The Ending: RagNa TS,Part-1 & Part-2, Page-1, 10/09/2015 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

It sound so trilling

It was really awesome t see kalpi journey n fear

I thought it will end up sad but happy their family is together

So beautiful

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires

Beautiful<3!

Originally posted by: pratibha2603

Sch a lovely TS

Shuru suru me tumne to dara hi diya tha.

Par last me jan me jan aa gai...

Thanks Charu,

😊

Originally posted by: kalbhavs

wohooo beautiful TS charu simply superb dear My God Bhavs! 😲 🤗 😃 ❤️ Such a beautiful comment. I am speechless. Means a lot that you appreciated it this way. 😳

its true if one determines strongly then nothing is impossible same with kalpi here n ragna do fit well in every story v take or u all pen it up

that's the speciality of ragna the r mesmerizing the mesmerize their viewer's or reader's with there charm n all thanks to all who r writn amazing stories on them u ppl really make them alive though they r not together now n hope they come soon to rule our hearts once again Hope so too 😃

coming to this story inner turmoil of kalpi makin her weak or say get fear of losin her world her husband her only family n there daughter the news of landslide made worry totally n scared too the journey now seem to b longest the erg to c her family hale n hearty was the only moto the convo btwn ragna was too filled lots of love the love they share is inseperable the r meant to b together forever may it b alive or dead n yes how can raghav leave they symbol of life alone as she is their symbol of love to prove that they r meant for eachother @Bold: well said. 👏

the songs which used to b scary now r soothin to kalpi givin her hope that nothing can happen to her family No but the songs were meant to trigger her fears more. 😳

the promise they made to eachother how can it tarnish how can b it happen

finally fightin with all the odds wen she reached to her destiny lil relief she got but main turmoil was ahead r her family safe r they fine n alive she was prayin to god that they shudnt go anywhere as they r used to go to their frnds house wen ever she was out of town for meetings her family used to go for dinner n all though she was sorry for her frnds but still hopin that her family dint go to there house Yes.

she was findin difficult to knock the door the fear of losin n the things that happen few mins back was runnin in her mind with gr8 courage she knocked the door fear was creepin on her again she knocked the door n this time she waited n silently prayed to god that she shud hear the someone to come n she cud hear bolt of door to open

n few mins she really heard the sound n the moment she found her life infront of her she really relieved to her husband her love her life her Raghav hale n hearty she wanted to touch him to feel him that he was really standin infront of her

only watchin her face gaze fixed on her n felt the same relief to find her safe too n thanked god for it

the confrontation was awesome one shud trust other in a relation ship n true no outsider can destroy its bond n shudnt allow any such doubts in mind wen love is immense in two souls

the moment kalpi saw her daughter was happy that her entire family is safe n moment riya hugged her she was sooo relieved n kissed her as she was missed the soft touches n craved that nothin shud happen to her also

confrontation of them being parents was sooo touchy really they upcomin blessin was a blessin or ray of light to show them path WOW! Superb comment and reading once again. 😃 ❤️

superb charu

sry any mistake in this comment wanted to pen up more but cudnt make it Don't say sorry Bhavs. You made me day and weeks. 😳 😃

Originally posted by: redpetal

Wonderful story. The hallucinations were awesome. For some moments I was afraid whether they are really dead. Writers efficiency👏

Originally posted by: premap

Excellent ! ' The Ending ' was a 'Beginning ' Of a True Love !! Superb ! Though you had given scary feelings in Pt.1 , with cold hands of Rags , for a moment I thought he was dead !!! What a relief ! Gosh, thanks.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I love the concept of this story Its so real at times. Sometimes it take a disaster for us to realized the importance of people in our lives and not take them for granted. And that's exactly what happen to Kalpi She was so caught up in other things in her life and not putting her family first Kalpi driving home in the fog was scary. Kalpi hallucination part was so scary, for a minute I wonder if Raghav and Riya die... The songs was nice. Love RagNa happy ending or I should say their new beginning 😊 The entire story was outstanding. I love it

Originally posted by: ragnafavour

Awesome TS dear...

Kalpi nearly thought that she lost her family n her immeginations was really scary...
U beautifully described...