Ragna ss: His obession - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both part r awesome dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
awesome...👏
more about kalpi...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice. Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved The Updates Neha jaan 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really interesting... wanna know what next...update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3 ( his obession)


It's around 6pm when they were returning from site visit ..


Sammy was driving and their car is stopped on a Red light ..
Raghav attantion was outside like everytime his thoughts went to his Akruti ...

When he saw her standing near a boy at some distance from Road.

R- akruti
He whisper and come outside seeing her playing with a boy of almost 5 years old .

He come outside before Sammy stop him as Red light are turned into green and his attantion was somewhere else he was crossing road without even giving it attantion .

Before he approched toward His Akruti who was playing with that child & busy in giving ballons to other . Sammy pull him back as a car was approching toward him...

Raghav strrugle to free himself but when he look back she went he see her going

R- akruti
He saw her going with that childs

S- Raghav u gone mad ?? Won't u see that the car was about to hit u ??
Ur Akruti died long back . SHE IS DEAD.

Raghav jerk his hand away grabbing his collor

R- SHE IS NOT DEAD U GOT IT !!

He say in a dangerosly cold voice

S- then where she is Raghav ? Why only u saw her . bcoz she is ur imagination . Nothing else !!

R- dare u to call her my imagination . I know she never broke her promises . She will be back for sure .

He say while jerking him and without listning anything further he went from their

R- U NEED TO BE BACK IN MY LIFE .. MY LOVE NEED TO BE BACK IN MY LIFE ... I KNOW U WON'T LEAVE ME . ... I'LL MAKE U COME IN MY LIFE AGAIN . JUST A CLUE AND THEN EVEN DEATH WON'T ABLE TO SEPRATE U FROM ME NO ONE ...


A- Di i don't want to go .. I want to play with u
abhay say while crossing his arms in front of his chest .
( a five year old kid an orpan used to live in orpahnage & love His di kalpi a lot)
K- ohh but u know na abhay i need to go . I'll come to meet u soon.

A- but that's cheating . Last time u said u spend ur all time with me but u take all with us !!

K- ok baba nxt time promise only u & me ...

Kalpana say while giving him a kiss on his cheeks
To which he kiss her back and ran to his room .
When warden come and say
W- kalpana u are spoling all with ur love . All of them missed u so much . They waited for weekends so that u came and meet them ...


Hugging warden to which she used to call aatya kalpana says

K- i've u to spoiled me with love aatya . So they must desreved to be pampered like me ..
Kalpi say which hugging her aatya tightly ...

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Do tell me if it's boring i know no Ragna even as 3 chappy end . But i need to set a background . Soon story will be focused on them:)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update neha first I thought it is akruti who is wd raghav but she is our kalpi...and raghav is obsessed wd her but how when he love akruti.argghhh...I don't like to write this as I just like ragna...so yes I just want to know that and how he married her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

Superb update neha first I thought it is akruti who is wd raghav but she is our kalpi...and raghav is obsessed wd her but how when he love akruti.argghhh...I don't like to write this as I just like ragna...so yes I just want to know that and how he married her...

hmm
i unnserstood ur question
raghav love akruti & akruti & kalpana look same.
he love akruti it's true . But now kalpana presence in his life
is his need:)
sry dear i read all parts of ur story still not commented
just hell busy with presentation .
but a superb job i must say
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm its awesome
Rag in search of akruti
Hmm kalpi n abhay cute
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting ! I think Rags needs a Psychiatrist's help before he is a danger to the society ! He is weird. Your update is like having a 'bland diet ' before the 'spicy' bits are 'served' ! Thanks.

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