


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wonderful story. The hallucinations were awesome. For some moments I was afraid whether they are really dead. Writers efficiencyšŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent ! ' The Ending ' was a 'Beginning ' Of a True Love !! Superb ! Though you had given scary feelings in Pt.1 , with cold hands of Rags , for a moment I thought he was dead !!! What a relief ! Gosh, thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the concept of this story Its so real at times. Sometimes it take a disaster for us to realized the importance of people in our lives and not take them for granted. And that's exactly what happen to Kalpi She was so caught up in other things in her life and not putting her family first Kalpi driving home in the fog was scary. Kalpi hallucination part was so scary, for a minute I wonder if Raghav and Riya die... The songs was nice. Love RagNa happy ending or I should say their new beginning 😊 The entire story was outstanding. I love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinnapatel

šŸ‘beautiful charms di as beautiful as u .love this story so much .salute to ur thinking and writting .wow .so amazing .only that the hallucination part was so scary.for while i just cry feels like omg rgana will be seperated .thought for second is this story has sad ending like EMA .but not u made it perfect HUM DO HUMARE DO .thanks thanks and only thanks so many ...times .c u again with story .


Aww dear Kinna, you always charm me and stump me with your sweetest comments. šŸ¤— Muah. Thanks, thanks thanks a lot. 😃 Special comment and made me feel special. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg I thought the hallucination was rags and her dtrs ghosts and kalpi would die to but glad it was all ok in the end 😃


😃 😃 Well, it's good to hear that part seemed real. 😳 relieved actually. thanks a lot for commenting. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

šŸ‘ Awesome TS Dida... Nice... BTW whn will u update TMS , GW, TIB, ??? Waiting...


Thanks Saumya. :-* Shall try to update those soon too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'll try to reply others later today. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome TS dear...

Kalpi nearly thought that she lost her family n her immeginations was really scary...
U beautifully described...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mind blowing TSšŸ‘šŸ‘
Brilliantly writtenšŸ‘šŸ¼
Loved it !😳

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